Reviews For Umbrellas
Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/05/11 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really love the sweetness portrayed here.

Reviewer: ThestralSong13
Date: 11/25/10 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really quite touching and beautiful.
I love the symbolism of the umbrellas.
I really love this story a lot!

Reviewer: Winston_SassyGirl
Date: 02/03/08 5:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow really good again.

Reviewer: KathZ
Date: 09/07/07 17:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was... Cute.

Reviewer: hocuspocus88
Date: 08/25/07 6:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved was so beautiful...

Reviewer: remilupin
Date: 08/19/07 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is beautiful. I will have to read Swift Small Birds now. Do not stop writing.

Reviewer: PotterLovesMalfoy
Date: 07/31/07 23:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

SUPER CUTE!!! I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR WRITING!!! It's really good, honestly. Thanks for taking the time to put up such entertaining works!

Reviewer: kaister12
Date: 04/27/07 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was deep

Reviewer: TofuHumanoid
Date: 04/09/07 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

This and Small Swift Birds are both Beautiful.
And You are fantastic.

Reviewer: KJazzer139
Date: 10/04/06 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi. I love the concept behind this story and I was wondering if I could take this concept and make it into a poem. If I didn't ask, I would feel guitly. So if you would like to email me with a response, my email is
thank you so much

Author's Response: You're most welcome to use the concept - do leave a link in a review when it's written, I'd be interested to see it!

Reviewer: SimplyMe
Date: 09/07/06 23:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Delicate writing and nice use of words. Continue exploring like that, it'll lead you somewhere great.

Reviewer: mememe1313
Date: 08/27/06 7:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, that was really sweet. i did understand it the first time i read it, that was some good riting. xx

Reviewer: Say Atomic
Date: 08/08/06 11:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

That story is adorable. Oh my goodness. I like this one even better than the first. You really captured Harry's innocence in the beginning, and the end is sweet.

Reviewer: Elphin
Date: 07/12/06 21:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was awesome! I loved how original it was and the part about Draco at the end was a nice touch. This is the perfect kind of fic for a one-shot. Absolutely superb!!

Reviewer: qwerty83
Date: 06/19/06 14:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ohhhh so lovely. I felt so sad for wee Harry making all those umbrellas.

Reviewer: MinSev
Date: 06/07/06 12:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

This series is great. Please do a new one soon!!!

Reviewer: OsaAtTheDisco
Date: 06/06/06 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww. That's so sweet. ^-^
I love this writing style of yours that you have. You should keep writing like this.

Reviewer: peacock_girl15
Date: 06/05/06 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

i like it! them! i hope there is more! may I ask as to why you chose an origami theme? I found that quite interesting and new. It was cool.

Author's Response: You most certainly may ask! I have a mild origami obsession, which was rather rampant when I started writing this series. In fact, much of the imagery is drawn from personal experience (The bookshelf above my desk has a row of umbrellas along each shelve, and there's a pile of paper irises the siz of a small cat on my chest of drawers...)

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 06/04/06 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 1


Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 06/04/06 17:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

I know a story is beyond beautiful when I stop breathing. I just remembered to breathe.


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