Reviewer: lyra_lays_fallen
Date: 02/23/09 19:41
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

Brilliant! And very amusing! It's nice to see these characters as students in school. I loved how you included Mundungus! You should write more of these stories.

Reviewer: Beautiful_Black
Date: 06/19/07 3:29
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

i like it

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 04/28/06 13:13
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

Loved it. Hilarious. Write another one!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 04/14/06 10:08
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

Ha Ha! No complains, cept one! Why didn't you put Rodolphus in???? I know you mentioned him, but it would have been so much funnier if you put him in! Anyway, 10/10!

Reviewer: little_kitty
Date: 02/04/06 15:44
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

I thought this was great! You have a wonderful wway of describing everything. I could perfectly envision all the characters in my head. Mundungus was really funny, welll done. PErsonally, for this quote here: "His hand dropped to the grass and he opened one eye at the shocking suggestion that he might be: a) a girl, or even more appalling, b) a Marauder!" I wouldn't have used the a) and b). Maybe I would have used "either' instead. well, that's just me. Here: "Annie bent his knee and crossed his other leg on it as he leaned up resting his head on an arm bent under his neck. " I was a bit confused on who Annie was at the begiining, but I figured it out after reading it a few times. I know it's like a nickname, but maybe you could put the real name in brackets. I actually thought it was a girl for a moment. Overall, fantastic job!! **applauds** 9/10!

Reviewer: Grainne
Date: 01/18/05 14:03
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

Very amusing--and I am so pleased to see the squid getting in on the fun! I'm rather partial to the overgrown cephalopod. Brill!

Reviewer: MistressTheives
Date: 12/30/04 0:17
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

Hee hee, I remeber when I first read that. It was hilarious. *wipes tears from eyes.* Great work again. (btw its Jes aka Gid here hee hee)

Reviewer: Midnight
Date: 12/12/04 10:45
Chapter: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

Oh that was so good, I really liked how you wrote Mundungus in this fic. Very funny, loved the rolling-down-the-hills thing. Amelia Bones is also written nicely, you described her well.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Midnight! I may write more of them in the future. Mundungus has such great potential as a character, and I love imagining him as a student. Cheers! ~Laura

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