Reviewer: Natalie_Riddle
Date: 01/25/07 19:44
Chapter: Vow of The Patronus

Beutiful, that is all i can and will say

Reviewer: 180goddess hotline
Date: 06/20/06 16:35
Chapter: Vow of The Patronus

very beautiful, I found it had a slightly wimsical flavor too. I also liked how you didn't mention any specific characters or events in this poem, I find if you use a character or an event that sounds best in story form in a poem, it tends to make the poem to prosaic.

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 05/25/06 3:27
Chapter: Vow of The Patronus

Wow, beautifully written.

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