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Name: FaunaCaritas (Signed) · Date: 12/25/06 19:31 · For: Dementors on the Train
Hmmm, I liked the poem over-all, but the parts didn't harmonize with each other. (I hope criticism is OK.) I did think the poem sounded remarkably how I would imagine Remus' thoughts. Nicely done.


Author's Response: Criticism is fine! I need all the help I can get! Thanks for the review!

Name: TOMROHT (Signed) · Date: 07/21/06 14:01 · For: Dementors on the Train
Hmm...poetry baffles me...nice job, though. This is really good.


Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: KitKat517 (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 17:38 · For: Dementors on the Train
Good poem. I liked it. I don't know why but I liked the part about the chocolate. Maybe its because I love chocolate almost as much as I love Harry Potter. Anyway, good poem.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I like chocolate, too.

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