Reviews For First Kiss
Reviewer: Aquamarine39
Date: 04/21/12 8:06
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Just read the whole little trilogy, and I really enjoyed it. Nice work!

Reviewer: Eowynatheart
Date: 08/09/10 19:28
Chapter: Unwanted Advice

i feel like they all were acting like teenage girls...really remus?"weirdness attack"? but it was really cute other than that.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/27/09 11:17
Chapter: Christmas Eve

This is such a cute story.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/27/09 11:08
Chapter: Unwanted Advice

I think it's funny that he's nervous.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/27/09 11:04
Chapter: The Invitation

Yay!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 07/04/08 11:05
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Yay! *huggles* Wow I do that EVERY chapter. but they're all so bloody brilliant! Ack. Loved it ;D

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 07/04/08 10:57
Chapter: Unwanted Advice

YAY! *huggles* Ah, the joys of telling your friends. Haha. Loved it!!!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 07/04/08 10:49
Chapter: The Invitation

Yay!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 01/28/08 23:10
Chapter: Christmas Eve

lol i LOVE remus!!! so funny about the 'trying to strangle you with a ribbin'!!! lol!!! im glad they kissed tho!!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 01/28/08 22:56
Chapter: Unwanted Advice

~OoOoOoOo~!!! i cant wait for the ball!!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 01/28/08 22:52
Chapter: The Invitation

yay!!! she said yes!!!

Reviewer: ginnyrox_26
Date: 01/11/08 15:26
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Your story "First Kiss" was quite good. I liked how you kept the character of the mauraders similar to the original books. There is only one minor error. Isn't the Yule ball only for the triwizard tournament? So it wouldn't be called that if the tournament didn't take place there, it would ust be a regular ball. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: ginnyrox_26
Date: 01/11/08 15:25
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Your story "First Kiss" was quite good. I liked how you kept the character of the mauraders similar to the original books. There is only one minor error. Isn't the Yule ball only for the triwizard tournament? So it wouldn't be called that if the tournament didn't take place there, it would ust be a regular ball. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 11/27/07 4:24
Chapter: Christmas Eve

That was simply gorgeous! Awww!

And are you sure this is your first romance fic? It's too good to be a first-timer!

By the way, only because I'm a little picky "Sirius grew serious. (Ooh, nice wordplay there.)" was the part in brackets supposed to be a little humor thing by you? Either way, I found it funny, so yeah...

10/10 for sure! Well done!

Reviewer: R_U_LDS_2
Date: 11/10/07 10:09
Chapter: Christmas Eve

keep writing, youre a good writer, i mean auther ;]

Reviewer: CookieMonsterLovee
Date: 09/02/07 1:16
Chapter: Christmas Eve

thats really good (Y)

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/06/07 8:10
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Awww that was so cute! I loved how Remus and Peter reacted. I mean the are seventeen, after all! In most of these kinds of fics Remus has his nose in a book and Peter is all twitchy, so I loved the character change. And I also like how you put 'the Beginning' instead of 'the End.' Good Job!!!

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 07/11/07 19:20
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Love the way you ended it. I suppose this doesn't matter, but...who cares. I listen to music while reading fics and right now it is "Some Hearts By Carire Underwood"

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 07/11/07 19:14
Chapter: Unwanted Advice

"...I need chacolate..." that is sooooooooo funny

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/25/07 18:27
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Yes, I did like it! Thanks for writing it! Have you written more? Stories, I mean. I'll try to look for them.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've written lots of stories, and a couple poems, too. You can find them all by going to my bio page and scrolling to the bottom. Highly recommend "Voldy Therapy", my relatively new humor fic! ;) (<--shameless advertising) Thanks for the review!!!

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