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Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 11/24/07 12:33 · For: Pride Bruised and Head Confused
Wow! the drama is so intense!!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: twirlergirl583 (Signed) · Date: 11/23/07 22:56 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
*Standing ovation with much loud cheering!*

Absolutely brilliant story. It had the perfect sweet ending that everyone new was eventually coming, yet it was still very good to read it. I love your writing, it is amazing to read your work!

And to read a story from start to finish, wow...it's been a while since a I've watched a story become complete. And for that, thanks and congradulations on creating a spetacular story.

The characters were brilliant: Lily and James were very well written with only the most minor glitches here and there, which made them seem even more realistic than you initially created them to be. Sirius and SamLin were also wonderful characters! They did a great job in their supporting rolls! And your various other characters were very fun to read, too.

Overall, I think you accomplished what you had inteded, and I hope to read stories that you write in the future!


Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 11/23/07 8:53 · For: Before-the-Ball Worries
This is an awesome start!!!!!!!!!! Great job:)

Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 11/23/07 8:44 · For: Yet Another Potter Problem
AHHHH that fateful day,
Are you going to mention a L/S friendship or is it just this one shot? anyway, good suspense.:)

Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 11/23/07 8:39 · For: Dates, Drama, and Dresses
Shopping!!!!!!! the most exciting thing in the world, great chapter!!!

Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 11/23/07 8:33 · For: Total Bliss and Happiness-Right?
Wow. they seem like great friends. I pray you dont pair them of with the marauders because thats cliche but other wise your story seeeeemsAMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Name: tiger_lily821 (Signed) · Date: 11/23/07 8:00 · For: No, No, No
I like this chapter! One thing, though- Slughorn partners Peter up with Sirius and Frank, though later on it only mentions Frank. Otherwise, good job!

Name: Kyoko Yuri (Signed) · Date: 11/22/07 13:42 · For: Pride Bruised and Head Confused
you wrote this chapter perfectly

Name: i_hart_wheezys (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 16:54 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
that was cute! good job (:

Name: Afifa (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 14:40 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
loved it! please do not end it... pleassseee...

Name: lily_death_flower (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 14:31 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
Finally. that took forever. really good, but kind of short. is that the end? i hope not i really like. make another James/Lily fic soon. your a really good writer.

Author's Response: I think I'm gonna give up on fanfiction. Sometimes I don't always agree with the mods, so my writing has been going nowhere. (I've submitted a story three different times and it's been rejected for three different reasons.) Thank you for your support, though. :-)

Name: rainydaze (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 14:00 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
Really great story! :)

Name: Passion For Prongs (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 9:47 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
I think at this part you strayed away from the movie, and got into your own writeing, and it was fabulous.

If this is the last chapter, next time you do a James and Lily fic, make it your own. You're a great writer, and I think you could be even better by making a story your own.

Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I was going to write a post-HP DH Disregarded story based loosely on Les Mis, but I think I'm going to take a break for a while. I am going to submit some chapters of another James/Lily fic I started writing a while ago, though.

Name: R_U_LDS_2 (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 9:44 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
i love this story, keep writing.

Name: hpluvsgw (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 0:09 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
awww... How beautiful! Totally luv the way that u incorporated Jane Austens pride and predjudiced into the world of JKR! Great job!

Name: wyowerewolf (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 21:28 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
well done! wonderful ending, i love how you drifted away from the story at the end, so it was more independent.

Name: heartachin4harry (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 20:00 · For: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
So cute! I like it! This isn't the end, is it? I hope not.

Name: blazingginny503 (Signed) · Date: 11/18/07 22:05 · For: Perhaps You Can't Know Everything

Name: ripdiego (Signed) · Date: 11/18/07 0:55 · For: Perhaps You Can't Know Everything
omg.. i've been waiting FOREVER for this next chapter to come up!!! this is like torture! lol, post soon!

Name: twirlergirl583 (Signed) · Date: 11/15/07 14:09 · For: Perhaps You Can't Know Everything
That was awesome! I'm sad James had to leave tho...I can't wait for more!!

sorry this wasn't one of the constructive reviews i usually leave...it was just...well...awesome!

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