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Name: Aquamarine39 (Signed) · Date: 06/22/12 23:14 · For: One-Shot
Hahahahaha! I laughed out loud at the last bit!!

Name: Hiyas-said-hi (Signed) · Date: 12/21/09 15:11 · For: One-Shot
-Gigggle- That was funny! Short, but funny!

Name: lupins_girl2006 (Signed) · Date: 07/26/08 2:53 · For: One-Shot

Author's Response: Hufflepuffs unite! Really though, Mad-eye is easy to tweak. Thanks for the review.

Name: flossingstringmint (Signed) · Date: 11/01/07 22:42 · For: One-Shot

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: TigerDeus (Signed) · Date: 09/22/07 1:14 · For: One-Shot
Too funny.

"CONSTANT VIGILANCE!" ... Bwahahahahaha.

The part where the pair of them interrupted his lecture so cheekily struck me as very Gred-and-Forge-ish.

Author's Response: Well, I stole the line from the best. Tonks strikes me someone who caused the same sort of trouble as Fred and George, and Kingsley would stand there forever... Anything can happen in fanfic right?

Name: cloakxstonexwand (Signed) · Date: 07/23/07 10:57 · For: One-Shot
HA! short but sweet! oh boy, death by lecture....

Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry I just got around to responding by the way. Ya, I think Moody is hilarious when he's mad.

Name: i_am_ria_black (Signed) · Date: 06/15/07 8:37 · For: One-Shot
.......As the minutes stretched on and Moody showed no signs of stopping, Tonks and Kingsley glanced at each other and screamed, “CONSTANT VIGILANCE!”
ha ha ha!

Author's Response: Thanks. I loved that line from the book.

Name: i_am_ria_black (Signed) · Date: 06/15/07 8:34 · For: One-Shot
.......As the minutes stretched on and Moody showed no signs of stopping, Tonks and Kingsley glanced at each other and screamed, “CONSTANT VIGILANCE!”
ha ha ha!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 04/16/07 18:30 · For: One-Shot
This is so funny!! lol!!

Author's Response: Thanks alot for you review!

Name: Dory_the_Fishie (Signed) · Date: 03/25/07 16:53 · For: One-Shot
For as much as I love Tonks and Kingsley, I haven’t read many fics with them together like this. It’s positively lovely, I have to say. I enjoyed this immensely. =)

I was really impressed with the characterization in this fic, especially Tonks. Sometimes I think people can’t quite nail Tonks; she’s always too much or too little of something not right. But I think here, you did a great job. Everything was something Tonks would do, and her interaction with Kingsley was wonderful. I especially loved this line: “It’s not my fault,” Tonks proclaimed. “It’s my lack of ability to behave myself.” Lol, it reminds me of Sirius in a way, which I think is appropriate.

I love the idea of somebody playing a birthday trick on Moody, but I think I particularly love that it’s Tonks and Kingsley. At first, Kingsley doesn’t seem like exactly the type of person who would do this, but you made it seem perfectly plausible. He and Tonks meshed really well together in this; they were believable. And it’s good that you threw in a bit of Kingsley questioning why he’s even doing this, whereas Tonks seems to have no qualms about it at all. At the risk of sounding repetitive, everything is wonderfully in character. Excellent job there.

I do have some minor nitpicks, though. First: They appeared on dirt road north of small Muggle village. I think there should be an ‘a’ before dirt road. Also: In that instant the sky was filled with dragons, Catherine wheels, rockets, and sparklers flying around the yard; making a great deal of noise, too. The semicolon doesn’t work here. Anything that follows a semicolon has to be able to stand on its own as a complete sentence. ‘Making a great deal of noise, too’ is a dependent clause, and thus cannot come after a semicolon. And finally, birthday doesn’t need to be capitalized.

I adore the humor in this. I find humor extremely difficult to write, because different people find different things funny. But here, you managed everything very well. “I think he’s mad,” Tonks stated. I love the obviousness of this; it just…like I keep saying, it’s just very Tonks. I see a tiny bit of Sirius in her in this fic, and I think that’s great, because I think she probably would have been influenced by Sirius a little. As they left Tonks was sure she heard Moody murmur something about the best pair of Aurors the Ministry had seen in a long time. Moody, you old softie. :-p That’s a great line, that is.

So overall, awesome job! I really enjoyed reading this; I may have to check out some more of your fics in the future. :D

Author's Response: *Jaw drop* A wonderful review from a mod! Thank you so much! I personally love Tonks and find her a blast to write. I got alot of my ideas for her actions based on her response as to why McGonagall didn't make her a prefect. The "lack of ability" line is paraphased from the book. I loved it too much not to use it. As for Kingsley, I see him and Tonks natural working well together with his seriousness and her playfulness playing off of each other. Also since they work together both as Aurors and in the Order I think this wouldn't be the first time Tonks has talked Kingsley into doing somthing. And remember, it's the serious ones you have to watch out for. Thanks a bunch for the nitpicks, everything helps.

Name: the_evenstar (Signed) · Date: 11/30/06 19:17 · For: One-Shot
Positively hilarious! Oh, I do love a good humor... And Tonks! You know, before this story, I really hadn't given her much thought as a character for a fanfic... But she's absolutely amazing! And in character, too - I could believe everything she said and did. And it was so cute that she talked Kingsley into doing the prank with her! Lots of lighthearted fun - I really enjoyed it! Good job!

Holiday love from,
*The Order of the Ravenclaw House Elves*

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Oh, Tonks is really a blast a write, especially when teamed up with Kingsley. They really do work well together; Kingsley's serious countering Tonk's playfulness. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks again.

Name: Sly Severus (Signed) · Date: 07/03/06 0:48 · For: One-Shot
Hehe! This was really cute. It really sounds like something Tonks would do. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tonks is a troublemaker isn't she? I just wish there was a fic of her at Hogwarts...

Name: gemini828 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/23/06 10:14 · For: One-Shot
This story was very funny. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/06 0:01 · For: One-Shot
LOL, this was a really funny peice! The fact that Tonks could talk Kingley into this was great- I think it's totally in character for her. And for them to shoult CONSTANT VIGILANCE back at him- it was probably the best birthday gift Moody could ask for! Great work! (only problem, it's Grimmauld PLACE- not Palace)

Author's Response: Oops, need to fick that. Thank you for pointing it out. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The CONSTANT VIGILANCE part came to me early in my draft and I couldn't stop giggling every time I read it. Thanks so much!

Author's Response: Sorry "fix" that. Oh and I put alot of slashes in there too. I really need to go to bed, I way to tired to think straight at the moment.

Name: POTCgirl1337 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/06 17:52 · For: One-Shot

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it.

Name: Mira Miracle (Signed) · Date: 05/29/06 12:22 · For: One-Shot
I really like this fic, you've done a good job. I like especially the beginning, first you think it's Harry who'll get the present. Alone the idea of giving Moody such a present is funny. And I like Tonks' statement in the end, it's exactly the thing to calm Moody. I'm excited how this will go on...

Author's Response: I glad you liked it and I managed to trick at least one person. However, this story is a one-shot, so it is completed. There were three other enteries to this challenge if you want to read more, all different and good in their own ways.

Name: Bookwormy (Signed) · Date: 05/28/06 10:29 · For: One-Shot
Hahahahahahahahahhahahhaha..sorry..hilarious story! 10/10!

Author's Response: Nothing to be sorry about. I glad you liked it, thanks.

Name: connieewing (Signed) · Date: 05/24/06 19:52 · For: One-Shot
awwww I like it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Khrys (Signed) · Date: 05/24/06 10:18 · For: One-Shot
Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you, this one was so much fun to write.

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