Alot better than I thought. Made the relationship seem MUCH more human.
I love how you describe everything. It's really nice. I usually don't read poems because people don't describe things into detail. It's a really nice peice of work. MJ
Author's Response: Thanks!<3
You need more reviews. Why isn't anyone else reviewing this?
Author's Response: I don't know D:
Yay! I read your poem! It was great! But I don't think handsomer is a word, but that's ok. See you in about two minutes!
Author's Response: thanks!