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Name: dragonfoot (Signed) · Date: 06/25/11 22:15 · For: Curves
Poor Lily!

Name: Jolia Potter907 (Signed) · Date: 02/16/09 17:43 · For: Curves
so not like lily!!!
you've got potential, just find a better story plot.

Author's Response: Not like Lily as we see her where? Bearing in mind that this was written pre-DH of course -- this review could be a little more robust, as I don't really know what you mean. However, you may notice I've found another plot or two lying about.

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 17:32 · For: Curves
Aww I loved this, especially the last part. I'm afraid Sluggie watching Lily made me feel sick too, but I thought i'd review before throwing up. Perhaps he was only watching her as a kind of tool, to him she's someone with the potential to go far ergo she is someone who will heighten his status. That doesn't make me feel much better you know. Anyway, I'm glad she gave those Slytherins what they deserved and I'm annoyed at Snape, he should be apologising for calling her what he did not the other way around. I like the communication spell, any new spells or magical gadgets are greatly appreciated. Hope to read more of your work soon.

Name: worse_than_death (Signed) · Date: 09/17/07 17:24 · For: Curves

Author's Response: It's a one-shot! Aren't I evil? But if you're really curious about how I saw it going from here, it's a spinoff from "In The Eyes of Others." That's not canon-compliant since "The Prince's Tale," but it gets where you seem to want to go. Thanks for the R&R!

Name: mugglechicka5565 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 17:38 · For: Curves

Name: Pissenoffanis (Anonymous) · Date: 08/20/07 5:17 · For: Curves
Yeowch I feel sooo sorry for her! Ol' Sluggy could be accused of sexual harrasment there...

The group hug was cute though. Can't wait to read more!

Name: honey bon (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 3:43 · For: Curves
poor girl....

Name: Spaced Out (Anonymous) · Date: 08/08/07 17:56 · For: Curves
"Inter-House Unity event"... haha. I love your writing. It's sad and amusing at the same time, and just really well done; it's all perfectly plausible seeming. The only thing is "...lost the points Flitwich had awarded" I think that's supposed to be "Flitwick". And now I'm off to read more of your stuff. :)

Name: I_LUV_MOONY (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 14:13 · For: Curves
Great story! I never saw Severus as prejudiced, so this telling makes sense. I can see where Lily and Severus might have been friends. I understand how Lily's feeling, too. I've been wearing loose shirts to school all year because I was afraid other girls would think I was showing off. Another well-written story by Vindictus Viridian. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad this story struck a chord for you. Being a teenager is such an awkward thing; Lily couldn't have been an exception, though she may have fooled some of the people some of the time.

Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 04/26/07 10:56 · For: Curves
Yay another In the Eyes of Others excerpt. Poor Lily. Something about her dislike for Slughorn makes me wonder about her family and her life away from Hogwarts... Why isn't this brilliant one-shot on the list of Severus In Profile fics, though? It's really good! Your writing is great as always and your characterization of Lily and her fears - of growing up and losing friends and just being sixteen as you put is great!

Author's Response: Lily in Profile? Maybe it should be on the list, at that. He's not onscreen much, but he's certainly taking up a lot of space all the same. Thanks!

Name: TheMarauderMistress (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 20:04 · For: Curves
one word.....wow.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Fizzing_Wizbee022 (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 20:49 · For: Curves
This story is amazing...you captured the awkwardness of sixteen so well, and I absolutely love that Lily wasn't portrayed as this perfect person. I love her character, but I always enjoy characters that are slightly more flawed.

Also, your characterization of Slughorn was great. I can absolutely see him eyeing his more beautiful students, creep that he is.

Anyway, wonderful job! Please write another chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm always a little surprised that so many people found Slughorn just a tad creepy. His interest in Lily, or at least in Lily's memory, did seem a bit obsessive to me. And Lily herself, well, everyone becomes more saintly when remembered; NOBODY could be as good as everyone tells Harry she was. Especially as a teenager -- it's just too hard to be one. If you like this Lily, she has a starring role in "In The Eyes Of Others," "Curse of the Toad," and of course "Happy Birthday, Lily Evans."

Name: VeniaTaint (Signed) · Date: 01/03/07 10:02 · For: Curves
Awwww, how sweet! I absolutly love this fic, and i think every girl can relate!
~The Tainted One

Author's Response: Thanks! There's a tendency to write Lily as being perfect, or nearly so, and I think she just works better if she's a nice person who has the occasional PMS moment, a conflict with a teacher, unwelcome attention from more than just James, and so on. "Give your character some flaws," we say, as though there's some sort of character-creation recipe book, but really, I think it goes better to give a character a bad day now and again and a few things she just doesn't know yet. I'm glad you loved it!

Name: A House Elf (Signed) · Date: 12/19/06 23:23 · For: Curves
That was good. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: babekitty_92 (Signed) · Date: 11/30/06 5:34 · For: Curves
Noice, very good indeed. I like it, it was really cool, well done

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: some_kinda_superstar (Signed) · Date: 10/30/06 2:52 · For: Curves
Hmmn...I thought I reviewed this already. Still, I was re-reading it and couldn't see my review in the list so...I love it! Great story, and I can sort of identify. I remember this one time I went to a chuch youth group and this really old guy (like, sixty) was trying to get a look down my top...sorry, off-topic there. Anyway, Slughorn really grossed me out, I can totally see him that way. Great story!

Author's Response: Funny, I thought you had too, and there it isn't. Thanks for the review! Slughorn seems to bother a lot of people; I was surprised how much it wasn't just me.

Name: weasleybabe24 (Signed) · Date: 10/28/06 16:29 · For: Curves
Oh, poor Lils. If Slughorn died in the last book I can't say I'd be sorry (hopefully the cause is choking on that blasted crystalized pineapple he's always eating.)

Author's Response: I've been surprised, in these reviews, by how many people also found Slughorn just plain creepy, and how many really can relate to this. It's a little scary, and I wonder if Jo meant to write him that way for the older and more experienced readers or if it's just some sort of odd resonance for some of us.

Name: Augusta Wilfry (Signed) · Date: 10/11/06 17:37 · For: Curves
i don't really get it so i have to read your other stories...is it like a servus/lily ship, possibly?

Author's Response: Oh, dear, I was hoping it could stand alone. It's sort of shippy; I write them as close friends, with Lily at least suffering some of the usual teen indecision about whether a close friend of the opposite sex is perhaps a little more than that. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Oh, dear, I was hoping it could stand alone. It's sort of shippy; I write them as close friends, with Lily at least suffering some of the usual teen indecision about whether a close friend of the opposite sex is perhaps a little more than that. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're inclined to read more!

Name: Koluka (Signed) · Date: 10/02/06 14:30 · For: Curves
Ouhouu, so Good :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: MaraudersAffair (Signed) · Date: 09/13/06 22:35 · For: Curves
Oh, thank God! This is a Lily fic that I have been waiting for! I was so bored with all the perfect Lily stories - this one is so honest! You have explained how it feels to be a sixteen year old girl perfectly. Please, Please continue! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I've gotten to enjoy writing Lily; she's been popping into one-shots and things lately. And the monster AU I can't seem to finish... *sigh* We'll see what she bunnies next.

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