HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE THIS!!! *Wipes away tears of laughter* I'm a huge Severus/Hermione fan, and reading fics like this one reminds me way I love them so much. It was great!
HERMIONE SNAPE!!!!!!! *trying to keep dinner down* I am an H/HR shipper note the penname!!!!! Any way nice story and I was surprised that Snape took that babies thing so dramatically. Nice job and I would like to see some more of your work.
well that was spontaneous... (lol its ok i luv spontaniusness. lol)
i love that last line! it was a really funny story. write more!
The only problem I had was that I found it hard to read and laugh at the same time.
I liked the way that finding out Hermione and Snape were together wasn't a big thing, just the way she says
"Snape. Hermione Snape."
and you know, it was ace. You must write more.
haha that was heaps funny and i liked that it wasnt too drawn out and long
Okay, so I'm not much of a Hermione/Snape shipper, but this story made me laugh. My only objection was that Snape referred to Hermione as "Love"- sorry, I just don't see that in him
Although I loved the punch line! Kudos!
The end of this story was brilliant! I could picture the entire thing in my mind. Quads is so over the top that Severus would completely freak out. Good job. I did think Severus was a bit OOC. His attitude was there, just too mellowed for me. I do think Hermoine and marriage would mellow him, but he just seemed too tame for me. I don't really know what makes me say that, its just a feeling I have while reading your story. I loved how you took the normal and sometimes over used things (such as the open gown) and made them funny again. Really, a very good job! Severus and Hermoine are my favorite OTP, and you did a good job.
The end of this story was brilliant! I could picture the entire thing in my mind. Quads is so over the top that Severus would completely freak out. Good job. I did think Severus was a bit OOC. His attitude was there, just too mellowed for me. I do think Hermoine and marriage would mellow him, but he just seemed too tame for me. I don't really know what makes me say that, its just a feeling I have while reading your story. I loved how you took the normal and sometimes over used things (such as the open gown) and made them funny again. Really, a very good job!
...........hehe....................u expected dat?!
hilarious. all I can say. normally H/S stories creep me out, but this one was so out of character and off-beat funny that I've ended up loving it!
that was hilarious but amazingly wrong. Hermione and Snape????!!! OMFG!!! NO!!! funny tho. maybe try a different couple
I loved it... And that is one of the most interesting challenges that I have ever read... I might attempt it myself. It would be interesting enough just seeing what the sentences I have to use are. It would probably give me an idea for a fic. Anyway loved the story very funny and cute.
lmao!!! that last line was so funny, and since i'm reading this at half past eleven at night and my mom is in the next room sleeping, i have to hold in my laughter. anyway, i'm gonna add this to my faves and go to sleep. great job!
hmmm...thats od....but in a good way..personally i don't really like snape/hermione fics, i thought it ould be funnier, it was okay though...i guess...
OMG SNAPE FAINTED!!!! thats to funny!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
