Reviewer: Stefanie
Date: 06/10/06 0:38
Chapter: A Destined Coincidence

Great story so far!

Author's Response: thanx so much for taking time to review! luv ya! *in a purely platonic writer-reader way, of course. :)

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 06/06/06 20:29
Chapter: The Last Train Ride

awesome. When did James and Lily get together, I am confused.

Author's Response: thanks! James and Lily got together sometime in sixth year. there's going to be a memory later on that tells you about it. hope this helped. :)

Reviewer: MrGibenz
Date: 06/06/06 18:34
Chapter: The Last Train Ride

Love the start of the story, I hope you continue to update.

Author's Response: i shall, i shall indeed. thanx for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Okee_doke
Date: 06/06/06 17:24
Chapter: The Last Train Ride

I like your writing style, and I think you have a good grasp on Sirius' character, and I like how you've made Lily fiesty. I hope you sort of go back in time (via flashbacks or something) and show some of how Lily and James behaved towards each other before they started going out. I'd like to see how Lily handles the situation while keeping with her fiesty, friendly, and seemingly popular personality.

Author's Response: well thanx! most of the next few chapters are memories/flashbacks and things, so, keep reading! and reviewing ;) thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nsg7harrypotterfan
Date: 06/06/06 16:13
Chapter: The Last Train Ride

Love it!

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing!

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