Reviewer: michieceramic
Date: 05/11/07 9:53
Chapter: The Ending


Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/08/07 17:41
Chapter: The Ending

it was good... really goood

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 10/28/06 1:25
Chapter: The Ending

So sad I almost cried! But amzingly written! Bravo!

Reviewer: gryffindorgirl9388
Date: 10/06/06 18:23
Chapter: The Ending

this is an amazing piece. it's so sad but it sounds like something jk would write.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 09/23/06 0:02
Chapter: The Ending

Interesting. I can definately see that being what Hermione's thoughts would look like if she were the only surviving member of the trio. I like how you indirectly and yet succinctly characterize her through her feelings. I do think it's likely that a few more than seven people would survive (if you've got the whole Order fighting, at least) but the tiny amount did work well with your story. All in all a very praise-worthy piece.

Reviewer: webster
Date: 07/03/06 12:04
Chapter: The Ending

you should write more it's good

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope to write more, it will be a series of one shots. :) ~Ginny

Reviewer: Nevermore135
Date: 06/12/06 15:25
Chapter: The Ending

*cries* that was so sad yet beautful *blows nose*
I have one question what about Tonks??

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. Tonks, sadly, died. I intend to write more... this will be a series of one-shots. Thanks again. ~Ginny

Reviewer: demya_wings
Date: 06/03/06 0:40
Chapter: The Ending

i like it. please keep them coming.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will as soon as I can. ~Gin

Reviewer: hpfan012
Date: 06/02/06 20:42
Chapter: The Ending

no it cant be a one shot!! it's awesome!!! i know you do have your other storie to finish since they are my favorite stories, but i really like this so far and i want you to keep writing it!! PLEASE?! 10/10!

Author's Response: :) This will be a series of one-shots that will draw together to tell a story. However, it's not my most pressing project. I will get to it, though. :) Thanks! ~Ginny

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 06/01/06 13:47
Chapter: The Ending

Good one! It was a very touching story, and you illustrated the scene after the battle very well. I could just get everything clearly in my mind's eye!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it. ~Ginny

Reviewer: xMBx
Date: 06/01/06 6:56
Chapter: The Ending

Please do a sequal!!!!1 :-)

Author's Response: I'm sure that I will eventually. It'll take a bit of time, however. Thank you! ~Gin

Reviewer: sugarquill111727
Date: 05/31/06 20:48
Chapter: The Ending

It was strange. I liked that it was short. I was wondering y it was but I just read ur author note. It was good.

Author's Response: :) Amazing how much someone can pack into so few words sometimes, isn't it? Thank you, glad that you liked it. ~Ginny

Reviewer: HStarRunner23
Date: 05/31/06 20:12
Chapter: The Ending

That is sad. I almost cried... Anyways, very good writing and I liked it a lot. For a moment, I thought it was Ginny's point of view, but then I realized it wasn't. Maybe next time you should state things like that sooner? Oh well, do whatever you wish. It was a really great one-shot, but it would be really nice and a good story if you wrote more. Still, I like it just as it is. Nice descriptive writing too. I hope this was good constructive criticism. ~HStarRunner23

Author's Response: Grrr... I had a long response and it didn't upload. :)

Thank you for the constructive crit. I do appreciate it. As far as the 'voice' for the POV, in this case it was meant to be a bit ambiguous. The first clue coming with the descriptions of the deaths of Harry & Ron. I didn't consider that my user name would also influence. In truth, I rarely write Ginny. :)

As far as continuing, I have ideas of what I'd like to do with this. If I do continue, it will mostly be in the way of a few one-shots. that way it's always complete. :) I'm currently working on 3 other WIPs, though, and they require my attention first.

Thanks again. Your comments were very much appreciated. Cheers! ~Ginny

Reviewer: xMBx
Date: 05/31/06 20:08
Chapter: The Ending

*wipes eyes* Oh my gosh!! This is outstanding!!!!!
Amazing writing!! Did i mention that this is outstanding?? *cry, cry, cry*

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it. (It's such a huge compliment to me to hear that I've moved someone to tears.) ~Ginny

Reviewer: KatharineK
Date: 05/31/06 19:12
Chapter: The Ending

Hey, good job. The only thing that bothered me was that Ginny was calling her mother Molly instead of mom. Very good storyline. It kept me hanging onto every word. More please!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Although I use the user name of "Ginny", I rarely write her. This story was told from Hermione's POV as evidenced by her describing first Harry's death, then stating the the 'third member of their trio was laying at her feet'. Later it does state that the survivors that the voice found included Ginny by name. :) Understandable that it was missed, I'll keep that in mind for further stories told in this manner. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ~Ginny

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