Aww! That was absolutely adorable! I love Molly/Arthur, so I was very glad to find this story. It just makes it that much more appealing to me that it just started raining when I was midway through reading this fic. Usually, for me, the rain is a bit of a downer, but, thinking of your story, right now I really want to go out and grin up into the rain, and feel the strength and the happiness that it gives, according to Molly in this story.
There were a few times in this fic where you capitalized the tags, like “Isn’t it just amazing, though?” She asked, for example. Not every tag was capitalized, so I tend to think the ones that were capitalized were accidents, but I just thought I’d point it out, all the same.
I really enjoyed the way you painted young Arthur and young Molly. Arthur is quite charming; I could see myself falling for him. Molly shows signs of her later self in her determination, her steady love for Arthur, and, funnily enough, by her blush. I loved that she blushed when Arthur saw her in her undies. That reminded me very much of when Harry overhears the nickname ‘Mollywobbles.’
The only nit-pick I have on the characterization is her argument with her mother. It didn’t sound quite… real. A teenager who admits to what she is accused of, knowing that she has been expressly forbidden, so quickly and so easily, and then getting away with just a few words of defiance seems just a little too fast and a little too easy. But Molly’s relationship with her mother isn’t nearly as important as her relationship with Arthur, so the little off moment doesn’t really matter much.
Arthur’s proposal was wonderful. It was just on time, it fit into the context, it was cute, it was romantic – what can I say? You have converted me to proposals in the rain! It was almost like a fairytale. Just so beautiful and perfect – like a painting of a sunset in red and gold and purple and pink – just beautiful and touching and lovely.
Overall, this story was brilliant. Definitely going to the favorites. :D
Thank you for this absolutely delightful piece! I greatly enjoyed your characterization of all of the characters, especially Molly and Arthur. The love between them is really well described and demonstrated. I wished that we could have seen a little more of Molly's mother - she seemed to be a great character as well. Overall, this was excellent and I truly enjoyed it.
aaww!! i'd never read a molly/arthur fic before, but that was really good!!
Lovely. That's all I can think of to say... lovely.
Cute story! I was a bit surprised at first by Molly's character, and then I remembered! This woman is Ginny's mother! It all made perfect sense. After that I loved your character developement and flowing style. Beautiful story.
Ah, this was really sweet. A simple day, being the best day of their lives. Your description is nice, and I loved the flow. I could imagine Molly dancing in the rain. Great story!
Very cute! I enjoyed it.
awwwww, this is so sweet! i don't think i've read a molly/arthur fic before, and this was very good, how i imagined it would be. nice job!
what a cute, fluffy story! but it's also really well written! i can picture the whole thing perfectly!
ohhh! I loved this story so much! i love reading about Molly and Arthur! they are so sweet!
So sweet! My grin is HUGE! Thumbs up!!
Aww that is completely adorable! I really like the idea that Molly and Arthur went through a wild teenage romance of their own! Nice job!
Oh wow, this was really good. I enjoyed it a whole lot. Who doesnt love the Weasleys?
Congratulations on a very well-written story! I really like how you portrayed Arthur and Molly as young people, that's really something we haven't seen as much in canon. Good job!