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Name: mrsdan (Signed) · Date: 10/28/06 13:37 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
Holy Crap!!!

Author's Response: HAHAHA nice reaction.

Name: hpmaniac666 (Signed) · Date: 10/28/06 10:38 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
You bitch, I cant belive you brought back Cho Chang. I also cant believe you called Proffesor McGonogal 'madame' when i told you not to, you goon. Honestly, why bother having a beta..............lmao I'm only kidding. I love you. Love this. As always. And get me more of chapter ten, my life is obviously nothing other than beta reading for you. hehe. love you muchly babe. xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Author's Response: Bitch? I'm so hurt. You know I love you, even if you can't hang with the cliffie I put in there for you. As for madame? meh... I'll fix it when I go to do the series remastering I keep talking about. Love you baby.

Name: hpgirl_91 (Signed) · Date: 10/28/06 2:01 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
Woah, major plot twist. What is going to happen with this? Chuck brooms? What exactly is Ginny refering to in this? Great chapter!

Author's Response: Come on now, you guys know I don't give away that kind of thing. I dinnae write the cliffies just to spoil em before they're resolved. As for chucking brooms, towards the end of book five, Ginny caught the golden snitch in the last quidditch match of the season, and Cho was so distraught that she threw her broom. Thank you ever so much.

Name: magical_hannah (Signed) · Date: 10/28/06 0:37 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
awww come on! MORE PLEASE!? whats going on with harry and ginny? i hate this cliff hanger! its well written tho'! keep it coming...

Author's Response: HAHAHA... Don't worry, you'll definitely have more, trust me. I'm so close to the finish line right now, i just need to push through a little more, and I'm not quitting. Thank you for the review, and I'll see you next chapter!

Name: Edgware (Anonymous) · Date: 10/27/06 22:27 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
Nice job. This is getting into a very big plot. Very exciting! Ill be sure to make sure to catch any new updates.

Author's Response: Outstanding, I really appreciate it. So far I'm very excited about chapter ten. i'd say I'm about a third way through the writing of it, and I'm pretty happy with what I have so far. The scene I'm currently writing is more difficult than I expected it to be, but that's okay, I know I'll pull it off. Anyway, I really appreciate the review, and I can't wait to see you at chapter ten.

Name: astro_wizkid (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 21:09 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
Cho? You actually brought back cho? That was totalty unexpected! Wicked Chapter as always!

Author's Response: Ayuh... I actually brought back cho. I mean, why not? I think about the only thing I have yet to do is bring Voldemort back to life (oops, damn, well there goes that plot line). And there's the proverbial kitchen sink... Nah, I'll leave Hogwarts plumming... plumbing... okay, very irritated that I can't spell that word. I'll leave Hogwarts' taps alone. But Cho... yeah, I have something very very special planned for her.

Name: Althal (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 20:08 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
Nice! your writing style is something quite beautiful to behold It's complex style makes me want to remain reading it. However it does raise the question as to how much of what you have writen has happened to you or someone you know...

Author's Response: Funnily enough, none of this has really happened to me. Even taking out the magical bits. I'm very glad. I'm emotional enough with mundane stuff, having a chaotic love life like this would probably put me straight into a loony bin. Anyway, thank you ever so much, I"m very honored you think so highly of my writing, and I really do hope you'll continue on reading my stories as it's really such a pleasure to write them.

Name: harry_kissed_ginny (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 20:07 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
lurving it!

Name: harry_kissed_ginny (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 19:59 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
lurving it!

Author's Response: Ever so glad for that. Thank you.

Name: Ginzig (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 18:58 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
Oh no. It just got worse, much worse. Cho Chang that evil cow. You just can't let them have any peace, can you? I do feel very bad for Colin. I'm sad that their friendship is now over because of that. Rathbone is horrible. I feel very bad for Ginny right now. Great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: One would think that I would learn my lesson eventually and copy all my reviews before I get timed out. OKay, what did I say? I laughed evilly, then I moved on to telling you no of course I won't let them have peace... wouldn't be much of a story if I did. I'm glad you feel sad for Colin, but I may still have a surprise or two regarding him up my sleeve, so don't dive for the tissues quite yet. And as for Ratbone himself... you'll just have to wait and see.

Name: Hp_4_eva (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 18:32 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates
Holy Shit. CHO CHANG. TRANSFIGURATION TEACHER. Two words that are scary in the same sentence together. But it's good, I'm glad that you finally diched Colin, he had it long coming. But I'm rally scared about the Cho thing. But keep it up, i really like this story. Plus, it's one of the ones that gets updated most often. I like that part of it too.

Author's Response: Wow, I believe that's the first time I've ever had a "Holy Shit" in a review. Dinnae get me wrong, I'm grateful, I think that was the exact effect I was looking for when I did it. So rock on. To be frightfully honest, when I first started this story, I think I had more planned for Cho, but the thing is, I think it would just be dragging on, so we're not going to see nearly as much of Cho as I initially intended, but, what you will see of her... Let's just say, I don't intend to skimp. Something I've noticed is how much people malign Colin in this. That's not something I ever intended to be dead honest. I've always kind of imagined Colin as a kind of tragic hero in this. But whatever. All I've got to say is let's not be too quick to either count him out, nor think that he still doesn't have a part or two to play in this.

Author's Response: Oh, and thanksfor the review.

Name: Silver Whisper (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 4:36 · For: Chapter 9: Enemies at the Gates

I would just like to say that i LOVE your stories: Epilogues!! You have captured the personality of each character perfectly! And your writing style is very similar to JK Rowling's, so everything you write is absolutly believable and I reckon if JK was to write a post Hogwarts series, Epilogues would be it.

So yeah, well done. I am looking foreward to the next installment very much, actually, i am itching for it *itches*

Epilogues = Love

It is awesome!! Keep up the good work, and i am severly looking foreward to Part 3.


Author's Response: Thank you ever so much. I consider it an honor to be compared to JK Rowling, and I truly appreciate that you are feeling what I'm doing with these characters. As for the next installment, hopefully you don't have that much longer to wait. As you know chapter nine is in queue, and it's been there for a bit, so it should be ready for you soon. As I just told another reviewer, chapter ten may take a little bit to get to ya as it's a long chapter, but I'm hoping that it's worth the wait. As for part III. First, we got two more chapters after nine before Part II is over. Then I'm considering taking a small break to go through and "remaster" all of my fics: fix some grammatical errors and minor nitpicks that all of you have provided me over time, as well as update the author's notes and such, so that all of my works run together much more smoothly. Then it's on to Part III which I guess I'll talk about for a little bit right here. Part III will be VERY different from anything anyone has read from me yet. I'm going to give you guys a little taste of the kind of thing to expect in chapter ten, but that is truly just the tip. It's going to have lots of gore, lots of suspense, lots of violence, and hopefully some spookiness too. Also, we're fast forwarding time a little bit, about sixteen years. All the same, you still need to pay attention to what's going on now in Part II because trust me, characters and events you may think are small and insignificant now are going to play a much bigger role later on. Also, some canon characters I plan on bringing back include Kingsley Shacklebolt, and Neville Longbottom. If you've read Everybody Does It, we're also going to see a much younger Dennis Weasley, and Tom Potter. Okay, so, that's about enough of that. Thank you so much for the review, and I'll see ya for chapter nine.

Name: mrskimberleyweasley (Signed) · Date: 10/26/06 6:10 · For: Chapter 8: The Ball
this story is great! i have really enjoyed al of your stories actually. i just have one criticism... PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!
i really liked this chapter, i just feel sorry for colin because he knows he can neer have ginny. I thought for one terrible momet there that you were going to say ginny had feelings for colin, but no, that coulnd't happen. Harry and Ginny Forever.

Author's Response: My answer to your criticism: Chapter Nine is in queue, and ten is being written. Also, there may be some wait for chapter ten. I've really felt like I've kind of let a few things go by the wayside in my writing lately, so I'm really taking a lot of time with chapter ten, and focusing on detail. On top of that, I've got a very difficult scene ahead to write, and I want to make sure I get it dead perfect. I think people expect a certain standard in emotional writing from me, and I want to make sure that I nail it on the head. As for Colin... In a way I was giving Ginny SOME feelings for him, I think what we see from Ginny was the realization all in one shot that he wasn't just the same old hyperactive Colin that is her best friend, but also a male, and actually a rather good looking male. Not love at first sight, really, but more along the lines of, "Hey, where'd that come from?" Anyway, hope to see you at chapter 9!

Name: Bane of Severus (Signed) · Date: 10/25/06 19:24 · For: Chapter 1: Stupid
This is the best fan fic I've read thus far. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Even though you didn't do the whole soundtrack thing in Part II, I think the song "Falls Apart" by Hurt would be appropriate for Parts I and II. Again the whole plot is great. So um......more please.

Kilroy was Here.......

Author's Response: Wow... Thanks! I really appreciate it muchly. Chapter nine is in queue, and I'm working on chapter ten, but ten's going to be very long. Basically, I feel that lately I've been skimping on some detail and not really immersing myself in the writing and I think that maybe why I've felt less than satisfied with what I've been producing here in part II. So for chapter ten I'm going back to basics and really just going to focus on some good solid writing for a change. As for the song suggestions... I didn't do it with part II for two reasons. One being that there really wasn't a whole lot of participation in Part I, and the other was because when I first started writing Part II, it was supposed to be a romantic comedy and not the angst fest it turned into, and I really didn't know how to do a soundtrack for a romantic comedy, to be honest. I will say this though, either when I finish this story or when I finish Part III, I plan on "remastering" all of my stories, and what I may do is just build a soundtrack for every single one (except of course Right Here, which is a songfic and therefore has a built in soundtrack). Thank you so much for the review, and I can't wait to see you for the next chapter.

Name: Hope_543 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/06 5:18 · For: Chapter 8: The Ball
Uhm, Kyle, because I'm your stalker and you're currently around-but-not-around on msn......I think that Professor McGonagall is called Madam by people outside of Hogwarts, because she's a renowned and important witch...I might have got that wrong, but that's what I picked up in my five million rereadings...just to let you know, you probably didn't need this

Oh, yeah, reviewing, uhhh, very good chapter, very good story, no longer very good series....can't wait for nine

Loves you xxxx

Author's Response: Thanks, yeah, Charlotte backs you up, so I was wrong, and I think I owe someone an apology. I'm not changing it yet though. Making changes on this site is really an ordeal because for some reason whenever you go in to change something, the formatting goes all wonky, and it's just bad news. So I'm planning on just doing one big revision when the Epilogues are complete, and we'll see how that goes. Love you too hun, talk at ya later.

Name: KAM (Signed) · Date: 10/21/06 12:40 · For: Chapter 8: The Ball
Love it so far. Don't keep us waiting. :)

Author's Response: Chapter nine is in queue. Hopefully that one will be enjoyed by all. But I must warn that chapter ten hasn't even been started yet, and I think it's going to be a long one so again, sorry if I take too long. Thanks

Name: itsnachocheese (Signed) · Date: 10/19/06 17:38 · For: Chapter 8: The Ball
ooh, that's cold....loved it!

Author's Response: hehe, thank you very much.

Name: amy14 (Signed) · Date: 10/19/06 10:24 · For: Chapter 8: The Ball
I liked the chapter very well and I just can't wait for the next one. But I noticed this thing when I re-read it, Professor McGonaggall is never called 'Madame'.

Author's Response: Are you quite sure about that? I'll double check but all the same, I've had better nitpicks. For one, it's a rather common address for women whom one respects so while she may have never been called that in the books, it wouldn't be impossible for someone to call her that once. It's not like I misspelled her name, is it? But again, I'll double check, though I think you may be wrong. Aside from that, thanks for the review.

Author's Response: AH HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE PERSON I OWE AND APOLOGY TOO... I'm sorry, though I'll probably not fix it until much later.

Name: mori_mac (Signed) · Date: 10/18/06 14:43 · For: Chapter 8: The Ball
:O !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: You alright? I'll take this as some sort of compliment. Thank you so much.

Name: hpgirl_91 (Signed) · Date: 10/18/06 13:54 · For: Chapter 8: The Ball
Woah, intense. I have to say that this was one of my favorite chapters yet. I like the subtle build up that has been happening between Ginny and Colin and I liked how you handled it. I can't wait to see the conversation between Colin and Ginny. Great job, I loved it!

Author's Response: You know, everyone's saying they can't wait to see the conversation between Ginny and Colin. I'm petrified. When I was mapping this story in my head, it was always we get to this point, and then ginny and colin talk and then we move on. I go to some extremes, and I hope it comes off well, but we'll see thank you so much, I really am hoping to finish this chapter soon.

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