i just have to say that this story made me cry, and I usually don't cry in fics, so well done! i thought it was excellent and i can't wait to read whatever else you write!
OMG, it's so sad. I mean, no offense, it was slightly predictable, but you did the whole emotion and so o thing very, very well. I'm glad ytou didn't overdo it like some people. I like it. A full five stars.
I loved it, it was awesome but sooooo sad. Great job!
I'm not really the wishy washy type, but at the end of your story, tears were rolling down my face. You write beautifully.
oh my god if there wasn't a bunch of people around, I would totaly be balling my eyes out. but it's a good story anyways. so sweet and so sad at the same time.
Beautiful (as I sob). I wish Harry could have seen his baby, but you're right, he's there watching. Very sad. I'm glad they got to talk before he died.
this chapter is taking forever to be validated!!
Author's Response: i know. But hopefully it won't be much longer.
That was good! Keep going w/ this story! It's good! I hope what Ginny was crying over wasn't harry's death!
oh very good cant wait for more
That was really cute. I love it
stupid malfoy, ruins everything!
Good story. How many chapters is the story going to be?
Author's Response: Thanks. Actually...it was originally a one-shot. Too long for a one-shot according to MNFF standards...but a one-shot, nonetheless. So, there'll only be one more chapter.
awww...i love it. but i dont like the feeling im getting from it....
please dont kill harry.......*tear* *sigh*
is it just me or does this scream disaster. great job i love all of your stories keep up the good work. i'm looking forward to your nest updates! :))
Hmmmm . . . looks very promising . . .but . . do i really want to know what was happening at the very beginning cuz it looks waaaayyy to sad 4 me . . .still really like the story!!
It's really good so far, but sad too! I think that someting bad is gonna happen next, so now i'm slightly frightenedish! But that's good, you can get a reader to feel emotion over what is happening!Keep up the good work!
I sure hope Harry isn't going to die especially if Ginny is pregnant...Looking forward to reading more! Also looking forward to the last chapter of Coming Home-it is one of my favorites!