Reviews For Reign O'er Me
Reviewer: RoxyGirl
Date: 08/30/05 18:18
Chapter: Prologue: Circles

This story is awesome, it was just like a book I couldn't put down! I can't wait for the conclusion chapters. I'm anxious to see how it's all going to turn out!

Reviewer: ratchet king
Date: 08/30/05 13:06
Chapter: Chapter 32: It's Hard

Man, this story rocks! Please post the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: Zaire
Date: 07/30/05 19:41
Chapter: Prologue: Circles

I've finished your story, and I find it to be absolutely wonderful. If there's any more stories like this here, I'll never stop coming back. Your writing itself is good, but your real strength is the ideas and thought behind it. Once an author has the ideas, and writes it down any way, the reader can be swept away. Which is what happened to me. I've been doing essentially nothing but reading your story for the last few hours. I await a new chapter almost as much as JK Rowling's next "official" Harry Potter book. Actually, I've noticed you've kept the characters perfectly in character. Well, except for Sirius' obsession with Muggle music and Dumbledore's slight lack of wisdom, or the seeming of wisdom. I love the new characters; Perenelle, Jamie, and Chris are very well written, designed, and executed. I hope you write more. Thank you, for sharing your great writing skills with such as me, an anyone else at MuggleNet. Signed, A Perhaps Overzealous But Nonethless Sincere Fan, ~ Zaire

Reviewer: padfootprongs4eva
Date: 07/27/05 14:45
Chapter: Chapter 31 - Had Enough

that was a totally awsome awsome awsome chapter. i love it how jamie and draco are not enimies. maybe that is the house unity the hat was talking about. please update as fast as possibe. your story is my favorite one on this site and it is hard waiting for the chapters. i do hope that the next chapter has some action in it though.

Reviewer: mad4sirius
Date: 06/14/05 10:08
Chapter: Chapter 30: Call Me Lightning

Nice job, here. I am impressed by the meeting with Hermione's parents, and the way Jaime put Draco on the spot. Nice work.

Reviewer: Sae
Date: 06/13/05 4:31
Chapter: Chapter 30: Call Me Lightning

Wow, you're constantly outdoing yourself, the meeting with Hermiones parents was really touching, I really liked the scene where Ginny tells the twins off, that was brilliant please keep updating!!! *10*

Reviewer: ellimayer
Date: 06/13/05 4:26
Chapter: Chapter 30: Call Me Lightning

i read this on your other site, as a preview, but i thought i'd review any way... ron is sooo sweet! and malfoy is sooo not! jaime needs to pull her head in, even if the sorting hat says kiss him!

Reviewer: ellimayer
Date: 06/11/05 6:12
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Dirty Jobs

you're so great. you've pulled of some very adventurous storylines so far, but i'm afraid you've over estimated your self (though i hope not) with dumbledore having, and neglecting to raise himself, a child. and also, where is dudley? haven't heard hide nor hair of him for too long...he's a great character to shape because he's mentioned so little...i want to here more about dudley!

Reviewer: ellimayer
Date: 06/10/05 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 28: Faith in Somthing Bigger

amazing, amazing...what else can you say? you're such a brilliant writer, and not just because of the plot, but the way you structure sentences and keep everyon ein character is rock!

Reviewer: ellimayer
Date: 06/10/05 21:11
Chapter: Chapter 27: Amazing Journey

you are so good! i missed reading this, it's been more than 13 weeks! i like that the 'kids' are getting clued in on the dark possibilities that surround them, it's great. nobody expects the spanish inquisition! with their pillows and comfy chairs...i love monty python! this has been a very good afternoon activity, reading more of your writing...on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Basta Granger
Date: 06/09/05 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 26: New Song

I think that was a truly spectacular song. It's amazing how the words all just fit - i mean, I would NEVER in my whole life be able to write a song at all, let alone such a good one. Anyway, it was a great chapter, and keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Basta Granger
Date: 06/08/05 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 24: Music Must Change

Awwww! That was a great ending of the chapter - (well, actually, the whole chapter was great, not only the end.) I'm a bit confused. I meant to ask you earlier, but, is Chris a women? If so, what does it stand for?

Author's Response: Chris is female. Nice, gender neutral name. I'm not sure anyone has worked up the nerve to ask what it's for.

Reviewer: Basta Granger
Date: 06/07/05 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 21: Let's See Action

I really enjoyed reading that chapter; it was just the right size and lots of different stories were happening at once. But what's with "Perenelle's French Speaking Thing"? I mean, in none of the earlier chapters did she speak french and where did she learn it?

Author's Response: Historically, Nicholas and Perenelle were french :) I'm revising some of the earlier chatpers to include a few more phrases.

Reviewer: iahp_mom
Date: 06/06/05 13:47
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Dirty Jobs

I thought I'd pop over here and review. I've been reading on your website because I can't stand the suspense. Brilliant. I love your OC's - they fit right in. and I love the whole plotline. Very nice 10/10

Reviewer: mad4sirius
Date: 05/30/05 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Dirty Jobs

Very interesting chapter...I don't know if I feel comfortable with Harry and Ginny sharing that much information with Cassandra or not...I'm not sure whether or not we should trust her. As for Jaime, I really appauld how you are creating her, she's a great character.

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 05/29/05 6:49
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Dirty Jobs

I've been reading your story faithfully at your website and let me tell you just how much i love it, i am positively addicted!

Reviewer: Sae
Date: 05/28/05 11:52
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Dirty Jobs

Brilliant!!!! please keep updating, i'm so curious what will further happen with Cassandra, and Prof Dumbledore. And calling Perenelle Grand-meré, what a fitting title! Well, I can't say anything else, this story is simply brilliant!!!

Reviewer: Basta Granger
Date: 05/25/05 21:10
Chapter: Chapter 15: Girl's Eyes

Hmm...that was a good chapter, but I don't undersand the thing about the girl with the plastic bag and duck tape poncho running away from the police.

Reviewer: Basta Granger
Date: 05/23/05 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 08: I've Had Enough

This was one AMAZING chapter, as you seem to be on e AMAZING writer! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: wolvy0
Date: 05/22/05 16:02
Chapter: Chapter 28: Faith in Somthing Bigger

I am one of those readers authors can not stand, I read several stories and never leave reviews. I have decided to change my evil ways and tell you how great of a job you are doing. I have enjoyed your story and can not wait for the update.

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