It is so cute! I love it! I listen to music when I read fanfic, and I have the Fray's "She Is" playing, and it matches this story beautifully! Lovely job- really, well, feel-good so far!
It is so cute! I love it! I listen to music when I read fanfic, and I have the Fray's "She Is" playing, and it matches this story beautifully! Lovely job- really, well, feel-good so far!
hey- story was marvelous. hope to see you write another fanfic!
Wow that was an amazing story. Good job!
And you did a really good job on that poem at the Halloween Feast. I'm horrible at poetry so it amazes me how you did that. :P
Loved this story. It was pretty funny all the way and that was good. I think I liked the ending best of all the story.
ah... its finally completed, hmm...
a pretty good job overall. this chapter was pretty cute.
Aww, I enjoyed that, it was cute.
I love the scenery descriptions. Great writing!
wow this was an amazing story! I know it's not from j.k. rowling and therefore can't be totally true--but it's as good as! I loved it! It was fantastic!
YAY! Lovely ending... you should have a sequel though.. like the 2nd part of the year... but it was great anyway. AND I am so glad you finished it before Harry Potter the 7th comes out... yess. It comes out tonight. FINALLY! =D
Nice way to end the story. Great job, and Happy Reading!
Love it! Update, update, update! Have a great vacation!
Wow! I wondered when Alice and Frank were going to get engaged. One question, though. When in the world will James and Lily get together? Update, please. I can't wait to see what happens. Great fic, by the way. Bye!
Yerdif Gryffindor
I am so mad at Lily!!! How could she do this James! It was the perfect moment, scene, person, feelings, ect. Everything was perfect and she messed it up! AHH! How could you let her mess it up?! Ohh noo. When will you ever update again to save me from the agony... but I am so happy for Alice and Frank.. =D
Okay. Lily and James are friends again.. good! Also, I thought Lily knew Remus was a werewolf before.. i thought it said in the books that Lily figured it out before anyone did or something like that. But, what was going on in the greenhouses? Oh no.. something bad is going to happen. NO! It was so peaceful.. well update soon, please?? =D Oh nevermind I have one more chapter... (for now) YES!
Okay. Lily and James are friends again.. good! Also, I thought Lily knew Remus was a werewolf before.. i thought it said in the books that Lily figured it out before anyone did or something like that. But, what was going on in the greenhouses? Oh no.. something bad is going to happen. NO! It was so peaceful.. well update soon, please?? =D Oh nevermind I have one more chapter (for now)... yes!
Okay. Lily and James are friends again.. good! Also, I thought Lily knew Remus was a werewolf before.. i thought it said in the books that Lily figured it out before anyone did or something like that. But, what was going on in the greenhouses? Oh no.. something bad is going to happen. NO! It was so peaceful.. well update soon, please?? =D Oh nevermind I have one more chapter (for now)... yes!
wow you really do write beautifully.
i love the way you can capture the emotions of the characters. I love writing and i sometimes find that to be the hardest part.
please keep this story going! i love it sofar!
Ohhh the sexual tension. It's a shame Lily had to ruin the perfect moment like that. Great chapter. Keep up the great work :]
