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Name: ally1123 (Signed) · Date: 12/19/06 9:28 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Absolutely wonderful! I loved the chapter and was a bit scared there when Romilda saw them. But thank goodness for the brilliant minds of Harry and Ginny. Here I was thinking that they were going to confess to the whole thing. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I especially want to find out what in the world is going on with Ratbone.

Name: harry_kissed_ginny (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 21:29 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
omg. wow. this is such a good story, i love it

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad.

Name: MagicalMaddie331 (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 21:03 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Aww, that was a nice chapter. You did a very good job on inserting plot twists and emotions that correctly fit the story line. I don't read much fanfiction, so I don't know if there's much of this out there, but I've never read a fanfiction with Colin and Luna. It fits very nicely and was sweet. Hopefully Harry will get himself out of trouble before the end of the story. I'll be a little sad to know the last chapter is coming up, but I look forward to the next sequal. Brilliant work, Grimmrook.

Author's Response: Hehehe. You know I was hoping people would like that I put Colin and Luna together. Tha t was something that was down from the very beginning. Yeah, I just posted the last chapter, and it's kinda bittersweet. Thanks for the review.

Name: paulinagirl13 (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 19:52 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
oh wow this is one of the best ones yet...it kept butterflies in my stomach the entire time i was reading...i can't wait for the last chapter...please finish soon

Author's Response: Thank you... And I did...

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 17:50 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift

Not a bad secondary cliffhanger that you squeezed out there. Nice!

So, is Harry out of trouble? And is the final chapter submitted? ;)

Author's Response: Wow, I know I wrote a decent chapter when you don't have a criticism for me. Thanks, yeah, I squeezed that cliffie right out of my... er yeah. And yeah, I'll at least let out that Harry is out of trouble. Thanks for the review.

Name: Katie Potter (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 15:40 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
very good cant wait for the last chapter

really happy that harry wasnt cheating on ginny by the way :) :)

and the cliffie... when romilda vane walks in on them???

Author's Response: Bingo! You got it. I had to write this the way I did because I wanted to see things come around full turn, you know? Thanks for the review.

Name: mrsdan (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 14:45 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
What is up eith that Professor? He drives me nuts! I'm gonna go back to read One Good Day and cry again, K?

Author's Response: HAHAHA.... Okay, thanks for that. AS for Rat, sorry, but it's a LONG TIME before you'll know what is up with Ratbone.

Name: Indigoenigma (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 12:18 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Excellent chapter!
The plot was very strong throughout the entire thing so...I suppose you're forgiven for the ages it took to update :D

Author's Response: Whew... thanks for that, I was worried. Actually I was, I didn't want people to think that I had abandoned the story. Thanks for the review.

Name: AurorGirl101 (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 11:52 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
“Oh,” Colin said, sobering up a bit. He gave a little half shrug, and simply stated, “Professor Ratbone.”

I died at that part. There was so much drama, I felt like a day at high school or something. It was great. I was so upet at the last cliffie, I didn't know what to do. I was so excited to see you updated!!! I hope you update soon! I'm starting to worry about this Ratbone guy..... Can he be trusted? Great Chappie!!!

Author's Response: You know, it's this kind of chapter that makes me kind of nervous because it's so plot driven which really kinda isn't my strongest thing, you know? But I'm glad it worked, and the last chapter is in queue. As for Ratbone, I just can't say.

Name: threeh (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 8:21 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
I absolutely love your stories. Enjoyed the newest chapter!!

Keep those updates coming and thanks for the wonderful read!!!
Happy Holidays!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and you have a great holiday too.

Name: ghst1941 (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 5:54 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
10/10 totally worth the wait... loved how it began and ended... keep up the good work ..... looking forward to the next update

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it, and the next update should be through soon, hopefully before they close for christmas.

Name: Adelfore Flamell (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 1:40 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
!!!!!!! Wait! the chapter is over already!! Thats not possible! But... But... I just started!

Hehehe. Brilliant as always Grimm. I must say... some things were predictable, like Cho and Harry kissing, Harry finding a way to get back to Ginny (i think you could have put more into the part with Ginny figureing out that Harry wasnt lying... i just thought that was awful fast for her to "know" he was telling the truth...) and Romilda catching them.... but the end with Colin, That was downright fantastic! I cant believe he came out of nowhere to aid them all.... and the fact that he is with Luna of all people, well that will help Ginny out a whole lot! But Ratbone... jeeze he is still pulling the strings for everyone in the end. I really want to know what his deal his. What a great character! Brilliant brilliant! Cant wait for the end to come!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, some of it was predictable, but this was the last major conflict of the story, so you kinda had to go big. As for Ginny coming to that understanding too fast, I felt the same way too, but I also just couldn't feel how to write it better, so I was stuck with what I got. I'm really glad the resolution all came out as a shock though, I had been planning that for months.

Name: dementorkis (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 0:07 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Wow.. i actually thought Harry might have gone for Cho again... that would have been awful! So glad it was just Cho being.. well Cho. Love the story can't wait for the last chapter! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. If you were being very careful, the fact that Harry's hands were on her shoulders was the tell that he was already trying to get away. I guess maybe I could have had Ginny remember that to make her believing of harry more believable. Thanks for the review.

Name: lucky girl (Signed) · Date: 12/17/06 23:24 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
wow that was fabulous it was without a doubt the best chapter loved it great job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Best chapter? REally? huh

Name: lucky girl (Signed) · Date: 12/17/06 23:24 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
wow that was fabulous it was without a doubt the best chapter loved it great job!!!

Name: the_wind (Signed) · Date: 12/17/06 22:57 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Excellent! This is one of the best romance fics I've ever read, and it's not yet finished. And what the HECK is up with Ratbone? He just keeps changing... but I suppose we'll find out. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Yeah, he has a tendancy to do that, and I think we have one more shift for him in the last chapter. But trust me, if you stay with him long enough, you'll eventually get to understand him. Thank you so much...

Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/17/06 22:22 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Wow. I'll never get Ratbone will I? I love Colin. He is Harry and Ginny's hero. He is almost a savior. Now let's see how tough Vane and Chang are! Ha! They are so stupid sometimes!!!! Yay!

Author's Response: I love it. Half the readers were cursing his name back at the end of chapter eight, and now he's a hero! Ah, I love it, thanks for the review.

Name: potterdenu (Signed) · Date: 12/17/06 21:57 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Brilliant. Simply BRILLIANT. I could feel every feeling Ginny was feeling. It was amazing. This is one of my favourite focs. Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased. The scene with Ginny runing to the north tower was the single bit I really wanted to rewrite and make sure I got right, you know? So I'm glad that bit came out as strong as it did.

Name: potterwidow (Signed) · Date: 12/17/06 21:32 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was fantastic and hilarious and fabulous and gut wrenching and gut busting and hand shakingly brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!! Prof Ratbone?!?!?!?!?!? That was brilliant - I want more info on him, btw. The timing. the govoner was wonderful. Your dialogue was spot on and perfect. I loved every word of it. WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I am so sorry for not getting to this review until now, usually I start at the oldest and work my way to the most recent but I didn't this time. OKay, Thank you so much, though, I am curious to the funny bits, I don't remember a whole lot of funny in this chapter. You will get more info on Ratbone as the Epilogues play out, don't worry. And I really did fret the governor scene, and owe some of that credit to hpmaniac666 who did point out that my timing was way off. Thanks again, and I'll see ya for the last chapter.

Name: Silver Whisper (Signed) · Date: 12/17/06 21:02 · For: Chapter 11: The Gift
Okay, sorry, i will have to give my "review" in two parts, i was too exictied with the keyboard and i accidently pressed enter and submitted that bit before.

I found the cliffie! was it when Romilda finds Harry and Ginny on the tower!

Yay! Ginny's happy! no more pain! i was getting stressed just reading about her! WOW you are an amazing writer! YOU HAVE TO BECOME A PROFESSIONAL WRITER!!!!!!! YOU COULD REPLACE JK ROWLING...ALMOST


Author's Response: Yup, you got the cliffie. As for professional writing, after I've completed what I want to write in fanfic, I am contemplating tackling a novel or two, I got a couple of soft ideas in my head that I'm hoping may take hold. Thanks again, and I can't wait to see ya for the last chapter.

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