Awesome! I love it! ~MJ
This is a really good story!! It might be nice to write another one-shot, or find some way to do another chapter in this story. Say hi to Ginger for me!!
Great story again!!
Very interesting...good story.
i Like it. Petunia is os jeloues of LIly. If i had sibling who was a witch or wizard i would be proud.
that was really cool have you though about righting what goes on after this you can even skip a few years if you'd like but i like your writing i think you should go on
Great, absolutely awesome!! It explains so much!
i love your one-shote you should make it a real story hear on mugglenet. i world read it!!
yah i liked your story alot i hope that you decide to countine
You are so good at writing...I love this story! This is such a good way to tell the story of how Lily got her letter!
A great bit of backstory! Loved the bits about James, Serius, etc., that showed both originality and knowledge of JKR's characters. Keep writing!
I added an extra comma in there for ya...
psh... I totally did it on purpose [/spam]
As, I already said in the email I just finished writing you... I've always wondered how muggle-borns go about getting their school supplies and all that jazz, in Diagon Alley. : >
Great job! I can just imagine little Sirius charming the heck out of all the ladies, even as a little 11 year old. Haha.
I like your story. it was interesting. The diologe sounded a little un natral at points, but besides that it was good.
Great story! I love that you made Lily get the letter and you added Narcissa, James, Sirius, and Neville's Father and Grandmother! I really loved it and wished you made it chapters instead of one shot becasue I would love to hear more! :D
I liked your story! Keep up the good work.
I WANT A BARN OWL!!!
Ok not really, I know they belong out in the wild and all that, but I REALLY, REALLY, WANT ONE!!!
Thank you for giving one to Lily, they are my most favorite owls of all time.
Good. Though I think if the mother's grandmother hadnt been a witch, they wouldve been a lot more surprised.Such as Lily was before her mom told her about her great-grand-mom. Oh well. Sirius turned James bald? Nice take! I enjoyed it.