Reviewer: Liams_Dawn
Date: 06/20/06 18:02
Chapter: The Aftermath

I really like this story. You're doing an amazing job with it so far. I really liked that you didn't put Harry as the one she was engaged to, don't get me wrong though, I like those stories too. I just think too many writers do that so it was a breath of fresh air when the name Jonathon came up rather then Harry. Anyways though, you are doing a fantastic job with this story. You don't drag it out and make it extremely long, you put in just the right amount of suspense to keep us reading. I am interested to see where you go with this pregnancy. After all, Draco just claimed he loved her and then she broke his heart and for her to go back to him because she is carrying his child will be sure to stir up a few problems. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks so much! I didn't have her engaged to Harry partially because of the fact that it is a bit overdone, and I just didn't want to write Harry (lol). He is by far the most challenging for me and I didn't want to ruin my story because of my inability to make him realistic. I'm planning on this being a lot shorter than my other fic, which is 13 chapters (and counting!), so I'm definitely not dragging it out. I'm glad you think I'm doing alright with it so that it's still suspenseful! This pregnancy certainly will change things, and it definitely won't be easy... thanks for leaving such a long review, it was great!

Reviewer: Pat
Date: 06/19/06 17:29
Chapter: The Aftermath

omg great story, the end of this chapter left me with my mouth wide open...i cant wait to read the rest

Author's Response: Lol, cool! Just the kind of shock I wanted. I appreciate your review (:

Reviewer: suckr4romance
Date: 06/18/06 21:17
Chapter: The Aftermath

Oh Lord, this is going to get interesting...

Author's Response: :D Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 06/17/06 2:07
Chapter: The Aftermath

Aw, come on Ginny, don't let family history affect you feelings for Draco. You're stirring up the story just right, it doesn't seem to rushed or dragging. Kee up the excellent writing.

Author's Response: Exactly. Screw family, date the hot guy who's in love with you! Lol, I'm just kidding. Thank you, I'm happy you think I'm building it up alright. I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: muggleharrison
Date: 06/16/06 19:59
Chapter: The Aftermath

Omg!!! That was the best one I have read!!!!! I love it. I hope that you put up some more chapters!! Because I would to read more of this! well bye!

Author's Response: (:

Reviewer: muggleharrison
Date: 06/16/06 19:59
Chapter: The Aftermath

Omg!!! That was the best one I have read!!!!! I love it. I hope that you put up some more chapters!! Because I would to read more of this! well bye!

Author's Response: Not quite sure what you mean by "best one", but thanks nevertheless! There are definitely more chapters coming. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing (:

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 06/16/06 11:23
Chapter: The Aftermath

very good!
loved every word of it!

Author's Response: Cool, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate the review (:

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 06/16/06 0:38
Chapter: The Aftermath

I totally did not see that coming! But I like it.....:)

Author's Response: Well, that's good! I wanted it to be a surprise, lol. Thank you so very much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Demons_quill
Date: 06/16/06 0:04
Chapter: The Aftermath


Author's Response: What if I told you that was the end? Okay, just kidding. That would be the epiphany of "ending with a bang", though, wouldn't it? (: Of course there's more, and it'll be up relatively soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: GinnyRox
Date: 06/15/06 22:40
Chapter: The Aftermath

I didn't see that coming I have to admit... This was a really great chapter so I don't see why your nervous about it. Your writing is really good! Can't wait for the update!

Author's Response: Well, a little bit of shock is what I was going for, so that's good news! I suppose my nervousness was because I am going in a direction that is new to me, & I wasn't sure how people would react to the ending. I'm glad you liked it, however, and I appreciate the review a lot. (:

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 06/15/06 22:35
Chapter: The Aftermath

oh dear. this feels terribly cliched. I don't know if that was what you were going for, and I don't want to be a party pooper, but I didn't particularly like this chapter. I feel like I've read it before. will there be anything particularly original about this draco/ginny baby, or is it just a repeat?
please don't be offended by this review; it's just what I think and I know that is hard to please everyone, especially yourself.
keep writing--I want to know about any special original bits you create!

Author's Response: Of course I'm not offended! I appreciate the fact that you took the time to leave a review & tell me what you thought. I know that not everyone will like this & I understand your concern that this is cliched, because there ARE a lot of D/G fics in which Ginny gets pregnant. I myself have only read 1 or 2, so for all I know this could be just like them. However, I don't plan on making the pregnancy the main focus point. I made it happen in order to develop certain aspects of the story, Ginny in particular. If this hadn't happened, she probably could have repressed the whole thing & moved on. But knowing she is pregnant, well, things will be different. Nevertheless, thank you for reviewing because I do like to know the bad parts of my fic so that I may make it better. I'm sorry if I've disappointed you, but maybe you'll feel differently as the story progresses. The last thing I want is to be cliche, & perhaps once I've written more that won't be the case. Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: Lite_inyour_Darkness
Date: 06/15/06 21:41
Chapter: The Aftermath


Author's Response: :D Thank you.

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 06/15/06 21:08
Chapter: The Aftermath

Well this is an interesting story. I like how you have written Draco. I can see how that could be a true depiction of him given your perameters. I really like this story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you think his character is believable. I appreciate the review! (:

Reviewer: dracoweasley
Date: 06/15/06 10:10
Chapter: The Heartbreak

pleae please please continue, i ove it!!!!

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: dracoweasley
Date: 06/15/06 10:02
Chapter: The Heartbreak

pleae please please continue, i ove it!!!!

Author's Response: I have, don't worry (: I'm happy you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: blueeyes
Date: 06/13/06 13:55
Chapter: The Mistake

WOW WOW WOW, i am loving this fic. You have characterised Draco and Ginny really well, please, please update.... im on tenterhooks here!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I know it's taken a while for me to update but I just submitted it, so any day now. Thanks for the review (:

Reviewer: Slytherin_nenita2
Date: 06/13/06 11:21
Chapter: The Mistake

omgggggggggggggs!!!!!!! when is the next chp coming up

Author's Response: Soon! I submitted it tonight!

Reviewer: Slytherin_nenita2
Date: 06/13/06 10:59
Chapter: The Heartbreak

i love it but watt happened to harry
by the way that jonathan is a byocth!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol, yes. Jonathon = moron. As far as Harry goes, I didn't consider it important to the plot so that's why I haven't explained what happened. But to anwer your question, Ginny & Harry just grew apart. He broke it off & spent a year hunting Voldemort, during which their relationship died. I mean, they didn't have enough time together to develop the strong feelings needed to withstand such distance. Sorry if that answer is crap, I did the best I could! Anyway, I'm glad you liked it & thanks for reviewing (:

Reviewer: Demons_quill
Date: 06/13/06 1:26
Chapter: The Mistake

I love this story!!!! Bravo!!!! Beautifully written!!!!!! i'm adding it to my favs!!!!
please update soon!!!!

Author's Response: :D Thanks so much! I'm flattered that you're adding it to your favorites & I really appreciate your review!

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 06/11/06 18:44
Chapter: The Mistake

Your writing is very unique.
I am a fan of anything to do with Draco
except Draco/Pansy I don't like that
but you are very talented at this.
I must say that Draco/Ginny is a
delicate relationship but its great and I truly love your story.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! It's nice to hear that I have the ability to make an original fan fic. I am the same way - I love Draco fics, but I've never cared for ones involving Pansy (you've probably noticed, I haven't put her in mine). I think the love I have for Draco's character, which has such depth, has made me able to write him. I'm flattered you think I handle this ship so well, sometimes it's not easy because it's delicate. Thanks SO much for the wonderful review! :D

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