Hmmm, I liked the poem over-all, but the parts didn't harmonize with each other. (I hope criticism is OK.) I did think the poem sounded remarkably how I would imagine Remus' thoughts. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Criticism is fine! I need all the help I can get! Thanks for the review!
Hmm...poetry baffles me...nice job, though. This is really good.
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Good poem. I liked it. I don't know why but I liked the part about the chocolate. Maybe its because I love chocolate almost as much as I love Harry Potter. Anyway, good poem.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I like chocolate, too.