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Reviews For 5 A.M. Revelations

Name: Harmthuria (Signed) · Date: 08/23/11 21:17 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
At a quarter past seven, the clock hand bearing the name Ginny Weasley joins her brother Ron’s in the traveling position.

Does this mean a sequel?, will there be a twist where Ginny joins them?, is this over?


Name: Potterlover171 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/10 15:49 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
She follows suit? Is there going to be another one? or is there already?


Name: ronaldweasley (Signed) · Date: 05/29/09 21:53 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Oh my god!!! I love the ending O.O Soo good...


Name: Sorn (Signed) · Date: 01/20/09 23:11 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
As with the last one it is short, but I did like it. Well written.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 01/19/09 13:25 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Cute one shot! I really enjoyed reading it :-)


Name: ginnypotter_89 (Signed) · Date: 09/28/08 15:41 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
OMG!!!!! she went with them????? holy crap! next chepter! next chapter!


Name: Seer_Witch (Signed) · Date: 09/17/08 19:59 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Hahaha.. I love it! *grins*


Name: Elpeciss (Signed) · Date: 09/13/08 3:32 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
It was very good! And very in character! :)


Name: witch6 (Signed) · Date: 08/22/08 15:58 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Both your stories, ‘3 A.M. Confessions’ and ‘5 A. M. Revelations’ have been more about character interaction than actions. In such a case it is obvious that you’ll have more of dialogue. But I have found it difficult to follow it in your stories. I think you should use more tags to explain who is saying what. In some place one of the characters has said something, and then you added a tag. After that you have continued the same character’s dialogue in a new line. I think it would be easier for the reader to understand if you continued the dialogue on the same line after the tag.

I think one of the strongest points in your writing is your characterisations. I have found that in both ‘3 A.M. Confessions’ and ‘5 A. M. Revelations’. In this story the interaction between Harry and Ginny was very natural and flew without any struggle. It is very rare for authors to make their characters converse believably and you do a very good job with that.

This story is a sweet and interesting one-shot. You knew how you wanted to go about our story and it shows plainly in your writing. You are a good author and I would love to read more of your fiction.

:)


Name: pirategirl12 (Signed) · Date: 07/17/08 10:10 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
I've reread this story over and over. It's so sweet!!!!!!!!! Are you going to write more Harry/Ginny? I hope so!


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 8:37 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
aw i love that story more each timei read it!

XOXO
~lola~


Name: Pottersjoy (Signed) · Date: 06/15/08 17:50 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Yay! I'm so glad that i found this sequel, i loved your Ron/Hernione fic too! this was really sweet, i loved it! ;)


Name: Magic Muffin (Signed) · Date: 03/29/08 8:45 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Yays! I loved this story!


Name: hkcjphillips (Signed) · Date: 03/28/08 20:09 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
That was good! Especially for your first h/g fanfic. nice! :]


Name: FluffysFourthHead (Signed) · Date: 03/25/08 19:42 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Why was Ginny traveling? Other than that I liked it.


Name: ordinaryangel5 (Signed) · Date: 06/25/07 0:02 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Ooh! Why is Ginny travelling? Is there going to be a sequel to the sequel?


Name: Luna_Lovegood11 (Signed) · Date: 06/23/07 17:24 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE!!! I know the story says it is complete, but consider this, PLEASE!!!! I hate cliff hanger endings!!! Add more or I will brood endlessly on the future of this story. I don't add completed stories to my favorites, but this one I am, so I am alerted if you take my advice.


Name: Crows (Signed) · Date: 06/13/07 21:14 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Very good! Not as good as 3 AM Confessions if you ask me, but good none the less


Name: kingbobrules (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 13:16 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
A bit of plotless fluff! Loved it 4 a quick distraction and it was very well written. Great fic 4 what it is.


Name: joeboo (Signed) · Date: 05/16/07 14:31 · For: 5 A. M. Revelations
Please write a sequal because this would be such a good prologe to a long story!


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