this practically made me cry! it's really sweet, and you totally have all the emotions right. your characterization is definetely right. great job!
That was so sad!!! Oh my, but I LOVE the ending. I am a die-hard Hermione/Ron shipper, and to see the emotions played out in this fic were amazing!!
I love the plot in this fic, it was so carefully organized, and I love how you wrote it from both POVs..
The day we found out we couldn’t have children.
OMG, I seriously gasped out loud. THat was SO sad.
I loved this fic, it is so going on my favorites list. Great work! ~Lindsey :)
Oh this is an awesome, awesome fic. Very deep, very powerful. It's so sad and heartbreaking in the middle though. GwndolynJames, you are a really awesome writer. 3 authors have made me almost cry tonight, and that is an astonishing feat. Why? Because I almost never cry during sad books or sad movies, and to make my eyes hurt because I want to cry and I won't cry, is a truly astonishing feat!
I just loved this story it really touched me, well done. *dabs tissue to eyes* just like real life,eh. Kudos to you.
great story. i liked it. it was great . but who was it about?
that was beautiful, it really was. Ron seemed like Ron, and Hermione seemed like Hermione, which is alot more than most fanfiction writers achieve- but you didn't stop there, you continued and made a great story! you really have a way with words.
Sweet. I loved the changing narrators. Keep up the good work!
yeah! they gotta back together
*does irish jig on top of table*
yeah! they gotta back together
*does irish jig on top of table*
yeah! they gotta back together
*does irish jig on top of table*
yeah! they gotta back together
*does irish jig on top of table*
i almost was mad for you making them break up...but then you didn't, so i love you now!
you idiot You made me cry! My mum walks in the room like what the...? Yes so I had to explain why I was crying over unpublished writing! hahah Great Job!
That was absolutely gorgeous. I think every married couple goes through such a period in their relationship-the volitile nature of Ron and Hermione's, not to mention the fact that they are both so stubborn and strong-willed, makes it almost inevitable for them. Very realistic and well-written.
Awwwwww.... That was sad. Yet so good at the same time.
Beutiful. So sad and happy all at once. The only thing that bothers me a bit, though, is Why can't thay have any children? The'd be so happy with a baby, other than that, lovely story.
That was a very touching read. I think you use words and feelings tremendously. Keep going!