Reviews For Not Given Up Yet
Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/09/07 22:55
Chapter: Story Text

Please tell me there is more to this one. It doesnít seem quite finished.
Millicent Bulstrode, canít say as I ever liked her character, but this makes her more human and likable. I know the angst of trying to fit in and belong to a cool group is very important to a lot of kids, and when you are in a situation where you can do something about it, most would do whatever it took. I really liked her attacks of conscience and the repetitive but changing comments about how thick she is.
You are doing these very well, and I have to repeat, please donít stop writing them. You are way too good at it to stop. See you at another in a minute.


Author's Response: Thanks -- it stopped there with an ending sort of left open because it was written post-HBP, and I saw no reason to go further and predict things that probably wouldn't happen. :) We never saw her in DH, so whether she could be shown as doing anything is unclear.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 08/24/06 16:00
Chapter: Story Text

Ugh! I had written you the LOVLIEST review, but then my stupid computer got messed up and it didn't post. So now I have to make a whole new one up, since the last one was pretty long and I don't remember it all.

You're really good at writing one-shots, aren't you? And this one was beautifully written. I loved how you really got into the character, so we sympatized. And it was cool to see 5th and 6th years from a Slytherin-who-doesn't-fit-in's point of view. Loved it. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! I never really planned to write about Millicent, it just sort of happened that way. I'm guessing she might be on the fringes of Slytherin society, as it were.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/10/06 14:45
Chapter: Story Text

Really, really good story! This sounds exactly like the real thoughts of a confused, unpopular girl. wonderful job. you portrayed the character perfectly!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure why I did it that way -- it just started off like that and seemed to fit.

Reviewer: BlondieFangurl
Date: 06/08/06 21:29
Chapter: Story Text

She reminds me of myself Millie does. Cool oneshot.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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