This is excellent! I love the James/Lily dynamics.
This is perhaps the most moving fan fiction i have read on this website. You took characters that everyone loves to write about, and spun a story with fear, anger, doubt, and love. you didn't protray the obvious in characters, which proves you are a strong writer. Don't stop writing.
Awww! Poor James. Excellent start, though. I think you have a unique take on Jame's attitude (not that it's OOC), and I like it. I hope James and Lily aren't just magically together, though. Take your time! :-)
P.S. I love your writing style.
i really liked this story! it's so good to read a story where james and lily are nice to each other, and where james doesn't hex snape!!