Reviewer: madam_rosmerta
Date: 07/15/07 19:48
Chapter: Chapter 4: Rathius

Oh drama, i love it, catfight!catfight!

Author's Response: I apparently do too! Hehe... thank you so much.

Reviewer: madam_rosmerta
Date: 07/15/07 19:26
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lessons

when is there going to be some action? ah well patience is rewarded.

Author's Response: Yes it typically is. Again, you've already seen some "action" but I think I have some other "action" that you probably won't see coming!

Reviewer: madam_rosmerta
Date: 07/15/07 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 2: Surprises

Oh i hope it gets steamy later *smiles wickedly*, such an awesome story!

Author's Response: Thank you, and I think you know the answer to that hope by now!

Reviewer: madam_rosmerta
Date: 07/15/07 19:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Surprises

Oh i hope it gets steamy later *smiles wickedly*, such an awesome story!

Reviewer: orange_crusher
Date: 07/15/07 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Not sure what I did wrong... that was a review for the whole story, not Chp. one only

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry about it, happens all the time, and I'm used to it! thank you by the way!

Reviewer: orange_crusher
Date: 07/12/07 0:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: Stupid

Awwww... Yeah!! Harry and Ginny have such a rocky relationship in these fics, so I'm glad it all worked out:)

You really are a great author, and I have enjoyed all of your stories. If you don't mind my asking, will you still write fanfics after Deathly Hallows? I hope so, since Jo has said she will not be writing any prequels about Lily/James and the Marauders. *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*

Oh yeah- my name is Anna! Great choice!

Author's Response: Hey Anna! Well, yes, I at least intend to finish the fic I'm currently working on, and at the rate things are going, I should probably be writing into Christmas time before I'm done there. Then I have another project that I'm about eighty percent sure that I'm actually going to write. It will essentially be a kind of companion piece to the Epilogues Trilogy, focusing more on the Ratbone Brothers and the Weasley, Potter, and Longbottom boys. i also intend to throw in a missing scene or scene from an alternative view point from the three epilogue stories in there as well. Now, I hate to disappoint, but I'm firmly avowing that I will not write any history stories, nor do I intend to write any more stories that take place within the canon time frame using any of the main characters from the books. I have a lot of reasons for this, but you know, it's mainly because I have my stories in my head, and I hate stepping on JKR's toes.

Reviewer: zoaster
Date: 06/29/07 7:58
Chapter: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates

lmao....that kinda had me in fits...though I don't know if that was meant to be funny...and I'm just weird. I love this story so far, and all previously too! looking forward to continuing reading!! ~Zoe

Author's Response: Eek, it would depend on which chapter y ou say had you in fits. The review was for chapter nine which I don't recall writing to be terribly funny, but then, there you go. Anyway, thank you so much, and hopefully I can get some new chapters up for Part III by the time you get there.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 06/11/07 18:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Stupid

Hello there, I've decided that (as I only have a little longer left until summer holidays) that I would re-read this before moving onto part three. :) This was actually the first story I stumbled across on MNFF, or indeed any Harry Potter fan fiction, and I have no idea how I found this but I'm exceedingly glad I did! Last time it never occured to me to review each chapter in turn but I feel that you may be hearing a lot more from me this time around.

Now, to the chapter... Perfect beginning in my opinion. It tells the history of the past few weeks in an easy way so it doesn't seem like the reader becomes bogged down in the re-telling of past events. It also gets the you right into the middle of Ginny's situation and sets up the story in a firm way. The little cliffhanger is just enough to make you wonder; although I sort of know what's going to happen. ;)

I have nothing to say on a con-crit front to be honest. Very good! I'll see you at chapter 2 as soon as I can get there!

Phily :)

Author's Response: HAHAH! WOW! YES! I love reviews, and I will not in the slightest complain should you choose to review every chapter here! I'm glad you liked the beginning, and I think this opening chapter at least the concept of it, was kind of the inspiration for the whole story as you see it. Granted, it takes a much more angsty twist not too far in, but everything I initially wanted the story to be is right here. And really, there's not much else to say as you pretty much did an absolutely succinct and wonderful job of identifying the chapter as it is. Thank you so much, and I'll see ya for the next one!

Reviewer: poshini
Date: 05/25/07 3:01
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Hey i just did finish reading both part1 ans 2 and cant wait for part 3. you are very good writer. i only just got an account in this website and love to know if you have started writing part 3 as I'm not very familiar with this website!! Keep up the grate job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you oh so much. Yeah, I'm actually eight chapters into part III, and I should be finishing up the ninth today or tuesday, but considering part III is going to be over twenty chapters, that means there's still a ways to go. Since you're new, here are a couple of tips for ya. For one, when you get to any of my stories, you can click on my name, and that will bring you to my page which will have all of my stories listed. And if you find you do like part III, but don't want to bother with checking in every day for a new update, just either set me as one of your favorite authors, or set Part III as one of your favorite stories, and you will get a nice handy email update everytime one of my chapters is validated. Thank you again, and I hope to see ya for Part III!

Reviewer: MandrakeMs
Date: 05/03/07 15:27
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future


Author's Response: I dunno about perfect, exactly. But thank you anyway.

Reviewer: MandrakeMs
Date: 05/03/07 15:27
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future


Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 04/30/07 19:15
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

It took me longer than I expected to finish this one. I had kids to pick up and errands to run, but I was impressed with how easy it was to fall right back into the rhythm of the story. The character of Rathius is a really good one and even though you didn't answer all the questions about him, you fleshed him out pretty well. Good Job. Off to read part 3 now.

Author's Response: Wow, okay, you're moving through these stories very quickly. At this rate, you should be caught up with me by tomorrow! All I can say is that when you are reading all that is posted of part 3 (I'm not even a third of the way through writing it yet), you should go and read Everybody Doesn't. Anyway, thank you so much. You know, with Part II, that's when I really started to pick up a lot of readers, and I knew that story wasn't meant to be read in one sitting, so I can imagine that being the easiest of my stories to walk away from and come back to. it's definitely the first story I wrote where I was actively thinking about rhythm, not just in the midst of a chapter, but from one chapter to the next. I'm glad you mentioned Rathius too, as he is a very integral part of my stories. He is by far my favorite original character (with maybe the exception of Dennis... you'll learn who that is in Part III). But sadly, Rathius is also a character I intend to leave as a mystery at least until after Part III is finished. Well, thanks for keeping with these stories, and I'll see ya at part III!

Reviewer: HGLadyy
Date: 04/29/07 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Why leave me hanging like that?! That was so well written I couldnt leave my computer!
And the romance
the fluff!
adn Harry could you know, wait, until it was the right moment!
Hes no normal, hormonal teenage boy in this story, and it makes it so much cuter!
Oh and the Drama!
that was so totally rad!
it was ah-mazing!

Author's Response: hehehe... you know, I've received some criticism on my choice to have Harry choose not to go through with it right then and there. Initially, I opted to do that because it just seemed as though it would be wrong to do that, you know? In school, and I dunno, it just gave me a creepy feeling had the outcome been different. On the other hand, after I made that decision, and I continued to write it, it felt more in character, more like Harry, so I'm glad that my prudence resulted in what I like to think of as good characterization.

Reviewer: ravenclenian
Date: 04/20/07 22:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: Stupid

Simply put this is an awesome series and very original. The author is a great writer.

Author's Response: The author would like to thank you very much. He appreciates it immensely. he also wants to make sure that you read part III! And he wants to thank you again.

Reviewer: BatBogeyHexes
Date: 04/08/07 10:45
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Loved this second epilouge. I loved especially the use of characters like Colin and Luna to fill in the gaps around Ginny when Harry's not there. Paul was also a great character. What I mean is this story could have been written about H and G with no minor characters or OCs but it was much better this way and quite good.

Author's Response: You know, I gotta say I disagree with you there. I don't think this story could possibly be written without the secondary cast; they not only create the conflict and plot, but they give the story more texture. Sure, texture is not vital to story telling, but then neither is any other kind of device. Sure, Romeo and Juliet could have been told "A couple of crazy kids fell in love with each other and then killed themselves," but it's not nearly the same. Thank yo for the review, and I'll catch you at part III

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/03/07 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

I have no idea why i haven't already reviewed this as I read it ages ago, but just dropping a few lines to say I loved it and I'm going straight to part 3!

Author's Response: You know I was just beginning to wonder where you went. I'm glad you liked the rest of the story, as I mention, it's a pretty important one for me, and you can't imagine how happy I am to see it gain such popularity. Anyway, we've already started talking about Part III, so it's kinda pointless to muddle through this story any longer. Thank you!

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/03/07 14:57
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Hehe! I just re-read this last chapter again and thought I would leave a review for you! I love this! It makes me grin and it reminded me of what a fabulous writer you are! I have been lagging behind on the reading lately but I will definately get to part III. Although, I would like to re-read part two first! :)

Thanks for such a great story!

Phily :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Phily. I'm ever so glad you liked it. I think the scariest chapter to write for any story is the last one because from there on, you don't get any second chances. You can't write yourself back in the reader's good graces after that, so you better make sure you end, not necessarily on a good note, but at least on a satisfying one. To be called a fabulous writer is, truly, very flattering, so I guess I did something right. It is also, of course, very high praise to be told that the story you have written must be reread... There are very few books that I read more than once, and these books are such a part of me, that I can only imagine that anyone who is willing to reread something has been touched by that story in someway, so, there you go. Please do reread this story again, I don't mind, I can wait for you to get to part III, and in all truth, I think maybe it's for the best. There are a few VERY important details that are buried in Part II, and being rather familiar with that story may give you a leg up when you move on to part III. Anyway, whichever way you choose, I thank you very much, and i can't wait to see you at Part III.

Reviewer: dramaqueen88
Date: 03/20/07 0:03
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Love you story! Can't wait to start on Part 3!

Author's Response: HEY! THank you and I can't wait to read your reaction to it! Thank you!

Reviewer: threeh
Date: 03/06/07 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

Very well done!!! I enjoyed all your stories. Keep up the good work. Thanks for an awesome read.


Author's Response: thank you very much, and I hope you'll stick around for part III.

Reviewer: HP_Bookworm87
Date: 02/08/07 1:13
Chapter: Chapter 12: Past, Present, and Future

whoa. so this story took control of my life for the better part of the last 3 days. enthralling! good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, hey, just think of it this way, you got off easy, this story took control of my life for the better part of six months or so...

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