I really enjoyed this. I followed a link, so I didn't know it was Ginny until I went and checked your summary. Actually, I thought it was Harry.
Anyway, I liked the style. It was quick to read and left a feeling of peace. Well done.
Author's Response: oh im glad you think it so good, thanks!
That is TERRIBLE! I don't mean bad writting or a bad point in the story but TERRIBLE as in sad, DEPRESSING! But it was also loving and romantic and beautiful. Nice job!
Author's Response: oh ...well thank you for the nice review!!
Oooh this one gave me gooosebumps! That's really good! 20/10!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love, Bella
Author's Response: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! than ks for the lovely review!
that was beautiful and very poetic.
Author's Response: thanks for a lovely review
Ohhhhhh. I loved the title so I read this, and it's very good! It's so sad. I love the last two lines and the breaking of the lines. :)
Author's Response: I really appreciate these excellent reviews!!!
*cry cry* so sad...so pretty...MUST READ MORE!!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
You are basically an amazing poet! I am so glad I randomly clicked your name in one of your reviews! Im gonna read the last poem now... *tear*
Author's Response: *laughs* THANKS SO MUCH!!!!
So, so, so sad but so beautiful. I loved it. Keep up the fantastic work!
~Love*Always~
Author's Response: thanks so much I luv you
really sad! but very good 2
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I know this was sad but it's really good poem i think.
I like this one! out of all of your poems, i think this one is my favorite! i loved it, loved it, loved it!!!
Author's Response: THANKS!!! I'm glad you think its your favorite. This was an extremely sad poem to write.
Well, I liked it. It was sad when I finally realized what was going on (I'm a bit slow). However, the rhythm is a bit peculiar.... And, no offence, I like poems with rhyming words better. It just seems to flow better to me. You have a way of writing, though! Keep it up!
Author's Response: thank you! It's ok I'm a bit slow on some things as well :]
This was sad, but it was really good too.
Author's Response: thank you, I know It made me cry while writing it. :)
Wounderful! Sad, but it really shows what someone will go through for someone they truly love. I loved it and it was worht the 30 seconds it took to read it. Love always...
Author's Response: I thank you for that
Hmmm... Very moving. I love the way the poem is structured, and it paints a picture of the entire scene. Although it makes me sad for Ginny, it is also a comfort that she is happy and whole again with Harry. The last line perfectly sums the whole poem up, bringing together every emotion. The issue of suicide can be a very difficult subject to write, but the poem flows beautifully. I am very impressed.
Author's Response: thanks
Hmmm... Very moving. I love the way the poem is structured, and it paints a picture of the entire scene. Although it makes me sad for Ginny, it is also a comfort that she is happy and whole again with Harry. The last line perfectly sums the whole poem up, bringing together every emotion. The issue of suicide can be a very difficult subject to write, but the poem flows beautifully. I am very impressed.
Author's Response: thank you
