it was good... really goood
So sad I almost cried! But amzingly written! Bravo!
this is an amazing piece. it's so sad but it sounds like something jk would write.
Interesting. I can definately see that being what Hermione's thoughts would look like if she were the only surviving member of the trio. I like how you indirectly and yet succinctly characterize her through her feelings. I do think it's likely that a few more than seven people would survive (if you've got the whole Order fighting, at least) but the tiny amount did work well with your story. All in all a very praise-worthy piece.
you should write more it's good
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope to write more, it will be a series of one shots. :) ~Ginny
*cries* that was so sad yet beautful *blows nose*
I have one question what about Tonks??
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. Tonks, sadly, died. I intend to write more... this will be a series of one-shots. Thanks again. ~Ginny
i like it. please keep them coming.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will as soon as I can. ~Gin
no it cant be a one shot!! it's awesome!!! i know you do have your other storie to finish since they are my favorite stories, but i really like this so far and i want you to keep writing it!! PLEASE?! 10/10!
Author's Response: :) This will be a series of one-shots that will draw together to tell a story. However, it's not my most pressing project. I will get to it, though. :) Thanks! ~Ginny
Good one! It was a very touching story, and you illustrated the scene after the battle very well. I could just get everything clearly in my mind's eye!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it. ~Ginny
Please do a sequal!!!!1 :-)
Author's Response: I'm sure that I will eventually. It'll take a bit of time, however. Thank you! ~Gin
It was strange. I liked that it was short. I was wondering y it was but I just read ur author note. It was good.
Author's Response: :) Amazing how much someone can pack into so few words sometimes, isn't it? Thank you, glad that you liked it. ~Ginny
That is sad. I almost cried... Anyways, very good writing and I liked it a lot. For a moment, I thought it was Ginny's point of view, but then I realized it wasn't. Maybe next time you should state things like that sooner? Oh well, do whatever you wish. It was a really great one-shot, but it would be really nice and a good story if you wrote more. Still, I like it just as it is. Nice descriptive writing too. I hope this was good constructive criticism. ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Grrr... I had a long response and it didn't upload. :)
Thank you for the constructive crit. I do appreciate it. As far as the 'voice' for the POV, in this case it was meant to be a bit ambiguous. The first clue coming with the descriptions of the deaths of Harry & Ron. I didn't consider that my user name would also influence. In truth, I rarely write Ginny. :)
As far as continuing, I have ideas of what I'd like to do with this. If I do continue, it will mostly be in the way of a few one-shots. that way it's always complete. :) I'm currently working on 3 other WIPs, though, and they require my attention first.
Thanks again. Your comments were very much appreciated. Cheers! ~Ginny
*wipes eyes* Oh my gosh!! This is outstanding!!!!!
Amazing writing!! Did i mention that this is outstanding?? *cry, cry, cry*
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it. (It's such a huge compliment to me to hear that I've moved someone to tears.) ~Ginny
Hey, good job. The only thing that bothered me was that Ginny was calling her mother Molly instead of mom. Very good storyline. It kept me hanging onto every word. More please!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Although I use the user name of "Ginny", I rarely write her. This story was told from Hermione's POV as evidenced by her describing first Harry's death, then stating the the 'third member of their trio was laying at her feet'. Later it does state that the survivors that the voice found included Ginny by name. :) Understandable that it was missed, I'll keep that in mind for further stories told in this manner. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ~Ginny