Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/24/07 12:33
Chapter: Pride Bruised and Head Confused

Wow! the drama is so intense!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twirlergirl583
Date: 11/23/07 22:56
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

*Standing ovation with much loud cheering!*

Absolutely brilliant story. It had the perfect sweet ending that everyone new was eventually coming, yet it was still very good to read it. I love your writing, it is amazing to read your work!

And to read a story from start to finish,'s been a while since a I've watched a story become complete. And for that, thanks and congradulations on creating a spetacular story.

The characters were brilliant: Lily and James were very well written with only the most minor glitches here and there, which made them seem even more realistic than you initially created them to be. Sirius and SamLin were also wonderful characters! They did a great job in their supporting rolls! And your various other characters were very fun to read, too.

Overall, I think you accomplished what you had inteded, and I hope to read stories that you write in the future!


Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/23/07 8:53
Chapter: Before-the-Ball Worries

This is an awesome start!!!!!!!!!! Great job:)

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/23/07 8:44
Chapter: Yet Another Potter Problem

AHHHH that fateful day,
Are you going to mention a L/S friendship or is it just this one shot? anyway, good suspense.:)

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/23/07 8:39
Chapter: Dates, Drama, and Dresses

Shopping!!!!!!! the most exciting thing in the world, great chapter!!!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/23/07 8:33
Chapter: Total Bliss and Happiness-Right?

Wow. they seem like great friends. I pray you dont pair them of with the marauders because thats cliche but other wise your story seeeeemsAMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Reviewer: tiger_lily821
Date: 11/23/07 8:00
Chapter: No, No, No

I like this chapter! One thing, though- Slughorn partners Peter up with Sirius and Frank, though later on it only mentions Frank. Otherwise, good job!

Reviewer: Kyoko Yuri
Date: 11/22/07 13:42
Chapter: Pride Bruised and Head Confused

you wrote this chapter perfectly

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 11/21/07 16:54
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

that was cute! good job (:

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 11/21/07 14:40
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

loved it! please do not end it... pleassseee...

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 11/21/07 14:31
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

Finally. that took forever. really good, but kind of short. is that the end? i hope not i really like. make another James/Lily fic soon. your a really good writer.

Author's Response: I think I'm gonna give up on fanfiction. Sometimes I don't always agree with the mods, so my writing has been going nowhere. (I've submitted a story three different times and it's been rejected for three different reasons.) Thank you for your support, though. :-)

Reviewer: rainydaze
Date: 11/21/07 14:00
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

Really great story! :)

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 11/21/07 9:47
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

I think at this part you strayed away from the movie, and got into your own writeing, and it was fabulous.

If this is the last chapter, next time you do a James and Lily fic, make it your own. You're a great writer, and I think you could be even better by making a story your own.

Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I was going to write a post-HP DH Disregarded story based loosely on Les Mis, but I think I'm going to take a break for a while. I am going to submit some chapters of another James/Lily fic I started writing a while ago, though.

Reviewer: R_U_LDS_2
Date: 11/21/07 9:44
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

i love this story, keep writing.

Reviewer: hpluvsgw
Date: 11/21/07 0:09
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

awww... How beautiful! Totally luv the way that u incorporated Jane Austens pride and predjudiced into the world of JKR! Great job!

Reviewer: wyowerewolf
Date: 11/20/07 21:28
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

well done! wonderful ending, i love how you drifted away from the story at the end, so it was more independent.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 11/20/07 20:00
Chapter: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

So cute! I like it! This isn't the end, is it? I hope not.

Reviewer: blazingginny503
Date: 11/18/07 22:05
Chapter: Perhaps You Can't Know Everything


Reviewer: ripdiego
Date: 11/18/07 0:55
Chapter: Perhaps You Can't Know Everything

omg.. i've been waiting FOREVER for this next chapter to come up!!! this is like torture! lol, post soon!

Reviewer: twirlergirl583
Date: 11/15/07 14:09
Chapter: Perhaps You Can't Know Everything

That was awesome! I'm sad James had to leave tho...I can't wait for more!!

sorry this wasn't one of the constructive reviews i usually was just...well...awesome!

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