Reviews For Lily's Letter
Reviewer: N_ReadeR
Date: 08/11/07 15:32
Chapter: Lily's Letter

cute

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 07/09/07 23:26
Chapter: Lily's Letter

Awesome! I love it! ~MJ

Reviewer: voldie4eva
Date: 05/11/07 21:02
Chapter: Lily's Letter

This is a really good story!! It might be nice to write another one-shot, or find some way to do another chapter in this story. Say hi to Ginger for me!!
Great story again!!

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/12/06 15:37
Chapter: Lily's Letter

Very interesting...good story.

TOMROHT

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 06/02/06 21:29
Chapter: Lily's Letter

i Like it. Petunia is os jeloues of LIly. If i had sibling who was a witch or wizard i would be proud.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 06/01/06 0:02
Chapter: Lily's Letter

that was really cool have you though about righting what goes on after this you can even skip a few years if you'd like but i like your writing i think you should go on

Reviewer: bookworm2011
Date: 05/25/06 21:12
Chapter: Lily's Letter

Great, absolutely awesome!! It explains so much!

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 05/23/06 17:45
Chapter: Lily's Letter

i love your one-shote you should make it a real story hear on mugglenet. i world read it!!

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 05/23/06 17:44
Chapter: Lily's Letter

yah i liked your story alot i hope that you decide to countine

Reviewer: Malika Potter
Date: 05/23/06 15:25
Chapter: Lily's Letter

You are so good at writing...I love this story! This is such a good way to tell the story of how Lily got her letter!

-Malika Potter

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 05/22/06 23:25
Chapter: Lily's Letter

A great bit of backstory! Loved the bits about James, Serius, etc., that showed both originality and knowledge of JKR's characters. Keep writing!

Reviewer: BrierRose17
Date: 05/22/06 21:16
Chapter: Lily's Letter

I added an extra comma in there for ya...
psh... I totally did it on purpose [/spam]
lol

Reviewer: BrierRose17
Date: 05/22/06 21:15
Chapter: Lily's Letter

As, I already said in the email I just finished writing you... I've always wondered how muggle-borns go about getting their school supplies and all that jazz, in Diagon Alley. : >
Great job! I can just imagine little Sirius charming the heck out of all the ladies, even as a little 11 year old. Haha.

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 05/22/06 20:31
Chapter: Lily's Letter

I like your story. it was interesting. The diologe sounded a little un natral at points, but besides that it was good.

Reviewer: T o n k s
Date: 05/22/06 19:45
Chapter: Lily's Letter

Great story! I love that you made Lily get the letter and you added Narcissa, James, Sirius, and Neville's Father and Grandmother! I really loved it and wished you made it chapters instead of one shot becasue I would love to hear more! :D

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl13
Date: 05/22/06 15:53
Chapter: Lily's Letter

I liked your story! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 05/22/06 10:03
Chapter: Lily's Letter

I WANT A BARN OWL!!!
Ok not really, I know they belong out in the wild and all that, but I REALLY, REALLY, WANT ONE!!!
Thank you for giving one to Lily, they are my most favorite owls of all time.

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 05/22/06 6:26
Chapter: Lily's Letter

Good. Though I think if the mother's grandmother hadnt been a witch, they wouldve been a lot more surprised.Such as Lily was before her mom told her about her great-grand-mom. Oh well. Sirius turned James bald? Nice take! I enjoyed it.

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