Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/07/11 0:09
Chapter: 'Tis the Art of Being Confused
Good writing,spelling,and grammar.
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 23:53
Chapter: A Ball, Some Beaus, And A Horrible Disaster
Good writing adn stuff. Honestly,I think you did a good job. By most other authors this would've been a boring chapter. You made it........bearable.
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 23:45
Chapter: Before-the-Ball Worries
Good story,writing,spelling,and grammar!
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 23:39
Chapter: Yet Another Potter Problem
0.0
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 23:34
Chapter: Dates, Drama, and Dresses
When Emily put her dress on,I beleive the colour you were thinking about is Navy Blue
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 23:27
Chapter: Total Bliss and Happiness-Right?
This looks like it might be good. Good writing,Spelling,and grammar!
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 14:02
Chapter: No Explanations?
Ok, it's official- James is my favorite. Ah, so much tragedy, so much romance........... I can't wait to finish the story. You're a great author.
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 13:56
Chapter: Pride Bruised and Head Confused
Okay- confession time. I seriously started crying, especially at the end. Another wonderful chapter. And by the way, my favorite character is either James or Lily, but I'm leaning towards James.
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 13:44
Chapter: More Fights and Flights, But No Kisses
I love this chapter, mainly because I feel just like Lily did sometimes... Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 11:49
Chapter: Remarkable, Revolting Surprises
Oh, so much drama! I love it! I've never read Pride and Prejudice, but I think I won't have to. This story is probably better.
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 11:38
Chapter: 'Tis the Art of Being Confused
Yet another great chapter! You're very talented.
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 11:28
Chapter: A Ball, Some Beaus, And A Horrible Disaster
So romantic.............. so....... cheesey. But I did like the chapter.
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 11:19
Chapter: Before-the-Ball Worries
Oooooooooooooh! Su-SPI-cious! I excited to read and and find out more about this 'Willard' character! All in all, a wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/31/09 11:09
Chapter: Yet Another Potter Problem
Nice chapter. I liked how you worked in the quotes. You're a very promising author.
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/30/09 19:55
Chapter: Dates, Drama, and Dresses
Oh, my god. The chapter's just too..... girly for me. But I liked it. It was well written and a rather good read.
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/30/09 19:39
Chapter: Total Bliss and Happiness-Right?
I love this story! It's just so much like real life! Me and my friends are like that, and I'm either Alice or Lily. Either way, Stormbringer, this story is one of those rare cases that people can really relate to, and I really love it!
Reviewer: Goddess Athena
Date: 12/18/09 16:23
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
I LOOOOOVED THAT!!! I am a HUGE Jane Austen and Harry Potter fan, so that was like, AMAZING!!! I love it! after i read it I realized how alike the stories actually were. You know, James and Lilly, Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy! I just loved the idea that James was Mr. Darcy! thank you soooo much for writing that! i really enjoyed that!
Reviewer: Lily-Rain
Date: 11/11/09 1:54
Chapter: Before-the-Ball Worries
Someone's been reading Pride and Prejudice, I like your taste and your writing, very nice.
Reviewer: Lily-Rain
Date: 11/11/09 1:50
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
Applause
Reviewer: Lily-Rain
Date: 11/09/09 23:35
Chapter: Before-the-Ball Worries
Someone's been reading Pride and Prejudice, I like your taste and your writing, very nice.
