Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 07/01/08 14:32
Chapter: Prologue

thanks for the beginning of the story. I think I'm going to re-read it now because I can vaguely remember it now and feel the need to know it in as much detail as I do all the other stories I've read. :)

Author's Response: Hahahaha thanks so much! I hope you enjoy re-reading!rnrn

Eponine

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 07/01/08 10:06
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Legilimency

Omg that's horrible what Lottie did! I like this story a lot, but Lottie is a bit trying sometimes. I guess she just needs to mature, but I hope that happens soon!

Author's Response: Hahaha yeah--she's a bit unclear on morals, but can you blame her? After growing up in such a dark time, she just does what she knows to keep her head above water. But yes, she *definitely* has some growing to do. hahaha.rnrn

Thanks for the review!

rnrnEponine

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 07/01/08 5:15
Chapter: Prologue

I know for definate I started reading this story but I can't for the life of me remeber the storyline!!!
Can you tell me roughly whats happened? Please! :D

Author's Response: Oh geez. I don't know if I can go through the entire thing in detail, but the general gist:rnrn

Voldemort won the war. The three heads (Palmyitor, Maelioric and Clynalmoy) create a school (Alsemore) to train young wizards and witches to fight in the war. Lottie is a Muggle-born from the London Muggle camps and attends Alsemore. She gets sorted into Palmyitor and befriends Andrea.

rnrnThat's kind of the beginning of the story. If you drop me an email, I can probably give you a more detailed plot outline if you don't want to skim the rest. Hahaha. I just don't want to spoil other readers on my review page, you know what I mean.rnrn

Thanks for the review!

rnEponine

Reviewer: Glynna_vyre
Date: 06/07/08 2:44
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Six: The Legilimensí Trick

Awww...poor Lottie.
This was a great chapter, as usual. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!rn

Eponine

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 06/03/08 11:13
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Six: The Legilimensí Trick

Thank you for the update; I enjoy reading your story and I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'll update as soon as I can!rnrn

Eponine

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 05/03/08 21:15
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Five: The Professors' Grudge

Hmmm... I wonder why they're getting these lessons. Good preparation? Or something more? :D Poor Lottie, everyone mad at her. It's great how she views it though - "just because I'm better than them" - Lol! Such a great character. This chapter was really good, and it keeps the suspense so high. Update again soon!
Oh, and, in the first paragraph you wrote "Andrew" instead of "Andrea" once. Thought you ought to know. heh

Author's Response: It is a mystery, isn't it? Hmmmm Hahaha. Yeah, this chapter was quite a bit about Lottie's development as a character. I'll work on 26 soon!rnrn

Oh jeez. I thought I had caught all of those already. I've become a frequent watcher of Andrew's Blog and made that typo about four thousand times. Thanks for pointing that out! To the edit page!

rnrnThanks for the review!rn

Eponine

Reviewer: HogwartsAngles
Date: 04/12/08 16:58
Chapter: Prologue

OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! ive read this story 5 times and it never gets old......i love the mysteriousness and the thrilling parts!!! WRITE MORE!!!!

Author's Response: Hahahaha thank you so much! I'm working on 25 now! There's a lot more HTI coming!rnrn

Thanks for the review!

rnEponine

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 03/26/08 14:43
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: Lottie's Flight

Hmmm... somehow this story got deleted from my favorites, and I can't put it back... *confused*. But in any case, great chapter, now I've finally read it! The more I see of her, the more I like Palmyitor. Also, I loved the bit about the different perceptions of cowardice - Lottie and Andrea are such compatible characters! And both are really interesting OCs. Plus, the plot continues to get more and more complicated, and brilliantly so! I wonder what Palmyitor saw about Andrea in the file... and I wonder about those robes and the snakeskin, still. :D Great fic! Update sooooon!

Author's Response: O.o that's odd. Maybe it's a glitch having to do with the update.rnrn

Ah thanks so much for the review!

rnEponine

Reviewer: Nez
Date: 03/23/08 14:37
Chapter: Prologue

Wow great! I've been following your story quite some time now! It's brilliant!

Hope you update soon!
~Nez

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!rn

Eponine

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 03/23/08 8:16
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: Lottie's Flight

sooooo was not expecting that! great chapter keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!rnEponine

Reviewer: RebecceDragon
Date: 01/24/08 18:48
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Three: The Phoenix's Secret

no your killing me! how could there be no more. I think that i might die until i know the next chapter

Author's Response: Hahaha! I'm sorry! The cliffie was way too tempting not to use.

Thanks for the review!

Eponine

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 01/23/08 0:20
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Three: The Phoenix's Secret

Oh no! Lottie, what have you done! I hope Andrea at least figures everything she wanted to know out with this! Great chapter! I loved seeing them figure out how to find Neville though, as far as they got! I hope they find him soon! So much suspense! Update soon, I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Hahaha, silly Lottie. She gets herself into such ridiculous situations.

Thanks so much! Haha sorry for the cliffie, but I couldn't resist. ^_^

Eponine

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 12/27/07 19:37
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Two: Arithmancy

Hmmm.... So, Neville's still alive huh? This could get interesting! So many clues that I can't wait to see resolved! Plus, this chapter was great! I love Lottie and Andrea as characters - and it's amazing how they're so compatible and still very realistic.
I can't wait to find out more about so many things - especially Neville of course! Update soon!

Author's Response: Keep your eyes open for him! Thanks so much! Ahhh I'm glad you say that; I worked so hard on developing those two that I'm glad they're believable. Whew. Haha. Thanks so much for the reveiw! Eponine

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 11/11/07 16:26
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-One: Bereavement

Aw. That's so sad! Poor Andrea! This chapter was great though - I like seeing more of Colm. I'm still hoping he'll be redeemed eventually, in Lottie's eyes! The ending was really sad, and your writing really made Andrea's grief real. Update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Colm will play a larger role as the story goes on, don't worry. ^^ I'll update as soon as I can, but I'm not making any promises because I still have eleven more applications to turn in! Agh!

Thanks so much for the review!

Eponine

Reviewer: JusticeForMedea
Date: 11/10/07 12:15
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-One: Bereavement

"sometimes we have to choose between what is right and what is easy"

that's one character I can assume we've seen in canon, right?

Author's Response: I'd keep that thought if I were you! *Taps nose*

Thanks for the review!

Eponine

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 11/10/07 0:19
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-One: Bereavement

Thank you for the update, and I will be keeping up with this fanfic.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

Eponine

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 09/23/07 15:24
Chapter: Chapter Twenty: The Muggle Revolt

Poor Andrea! That was so sad! So was the teacher dying, though that didn't strike me as much. I really enjoyed the intensity of this chapter! It was so emotional and so sad, it really shows again the horror the Death Eaters spread. The dying Muggle was particularly terrifying, though I think it would have worked better if you had just picked on gender instead of saying "or" every time. Anyway, a brilliant chapter! I can't wait for the next to come out!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was hoping the reader would feel bad for Andrea. Gabaldon's death was odd to write because Lottie didn't like her, but it was still sort of sad, since she was on the good side.

Hm, I'll keep the gender thing in mind for next time. I thought it was kind of cool how both the Muggle and the Death Eater were depersonalized, but I understand where all of the "it"s would get annoying.

Thanks so much for the review!

Eponine

Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 21:43
Chapter: Chapter Twenty: The Muggle Revolt

oOOOH this is a good one =] lov it keep writing!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

Eponine

Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 21:38
Chapter: Prologue

interesting...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

Eponine

Reviewer: Phoenix 86
Date: 09/22/07 20:25
Chapter: Chapter Twenty: The Muggle Revolt

Ouch, sucks for Andrea. well good chapter as always, and will be keeping an eye out for the next.

Author's Response: Agreed; poor Andrea. Thanks so much for the review!

Eponine

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