Reviewer: HP_Bookworm87
Date: 02/06/07 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Colin Plan

wow. ok, i know i have school and other stuff i need to get to but all i want to do is keep reading. good job!

Author's Response: Now, school, you gotta pay attention to school, I can in no way condone you skiving off classes just to read my stuff. But thank you anyway.

Reviewer: hpbh8r
Date: 02/05/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

yippi i

Author's Response: hehehe.. thanks.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/03/07 11:05
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

I wish there was a little more to the very last part, but this was quite good.
Thank you for your story.

Author's Response: You know, I think I know exactly what you are talking about, but at the same time, it's like so many other instances where people have said can you write more here, or what about making a scene explaining this, and something I've found is that if I try to write too much,... well, I just can't. If I don't feel a scene, I can't write it, you know? Thanks so much.

Reviewer: wishmyhairwasred
Date: 02/02/07 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

hi...your story was really good, and i didn't know it was done, or i would have read it WEEKS ago. but, i'm really disappointed that your story is rated Professors, because i honestly can't read it. but, though i am disappointed, i'm glad i was able to read this far and am glad i found your story. :D

Author's Response: Well, I'll tell you the same thing I've told everyone else. The professor rating is for violence, and it's a long story, and the bits that earn it its rating are relatively small, so I would still try and read the final part and if it gets to be too much, I"m very sorry. Hope to see you for the final part...

Reviewer: Suhaibk93
Date: 01/27/07 14:24
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

I love your writing! I'll be sure to be around for the next fic you write!

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much, I truly appreciate it, and I hope to do right by you when the next fic comes around.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 01/23/07 11:19
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Rook... as always, Brilliant chapter and wonderful end to part two. The ending sequence was absolutely beautiful... and perfect. It told the end with just the right amount of emotion to portray the gravity of finally moving, off away from the comfortable hogwarts, to the real world beyond.
As far as the next story, I look forward to it with undying anticipation. The little hint of it made my imagination explode with the possibilities. I can not wait!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll answer your email in more detail later bro. Kinda sick now, and only answering my reviews because I'm too antsy to be chained to my bed with nothing to do. As for that taste you spoke of, well, I'm hoping to start off the next story with a bang... or at least a thick wet choking noise. mwuhahahaha.

Reviewer: Nutters4Potter
Date: 01/20/07 23:17
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

I really enjoyed this story. It flowed so well, I couldn't stop reading. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you, and I hope to see you for the next and final part.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 01/20/07 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 7: Respite

This was my favourite chapter so far. I read you responses to the previous reviews about not liking it because you think you could have done better, but my advice is not to worry about it. It was a very good chapter and none of it was poor in any way shape or form. I think you dealt with some very emotional stuff well and although this chapter might not have had quite the same tearjerker effect on me that some of the others have, it was still very good. Ratbone is turning out to be a most intriguing character! I enjoyed all the backstory you gave him, it's really fleshed him out in my mind. I am also interested to see that Lupin is concerned about his behaviour... I sense a huge plot twist coming on! Your Harry/Ginny is perfect as is the Ron/Hermione and I liked the bit about the brooms. Very good!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, the bit about the brooms, I think that would have been more effective as a sight gag as opposed to written, but in the end I think it came off okay. In retrospect, considering the feedback I've recieved, I guess I can't hate this chapter so much. Thanks again.

Reviewer: babycakez07
Date: 01/20/07 17:00
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

wow.
i love this trilogy and i can't wait to start reading part 3.you have a real writing talent and i hope you put it to good use,not only here,but in your own original writings also.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. The intro and prologue to part III is in the queue, but I won't start writing the story in full until after february tenth. As for my talent, thank you ever so much, and I do plan on non fanfic ventures once I've finished part III, but all things in due time. Thank you again.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 01/20/07 12:52
Chapter: Chapter 4: Rathius

Oo-er. She really is a nasty piece of work isn't she? I aminexplicably drawn to Ratbone, he's an absolute jewel of a character. His initial description reminded me of Voldermort but he's obviously very different. I am really enjoying this story, especially the little Harry/Ginny moments. Your dialogue is excellent and the characters are consistent. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you. You know, one thing I don't regret in the slightest at all is the introduction of Rathius. Man I would have never guessed he would be as popular as he has become. All I gotta say about him is stay tuned, there's more to come.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 01/20/07 12:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: Stupid

That made me smile. You write a teenage girl surprisingly well for a guy , should I be worried? ;-). It was wel written and nicely funny, I liked the way Ginny was stroppy and calling everything stupid. In normal circumstances I would have to wait to read the next chapter but luckily for me it's already up! >>>goes to hit next button>>>

Author's Response: You know, no one has ever put it that bluntly, and now I'm worried asbout how well I wrote a teenage girl. Sigh. There went my masculinity. Oh well. Thanks.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/12/07 3:26
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

I can't wait to read Part III! I was furious at Professor Ratbone for being so "evil" during exams and also so rude to GInny but at the end, it was like a happily ever after story. I can't believe he actually helped Ginny and I felt so sorry for Colin at certain times. At the end of your fanfic, I was glad that everything was great. Colin with Luna, Harry with Ginny, Romilda and Cho in huge trouble. lol :)

Author's Response: hehehe... Come on now, haven't you read enough of me to know: NEVER TRUST MY HAPPY ENDINGS?!?!?!!? As for Rathius, I just think he's a largely misunderstood kinda guy, that's all. Thanks.

Reviewer: Isadora
Date: 01/10/07 5:14
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Great! Fantastic! Wonderful! I loved your story from the very beginning, but as I read on I noticed how your writing matured, and became better and better. Keep on writing, you are really talented! I'm looking forward to part III.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah, I think I grew a lot as a writer throughout the course of this story, and I'm very glad that I wrote it. As for Part III, I got the intro and prologue in the queue, but I won't start writing the real thing until after feb tenth.

Reviewer: missweezey
Date: 01/07/07 23:42
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

I must say, I have followed this series for a while after I found it. I am sooo sad to see the end of it for me, because I am not sure if I can read it because of the Professors ratings. Have you considered posting a condensed or less violent version for those of us who can't read because of the rating? That would really nice. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for following the series, I truly appreciate it. Unfortunately, I can't do a condensed version of the whole story, so I guess for everyone to know how things turn out, you'll have to start reading the final part, and if it's not something you will be able to read, then let me know and I can maybe not do a condensed version, but at least answer some questions... We'll have to see. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Bane of Severus
Date: 01/07/07 13:14
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

This is a really great story. I'm at a loss for words to describe it but....wow. Lately I've been logging on just to see if you've updated Epilogues and if you hadn't I'd just log back off and go take a nap and check again an hour later. There are 284 pages in Parts 1 and 2 put together on Microsoft Word. Just keep doing what you're doing on part 3(I can't wait). The same goes for Hpmaniac666. She's doing a great job Beta reading. One more thing. If you have time, could you read and review the poem I have posted? Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you. Okay first things first, I make no promises to reading and reviewing, especially considering that lately I haven't even really had time to write myself or even respond to my own reviews in a timely manner, but I promise I will try. Thank you for the page count as well, I really appreciate it. So if I put the first two parts together that's full on novel length, and I guess that works since they're so close together, so meshed in theme and tone, and all the rest of that stuff, wow. Awesome. I promise to try and start work on Part III as soon as I can, and to be as consistent as possible, but aside from the prologue, I'm not going to start writing III until after February 10th. Sorry about that. Thanks for everything, and I'll see you for part III.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 01/06/07 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Hey,
I've read your story throughout and have absolutely loved it! I think you really are such a talented writer! This was actually the first story i read on MNFF (I've no idea how i got here) and everything else has been compared to it. Trully amazing writing! Keep it up!
Phily :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm honored. I can only hope that I continue to meet your expectations in the final part of Epilogues.

Reviewer: critmo
Date: 01/06/07 10:07
Chapter: Chapter 2: Surprises

You don't believe in making things easy for them, do you? Nasty problem you created there and there's another one, they have not addressed yet: why, the ..., didn't he tell her earlier, but left her to worry her head off?

Author's Response: Oh no... no... Things are definitely not going to be easy for them this year, not in the slightest. As for the problem you brought up, I just wrote it that way for dramatic effect, but I guess Harry just kinda wanted his presence at Hogwarts to be a surprise. Lame excuse, yeah, but there you go. Thanks man.

Reviewer: critmo
Date: 01/05/07 12:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: Stupid

Okay, I think I've read this one already. On to the next chapter.

Author's Response: yeah. I think the last chapter posted on SIYE before I deleted my account was the fifth or maybe sixth, can't remember.

Reviewer: astro_wizkid
Date: 01/05/07 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

i've read about all your work and i must say that your writting has matured and envolved with each new chapter you submit. You have everything in epligues, i mean, action, romance, suspence, you leave your readers wanting more and more! your creation of the DADA prof (i find) is a kind of character i can see j.k developping. you've definatly taken her characters and formed them to fit your image! Keep up the great work and i can't wait to start reading part 3!

Author's Response: Thank you. I mean it. To say I'mgood is one thing, but to say I'm constantly improving, I think that's even higher praise as that's really a big part of why I do this. And I think I kind of agree with you. I mean I compare this latest story with Right Here, and don't get me wrong, I kinda like Right Here, but there are so many more things in RH that make me cringe when I reread it than there are in Epi pII, you know what I mean? I'm glad you enjoyed Rathius, and trust me we still got quite a bit of him left to deal with. As for part III, I have the prologue done, but I'm not going to write anymore of part iii until AFTER feb 10th due to an exam I have to prepare for. Thanks.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 01/05/07 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

I love this story! You write so well! That was the best ending EVER! Yeah, I am a bit of the romance person, but I WILL read the third part, just because I know it will be greatly written! I am adding this to my favourites.

Author's Response: *grin* You know, I appreciate that, and I can't wait for everyone to read Part III. Honestly, I really want to see everyone's reaction to it, so even though I'm a little delayed in writing it, I'm still excited. Thank you.

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