Just read the whole little trilogy, and I really enjoyed it. Nice work!
i feel like they all were acting like teenage girls...really remus?"weirdness attack"? but it was really cute other than that.
I think it's funny that he's nervous.
Yay! *huggles* Wow I do that EVERY chapter. but they're all so bloody brilliant! Ack. Loved it ;D
YAY! *huggles* Ah, the joys of telling your friends. Haha. Loved it!!!
lol i LOVE remus!!! so funny about the 'trying to strangle you with a ribbin'!!! lol!!! im glad they kissed tho!!!
~OoOoOoOo~!!! i cant wait for the ball!!!
Your story "First Kiss" was quite good. I liked how you kept the character of the mauraders similar to the original books. There is only one minor error. Isn't the Yule ball only for the triwizard tournament? So it wouldn't be called that if the tournament didn't take place there, it would ust be a regular ball. Keep up the good work!
Your story "First Kiss" was quite good. I liked how you kept the character of the mauraders similar to the original books. There is only one minor error. Isn't the Yule ball only for the triwizard tournament? So it wouldn't be called that if the tournament didn't take place there, it would ust be a regular ball. Keep up the good work!
That was simply gorgeous! Awww!
And are you sure this is your first romance fic? It's too good to be a first-timer!
By the way, only because I'm a little picky "Sirius grew serious. (Ooh, nice wordplay there.)" was the part in brackets supposed to be a little humor thing by you? Either way, I found it funny, so yeah...
10/10 for sure! Well done!
keep writing, youre a good writer, i mean auther ;]
Awww that was so cute! I loved how Remus and Peter reacted. I mean the are seventeen, after all! In most of these kinds of fics Remus has his nose in a book and Peter is all twitchy, so I loved the character change. And I also like how you put 'the Beginning' instead of 'the End.' Good Job!!!
Love the way you ended it. I suppose this doesn't matter, but...who cares. I listen to music while reading fics and right now it is "Some Hearts By Carire Underwood"
"...I need chacolate..." that is sooooooooo funny
Yes, I did like it! Thanks for writing it! Have you written more? Stories, I mean. I'll try to look for them.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've written lots of stories, and a couple poems, too. You can find them all by going to my bio page and scrolling to the bottom. Highly recommend "Voldy Therapy", my relatively new humor fic! ;) (<--shameless advertising) Thanks for the review!!!
