I thought it as a cute story. I don't think Hermione should have erased her memories though. She could just keep her first kiss forever. I loved the story though. I like all romance stories. Did you write any others?
It was a very interesting and unique idea, but you didn't seem to stay very true to the characters. Overall it was pretty good, and you definitely have potential, keep at it.
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erm some of this ok in fact most of this has things that they could never ever evr say eg i never htaught id see ron say “We’re not an item.”
sorry am not sure about this, nice try though oh and it was a bit weird have hermione doing that???
Very clever. I really liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you very very much
awwwwww!
Author's Response: Thanks :]
Who would have thought THAT is what happened on Ron and Hermionies first Hogsmede trip?
Author's Response: You never know what happened ;] Did you like it?
Awww... that was so... sweet! Can you do a sequel... something like after 5 years or something where they actually get together without need for them to erase their memories this time?
Author's Response: Well considering the fact JKR already did that, I think it would be unnecessary. For a REALISTIC one. However, I was tinkering around with one where the two get their memories back a few months ago. Will that do?
that probably happened in the book... very clever idea.
Author's Response: Why thank you.
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I thought it was a very clever premise. At first, I was wondering if you wrote it before book 4 came out, but then at the end, it made sense. It's a very good idea. I loved it, even though it was very sad.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.
I thought it was a pretty good story, it made sense with the plot and it was much better written then some other stories people put here, 8/10.
Author's Response: Double vision!
I thought it was a pretty good story, it made sense with the plot and it was much better written then some other stories people put here, 8/10.
Author's Response: Thank you very very much. I'm flattered.
so sweeeeet! luv it.
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YOU ARE SO MEAN! Why did you have to go and erase their memories HUH? :( Other than that it was brill!
Author's Response: Well, I wanted it to be canon, you see...Thanks though...I guess?
Okay...when I was about half-way through at first I was going to say that this was a great fic but far-fetched. I was going to say that it reminded me of the Prisoner of Azkaban movie moments with Ron and Hermione near the Shrieking Shack (I loved that part), but now that I'm done...Well, you put a very interesting twist on the end. It's almost believable, but I don't think JKR would have tortured Hermione and Ron more than what was in the books. A memory charm was a clever idea though--good job!
Author's Response: Thanks. JKR wouldn't have tortured them in writing, but she leaves that times when Harry wasn't with them to the imagination. One can only wonder what had happened....and I, being the horrible, cynical person I am ;], I love to put my characters through loss and pain.
that was really good and very imaginative...:D
Author's Response: Thank you!
omg, i read this thinkin it was a nice little bit of happy fluff and now u hav just depressed me! well done though
Author's Response: Thanks, I think...
short and sweet.
i liked it. =]
Author's Response: I'm glad =] Thanks for reviewing
That was sooo sad!!! :'(
Author's Response: Yes, it was.... *tissue*
this one was brilliant! to think i almost didn't read it!
Author's Response: Aw thanks. I'm glad you reconsidered!
