Reviews For Mistakes
Reviewer: whittyleah
Date: 06/24/06 5:39
Chapter: Mistakes

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE THIS!!! *Wipes away tears of laughter* I'm a huge Severus/Hermione fan, and reading fics like this one reminds me way I love them so much. It was great!

Reviewer: hxhr_are_forever
Date: 06/22/06 21:20
Chapter: Mistakes

HERMIONE SNAPE!!!!!!! *trying to keep dinner down* I am an H/HR shipper note the penname!!!!! Any way nice story and I was surprised that Snape took that babies thing so dramatically. Nice job and I would like to see some more of your work.

Reviewer: Nerevar_Reborn
Date: 06/19/06 21:17
Chapter: Mistakes

well that was spontaneous... (lol its ok i luv spontaniusness. lol)

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/14/06 17:19
Chapter: Mistakes

Funny. And very creative.

TOMROHT

Reviewer: Crank_up_the_Volume
Date: 06/12/06 14:08
Chapter: Mistakes

that was really weird, lol.

Reviewer: Emily Malfoy
Date: 06/10/06 19:38
Chapter: Mistakes

i love that last line! it was a really funny story. write more!

Reviewer: xrenyx
Date: 06/10/06 5:36
Chapter: Mistakes

The only problem I had was that I found it hard to read and laugh at the same time.
I liked the way that finding out Hermione and Snape were together wasn't a big thing, just the way she says
"Snape. Hermione Snape."
and you know, it was ace. You must write more.

Reviewer: PadfootsGirl_722
Date: 06/10/06 1:39
Chapter: Mistakes

haha that was heaps funny and i liked that it wasnt too drawn out and long

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 06/09/06 21:11
Chapter: Mistakes

Okay, so I'm not much of a Hermione/Snape shipper, but this story made me laugh. My only objection was that Snape referred to Hermione as "Love"- sorry, I just don't see that in him

Although I loved the punch line! Kudos!

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 06/09/06 0:22
Chapter: Mistakes

The end of this story was brilliant! I could picture the entire thing in my mind. Quads is so over the top that Severus would completely freak out. Good job. I did think Severus was a bit OOC. His attitude was there, just too mellowed for me. I do think Hermoine and marriage would mellow him, but he just seemed too tame for me. I don't really know what makes me say that, its just a feeling I have while reading your story. I loved how you took the normal and sometimes over used things (such as the open gown) and made them funny again. Really, a very good job! Severus and Hermoine are my favorite OTP, and you did a good job.

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 06/09/06 0:18
Chapter: Mistakes

The end of this story was brilliant! I could picture the entire thing in my mind. Quads is so over the top that Severus would completely freak out. Good job. I did think Severus was a bit OOC. His attitude was there, just too mellowed for me. I do think Hermoine and marriage would mellow him, but he just seemed too tame for me. I don't really know what makes me say that, its just a feeling I have while reading your story. I loved how you took the normal and sometimes over used things (such as the open gown) and made them funny again. Really, a very good job!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/08/06 21:50
Chapter: Mistakes

lol! quatrouplets!

Reviewer: Christie
Date: 06/07/06 14:51
Chapter: Mistakes

lol! Funny! this is great!
Xena

Reviewer: jennypotteress
Date: 06/06/06 18:52
Chapter: Mistakes

...........hehe....................u expected dat?!

Reviewer: SilentSempra
Date: 06/06/06 18:30
Chapter: Mistakes

hilarious. all I can say. normally H/S stories creep me out, but this one was so out of character and off-beat funny that I've ended up loving it!

Reviewer: frenchiee
Date: 06/06/06 18:13
Chapter: Mistakes

that was hilarious but amazingly wrong. Hermione and Snape????!!! OMFG!!! NO!!! funny tho. maybe try a different couple

Reviewer: krispykreme1468
Date: 06/05/06 12:14
Chapter: Mistakes

I loved it... And that is one of the most interesting challenges that I have ever read... I might attempt it myself. It would be interesting enough just seeing what the sentences I have to use are. It would probably give me an idea for a fic. Anyway loved the story very funny and cute.

Reviewer: hpboy13
Date: 06/04/06 22:19
Chapter: Mistakes

lmao!!! that last line was so funny, and since i'm reading this at half past eleven at night and my mom is in the next room sleeping, i have to hold in my laughter. anyway, i'm gonna add this to my faves and go to sleep. great job!

Reviewer: Tinka Blinka
Date: 06/04/06 20:50
Chapter: Mistakes

hmmm...thats od....but in a good way..personally i don't really like snape/hermione fics, i thought it ould be funnier, it was okay though...i guess...

Reviewer: Mrs_Moony_Lupin
Date: 06/04/06 16:16
Chapter: Mistakes

OMG SNAPE FAINTED!!!! thats to funny!!!

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