Reviews For Just A Kiss
Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/14/09 19:06
Chapter: Just A Kiss

aww this story is amazing! i love how you went back to the fourth book with the kiss she gave harry, and the kiss we can guess about with ''vicky'' haha. but really, very good job

Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 04/17/08 20:38
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Very sweet!!

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/05/07 10:11
Chapter: Just A Kiss

aaaw this is lovely, is there any chance you would write one about rose without scorpius?

Reviewer: aggry
Date: 06/16/07 17:51
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Very cute and sweet, made me feel all fuzzy inside! :-)

Reviewer: james_fanatic
Date: 06/01/07 5:49
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Wow. That was amazing! I really loved how you described all the kisses Hermione's been given and then have Ron come in! Ooooooh! That was so good! Good job!

~Jamie~

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 05/09/07 17:13
Chapter: Just A Kiss

I thought that Hermione reading fantasy stories was a bit odd. She is a smart girl that knows her facts. I didn't think that fairy tales would interest her, but maybe so. I've never really thought that Hermione was love-sick, but I guess that's what you depict. It's interesting looking back at the types of kisses, though. The detail in that was perfect, like you really were in her mind. Hw do you do that?

When you talked about an older boy kiss, was it at the Yule Ball? Krum was an older boy, and her hair was in curls that night.

How did her mother and father mend her heart when she was off at Hogwarts? Did you mean in the summer?

On the second to last paragraph in the first sentence poUring is misspelled. You might want to go back and fix that.

That overall was beautiful! You can write romance to it really depicts how beautiful young love is! Wow! That was amazing!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the story so much, and I'll try and answer all your comments here.. Regarding the fantasy stories, I was thinking along the lines of the kinds of fairy tales a parent would read to their children when they are young. Hermione would have read about that before she moved onto the non-fiction she currently is a fan of. She is, of course, a very smart and fact-orientated girl as you have said. But there is also as light-herated side to her, I think, that would remember and cherish the stories which first introduced her to the world of literature. As for Hermione beign love-sick, I never conciously thought of her that way as I was writing, but I suppose that is what it is. And about me being in her mind! I just wrote what I thought Hermione would feel - I so glad you think I captured her so well! The older boy I mentioned was indeed Krum at the Yule Ball! And the scene between Hermione and her mother took place during the Christmas break in HBP. I'll go check that spelling mistake now, and thanks again for a wonderful review!

Reviewer: Meowzas
Date: 11/22/06 17:10
Chapter: Just A Kiss

So cute! Don't we all wish we could have that kiss. Well...I know I have.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 09/10/06 1:00
Chapter: Just A Kiss

So cute!

Reviewer: Harriet
Date: 07/28/06 21:20
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Very intresting. I also stopped believing in that kind of thing. Oh well! Maybe there is hope! Wonderful.

Reviewer: ginny91
Date: 07/26/06 15:10
Chapter: Just A Kiss

i think that it is good.

Reviewer: futureMRSpadfoot
Date: 06/30/06 21:15
Chapter: Just A Kiss

I really liked it, but i thought there should have been more emphisis (sp?) on the kiss that changed her world. I like that part about how the kiss was far from anywhere she'd searched for it. Your a really good writer..keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I purposely focused very lightly on that final kiss, becasue I wanted to convey the fact it was not the physical act of the kiss itself that was what changed her world, but the feeling behind the kiss. Thanks for your opinion though!

Reviewer: ProngsWorshiper
Date: 06/21/06 15:35
Chapter: Just A Kiss

That is the absolute sweetest thing I've ever read! So cute and fluffy and obvious to how perfect the pair is together. My only regret is that now it is over. (*sobs*) Read my story! It's new and I need reviews!

Reviewer: lunalovy
Date: 06/20/06 15:01
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Are you going to make a follow up? If not thats ok because it was so sweet I loved! ;)

Author's Response: No, this is just a fluffy little one-shot I was inspired to write during exam time. I'm glad you liked it so much though!!

Reviewer: 4evahpluva17
Date: 06/18/06 21:23
Chapter: Just A Kiss

lots of symbolism and guessing but it was good just the same

Reviewer: badkarma
Date: 06/11/06 18:46
Chapter: Just A Kiss

I LOVED IT! I am using it as a fan fic on my podcast so EVERYONE can hear it. Please keep up the good work. I enjoyed it to the fullest extent

Reviewer: LillysOfTheValley
Date: 06/07/06 18:58
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Beautiful lyrical Elegai like a song without music...
awwww

Reviewer: flyinwithdragons
Date: 06/06/06 10:48
Chapter: Just A Kiss

oh wow that wa a beautiful story. This story has such a melifluous flow, i love the way the words melt into each other. aw it makes me feel all fuzzy inside! lol i give you a 10/10 keep writing!

Reviewer: lordofthering222
Date: 06/05/06 18:41
Chapter: Just A Kiss

way to cute. i loved it. great short story. i hope you write some more.

Reviewer: MrsMurphy
Date: 06/05/06 0:15
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Aw! That was really cute and well written! Going on my favorites for sure!

Reviewer: MrsMurphy
Date: 06/05/06 0:12
Chapter: Just A Kiss

Aw! That was really cute and well written! Going on my favorites for sure!

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