Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/25/06 19:57
Chapter: The World I Once Knew

Your best poem hufflepuffgal! 10xBravo. You have captured Hermione's character (you are very, very good at doing that by the way) and drawn it out over the six years we all know and love. All the stanzas flowed from each other beautifully and show her journey towards maturity. The first three and last stanza are the best. Comparing them the reader can plainly make out the old, insecure Hermione and the brave, smart, caring Hermione that little girl has become. Wonderful!

Pax.

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review!!

Reviewer: Hermionefan_6
Date: 05/27/06 12:51
Chapter: The World I Once Knew

WOW! that was good. I thought you really captured the feelings Hermione might of had when she first recived her Hogwarts letter...good job!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: T o n k s
Date: 05/26/06 8:29
Chapter: The World I Once Knew

*rereads*
I really did think it was Harry D:

Author's Response: Really? Do you think it would have been better if it had been abot Harry? It really is about Hermione.

Reviewer: T o n k s
Date: 05/26/06 8:28
Chapter: The World I Once Knew

Oh, I thought it was about Harry! o.o;;
Him finding out he's a wizard and leaving everthing!!
But whatever!


Author's Response: Didn't you read the summary? I guess, now that I think about it, the poem would have made sence from Harry point of veiw, but, alas, it was ment to be a Hermione poem.

Reviewer: T o n k s
Date: 05/24/06 17:37
Chapter: The World I Once Knew

How sweet, and who's this about? o.0


Just....kidding...but I just skimmer through it, so yeah. >.>

Author's Response: Hermione! Yeah... whatever! I read your poem & reviewed. Sweetness!

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