Wow I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Hey Gemma, great story! I really enjoyed it. I really liked your characterisation, especially the girls. The first scene when they're in the bathroom discussing their plan is lovely. I've always liked scenes where girls are putting make-up on. Pansy and Draco was also very endearing. "He could only say three words, and Gregory Goyle kept on picking his nose. Gregory’s nose, that is. Not Draco’s." I think that was my favorite line, it was so funny, it made me laugh out loud. The only problem I found is that there is too much american slang, for a second I forgot they were at Hogwarts. That's the only problem the rest was just lovely. Congratulations on getting thrid place!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I noticed that there was a bit of American slang, but ´not being British it would have been hard for me to change it to something else. Maybe next time I'll get a brit picker. Thanks again! PS- I like scenes with girls putting on make up too. :P

sorry... my keyboard jamed. It really is a great story!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

this is great!!!!!!! It really is!!! It made me laugh soo loud!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it made you laugh!

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks!