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Name: EtherealElation (Signed) · Date: 10/10/06 18:03 · For: Better Off This Way?
Wonderfully written, excellent reflections with Narcissa, though I do think you overplayed Lucius a bit. Don't think on it, though, because I'm probably a bit prejudiced, seeing as Lucius is among my many favorite characters.

Very good job... I liked the ending. A lot.

Keep at it!


Name: Sly Severus (Signed) · Date: 07/01/06 20:18 · For: Better Off This Way?
Poor Narcissa. I totally agree that she is questioning her life now, and I don't think that she is very happy with it. I enjoyed reading this. I found it similar to my own Narcissa story. It's always nice to find someone with the same views. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, it struck me how concerned Narcissa was with Draco -- that means she must be able to love, she must not have a cold heart. And so this appeared! *goes off to review your story, hehe*

Name: Elphin (Signed) · Date: 06/04/06 13:03 · For: Better Off This Way?
This fic is amazing. Narcissa has always been a character that I've been interested in and this story portrays her well. I love reading stories about characters like her behind the scenes. Overall, solid plot, good characterization and well written. Normally I don't like song fics but your song choice fits this one perfectly so A+!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm so flattered, I'm glad you like it!

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