Reviewer: Mattalbus
Date: 11/16/07 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Beyond Friendships & Chocolate Frogs

good chapter i like the way you do the harry and ginny plot

Author's Response: Thanks you again.

Reviewer: Mattalbus
Date: 11/16/07 15:05
Chapter: Prologue - Wrath of the Dark Lord

Good start

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: expelliarmus_123
Date: 11/06/07 14:38
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

I absolutely loved this chapter and am definately still interested! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is just about ready to go to my Beta's as we speak, so it may be a couple weeks yet, but it will not be the delay of that last chapter. Thank you so much for reading, and taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Mylyrin80
Date: 10/29/07 15:39
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: irishdaddy0204
Date: 10/22/07 21:16
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Jeograph !!! I was about to lose hope of this story continuing. You have restored my faith. I love this story and they way you tell it. You make me feel like I am there witnessing all first hand. I got goosebumps when Mena's portrait asked to have a private word with Molly. I'm guessing she "saw" something about Harry & Ginny (Mena's reaction when she heard Ginny's name was the tell) & Molly's stopping of Arthur's wrath (completely accurate as a father). Wow I am so excited this story is going to continue. Please not so long a wait next time !!!

Author's Response: Oh, please do not lose hope! I thought long and hard about abandoning this story after DH came out... I actually have developed an idea for a "canon" book eight, a story I would title Harry Potter and the Stygian Circle.
But, as I was plotting out the new story, I realized that this story is too firm in my mind to be left behind... And when I tried to write the other, my mind kept coming back to Harry and Ginny at the Manor. So, I will be continuing this alternate book Seven... I do hope you'll stick around for the duration... and keep reviewing.
And... I agree, there was entirely too much time between chapters this time. I will try never to let that happen again.
Thanks so much.

Reviewer: sjanakan
Date: 10/22/07 8:37
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Keep up the great Work!!

Author's Response: I am completely flattered that you think it is great!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Hestia Jones
Date: 10/20/07 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter


Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: stark40763
Date: 10/20/07 13:54
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Finally! I've been waiting for this update for a while, and I must say its worth the wait! Keep up the good work, and don't be discouraged!

Author's Response: Sorry I made you wait so long. I will try to get the next chapter out a bit faster. Thank you for reading and reviewing. The encouraging words really do help keep me moving along. Thank you.

Reviewer: hotrod
Date: 10/20/07 13:25
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Another great chapter..I'm glad you decided to rejoin the world of HP..

Author's Response: Very sorry about the long delay. I'll see if I can't prevent that from occurring again. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: the_ravens_claw
Date: 10/20/07 9:02
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

This story is amazing! It is so well written and it's almost like a work of J.K.'s. I love it and can't wait for more!

Thanks for a great reading experience(with more to come!)


Author's Response: That is perhaps the highest of praise for a writer of any HP fan-fic. Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing. I do hope you will continue to do so.

Reviewer: Tat11
Date: 10/19/07 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Your story is so good! I am new to all of this fan fiction stuff, although I have been a HP fan for ten years. Your story caught my eye right away, mostly because it is so well-thought and I can tell that in your mind, you have the entire story planned out, even if it is not all down on paper. So far it is a fine substitution, and I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. I am glad you are enjoying my story and I hope you will stick around for more. Thank you.

Reviewer: phantom phreak
Date: 08/31/07 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box

I have to say that I just foud this story and am quite happy that I did. I really enjoyed what you have written so far. The side story with Draco is excellent, and I think you have captured aspects of his personality exceptionally well. I hope Narcissa wakes up in the near future so we can see her rection to what her son has become. The Potter family story is also very well conceived and written. I really enjoy the idea and background of harry's family. Please keep up the writing and thanks for a great story so far.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to review. I hope to have another chapter up very soon.

I am very glad you like it so far. Thanks again.

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 08/22/07 6:58
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box

I just read what you have so far. I love it.

Just a thought. It seems that you are subtly suggesting that Harry owns the property that is the Weasley twins' shop. I think it would be great if Harry were to retaliate, in response to one of their pranks, with a fake eviction notice. He could let them sweat a bit before revealing the truth. That would be funny.

Author's Response: That could be quite funny... Though having already written a chapter where Harry "gets" the twins, I am not sure I will be able to work such an event in... But I'll file your suggestion in the dusty back of my mine and who knows, if it works in, it could show up.
Thank you so much for reading, and especially for taking time to review.

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 08/22/07 0:03
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Privet Perplexed

I'm loving this story so far. I really like the way you have kept people in character. I am also ecstatic that you know how to spell pajamas. I know that sounds strange, but little things like that bug me to no end. So many fan fics spell it pyjamas. There is no 'y' in pajamas. At first I thought it was a British thing. I checked, and JKR spells it correctly, so I am at a loss for where these people get it. Not that one word misspelled is that big a deal, but when this particular one shows up, it triggers a long mental rant that distracts me from the story. Thank you for not disrupting the narrative flow with bad spelling. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words of review!
I too have a few pet-peeves, so I am glad that I didn't cause you an adverse reaction by fueling yours. I personally don't recall ever seeing pajamas spelled with a "y," seems rather odd to me too. But people do many odd things.
I do hope you will keep reading and keep reviewing. I am glad you seem to be enjoying my alternative to JKR's final book.
Thanks again!

Reviewer: irishdaddy0204
Date: 07/24/07 0:35
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box

Jeo- once again I am impressed with your talents. You really should consider publishing something. You have the talent & imagination enough to do it well. Anyway, I Digress. Again you make me want for more. I really enjoyed the info regarding Harry's family past & the reasonj no-one ever gave such a prestigeous family a second glance, very clever. As usual I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and as another reviewer stated I also really enjoy the "draco" saga. Keep up the excellent work and again thank you for sharing you talents. not be discouraged with the fewreviews you get. It is quite possible that your readers are too stunned and in awe of the story to form words...

Thanks again

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and once again for the extremely flattering review. I don't know if I can buy that people are in awe of my story... but I take it as am assume complement. I have determined that I will continue with this story, even though we all know now how JKR's story comes to it's end. I do hope that a few will stick around to read it and offer reviews.
Thanks so much for your kind words.

Reviewer: Monster Book of Monsters
Date: 07/09/07 22:42
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box

Hey Jeo - again awesome work. Yours is the only chapter story I'm reading at the moment. I typically only read once they are complete. But yours is totally worth waiting for! With regard to this chapter, I appreciated the fluff, expecially between Ron and Hermione - so thanks for that. The letter from the grandparents (my husband has asked before, "Doesn't Harry have granparents? Where are they?") was well done, although I'm a little "eh" about the whole Potter Manor idea, but I trust you! I'm sure it will all work out in the end. I am a little anxious to get back to Snape and Draco. I actually find myself more interested in the Draco story than the Harry story which is unusual for me! Anyway - good work. Keep going man! And if you're a big fan of the movies like I am, have a good week! I'll be there opening day. A little too old for the midnight show, but I'll be hittin' the afternooner. Matinees rock! Peace out, brotha. ;)

Author's Response: Hey there... glad to hear from you again.
I am very flattered that mine is the only Chapter story you wait for. I do wish more people would discover it. Sometimes it bugs me when I read other's stories and see that they are getting hundreds of reviews, and then I look here and realize that 15 is the most I've ever gotten on any chapter. I try not to be jealous... but... it's difficult.
I suspect that if I spent more time on the forums and such it could make a difference... but I just don't have that much time.
Anyway, I know you really like the Draco part of the story, and I promise that we'll be getting back to it, but we have a bit more to uncover for Harry first. Hopefully the next chapter will help you appreciate the Manor more, but ultimately... it is just a house. It's just... It's Harry's house... a place to which he truly belongs, not Hogwarts, not The Burrow, not Grimmauld Place, and especially not Privet Drive. And I appreciate your indulgence, on the matter.
I am a fan of the movies... I even appreciate the differences, as I understand what it takes to translate between media. I have to work all week, but I'll be taking my kids on Saturday. I imagine there will be plenty of discussion about it on the forums.
Thanks again for the comments... and I promise you'll get more of Draco soon.

Reviewer: whats in a name
Date: 07/09/07 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box

up-date, up-date, up-date!
do you get my meaning?

Author's Response: I do get your meaning. Thanks for the comments, I'll update as quickly as I can.

Reviewer: Smeagoldor
Date: 07/06/07 6:15
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: rahat5810
Date: 07/06/07 3:25
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box

Good work.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 06/09/07 3:36
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Life and Learning at Privet Drive

I liked this chapter very much. The first part was a bit slow. It was hard to switch from the tension of the last chapter to the finer points of meditation sessions with Dumbledore. Overall I loved the entire chapter. Your creativity is really amazing. I love the Whisperer, it is such a clever idea. Wizards would want to send Whispers just as much as Howlers (if not more.)

I felt that the sum paid to support Harry was a bit exorbitant. You probably have a reason for picking that amount. It seems like a lot of money to raise one child, even if that child was Harry Potter. 200 Galleons is like 850 pounds a month. I only wish my allowance had been that huge growing up. I guess if you count in school tuition it isn't quite so large...

Can't wait to keep reading!


Author's Response: You are right. This was the first chapter I wrote after my break. I had had to make an inter-state move, and changed jobs, etc., and hadn’t added a chapter for a long time. I ended up covering so much in detail that the transition between chapters is a little rough, and it is a little slow.

I just wanted to get across how much is happening in such a small amount of time. Lot’s of changes for everyone.

I love throwing in things like the Whisper, I figure there is lots of that sort of stuff in the Wizard World, and I suspect I will continue to try to pepper in these ideas as they come to me.

Yes, 200 galleons is quite a bit of money for one child, it is actually closer to $1000₤ which comes out to be about $1890 U.S. dollars. But I felt that it was still a reasonable amount given the fact that Harry is from a very wealthy family, and the expectation was that he would be taken care of in style. .

Remember though that it was intended for his care… not necessarily as an allowance, it would have afforded the Dursley’s an opportunity to move into a larger house and provide greater space for both Harry and Dudley, plus it might have allowed for private schools, etc. .

I am very happy that you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to as you read the next few chapters. .

I am really looking forward to your next reviews. .

Thanks so much!

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