awww why do james and lily have so many fights? and why doesnt she just say exaclty whats on her mind???
Author's Response: I guess I would kind of know, so maybe it's 'cause she doesn't want to believe herself.
WOW! Nice chapter. That really stirs things up bit! Keep Going !! I love the story
Really good I've been in the hospital so this is the first time I've been able to read it. Plz up-date soon ~Ginny~
yay!! you updated!! this chapter was awsome...your writier's block really paid off!
Luved it! Pride and Prejudice is one of my favourite movies (the old one, not the newer one). Keep it up, and please update soon!
Luved it! Pride and Prejudice is one of my favourite movies (the old one, not the newer one). Keep it up, and please update soon!
nice chapter....
it really nice the way u r presenting it just as p&p
Awww! That was such a good letter! Who'll Lily believe in? Plz update soon you're really good!
I like this chapter. What will Lily say to James' letter? Hm....I cna't wait to find out what happens. Wjere is Emily? Update soon!
i realize samlin is the oldest sister and lily is elizabeth, james is darcy, willard is whats-his-name (the enemy) and siruis is bingley. i know bellas the sister of bingley and emily is lydia but who are the rest of the characters?
otherwise, love the story keep goin
Author's Response: Okay, I'll just say them all.Lily-Elizabeth Bennet
SamLin-Jane Bennet
Emily-Lydia Bennet
Alice-Mary Bennet (but she's not really based on her, since Mary--at least I don't think--is a big part of the story and I wanted Alice in mine)
Katie-Kitty (ditto with Alice's character)James-Mr. Darcy
Sirius-Mr. Bingley (though he's not as shy, unless, of course, he's around SamLin)
Remus-no one
Peter-no one
(I had to have all the Marauders!)Willard-Mr. Wickham (Mr. Darcy's old comrade but now turned enemies)
Bella-Mr. Bingley's sister, Caroline (she doesn't really come into the story that much though)
Vernon Dursley-Mr. Collins, the one Lizzie is supposed to marry
Petunia-Charlotte (Lizzie's oldest best friend)
Trinity (though I shouldn't say, but no one seems curious about her)-Georgia DarcyNow I think I've covered all the characters.
oh,WOW. I love it, and it really does follow the Pride And Prejudice plot. Way to go; that's one of my fav. stories!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying not to stray far from it, but still trying to keep to Harry Potter and my own style of writing. It's hard work.
wait...are you saying that vernon is their cousin?
wait...are you saying that vernon is their cousin?
i'm ready for the next cap.
Author's Response: I'll get that chapter up as soon as possible, but I'm suffering from a minor writer's block for this story (since I'm working on another one for fantiction, but it's still very terrible).
wow, nice beginning. can i use that for my fan-fic? i've been trying to think of a setup like that...
Author's Response: I'd prefer if you don't start it like that, but I'll offer some suggestions. Perhaps dialogue, and then description?
Hey, great story:) I love the way you write, and as a Rowling- and Austen- fan, I advice you to keep writing. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Oh..that's one of the nicest things anyone has said about my writing. All the people I know seem to hate it.
Can't Wait For More :D
OMG! I love this chapter! It's one of my favourite scenes in the movie too. Update soon!
that was awesome! best chapter yet!! update soon
cool chapter...
it is my fav scene too