Reviewer: Dad
Date: 01/11/13 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

Good to see a fairly rapid update.

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long. I ran in to validation trouble this time and it actually took longer than it should have. Thanks for the read and the comments.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/09/12 14:47
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Hermione's Happy Place

I bookmarked this story the last time you updated. Saw the latest update and was forced to read it all from the beginning. I really look forward to seeing the rest, but I hope you can get iy up a bit quicker,

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and especially for commenting!
I am working on chapters ahead as quickly as I can, hopefully the next will be up soon, just have to get it past a Beta reader.
Thanks again! And Happy reading!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/09/12 11:45
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Hermione's Happy Place

Perfect! I love reading about the Manor. Your imagination has come up with some very special Magic. The Library sounds lovely. Even better, the newest Magical creature. I suppose you will have an unconventual way for Hermione order the books she'll need. So far we have only seen Jarvy. I expect we'll be seeing more House Elves, also free, but still loyal. Having the Wedding at the Manor is wonderful, but I can see some possible problems. Unless the guests will arrive at the Burrow and be led to the Manor. Please don't be too long with the next.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!
This was a bit of a fluff chapter, but I love when I can interject more magic into this particularly magical world. I figure the creatures in the Library are some form of Pixie, but I am not concerned with giving them a specific name. We will see more of them as Hermione spends more time in the Library doing research. Once we get to Harry's Birthday we will see a lot more of the Manor, at least until school begins. (Chapter after next!) We will also begin a more concerted effort toward the Horcrux search. More House-Elves... Hmm? You are right about security and the wedding. Right now the only way to get the Manor is with the Portis Omnibus so yes, guests will have to arrive at The Burrow, that way no one will actually know where they are and the Fedilius Charm can be preserved.
Next chapter should be up soon, just getting past a Beta reader.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 11/30/12 6:10
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Welcome to the Jungle

I am so glad you finally posted. I do hope the next is on its way to be read. I am sorry that Narcissa passed. It will free Draco to be the man he wants to be, not is lead to be. He needs lets go of his hate for Harry, it will transform him. One little mistake I noticed. You wrote the word waste to indicate the middle area of Draco's body, it's actually spelled waist. The other is a word for trash. Keep writing!!!

Author's Response: Very glad to see that someone I recognize is still here!
The next chapter just has to get past some beta reading, though I am thinking about a couple of quick changes before I post, but don't worry it is on its way. Yeah, I was sorry to let Narcissa go too, but it just had to be done, as you correctly observed it is necessary for Draco's development.
I will find that misspelling and make the correction, thanks!
And I am glad to be back. It has been a couple of hard struggle years, unfortunately my published book has not really amounted to anything so while I am still working on another novel, I just really wanted to get back to this story. It never seems to leave me. I do hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: opti
Date: 11/29/12 5:42
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

I've only just finished reading chapter eleven, but I like this so far. The changes in some areas seem a little weird, but all in all I enjoyed it. I especially liked the dilemma presented in having the Dursley's and the Weasley's in the money issues - that was an actually morally ambiguous choice that Harry had to make, which you don't see often in fanfic. Well done, because even though I think I would have done only slightly differently than Harry, I had to actually think about how I would act in that situation.

I like to review big fics in one chunk by the end, so hopefully you decide to finish this so I can spill the beans. Any hints as to how long this gets?

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read! I would love it if you could be a bit more specific about "weird" It might help me see if I am making changes happen too quickly. Of course, the Draco sub-plot is intentionally different, and I suppose a bit weird. The whole money issue in the story took a lot longer to write than it should have in my mind because people felt very strongly about it and I felt like I had to explain it over and over again until people could accept it. It seems the majority were flatly in favor of " Nothing for the Dursleys!" In any case, I do hope you enjoy the next couple of chapters, and I hope you will continue reading. Thanks again for the comments!

Reviewer: Dksb
Date: 12/05/10 7:15
Chapter: Prologue - Wrath of the Dark Lord

hey! great work. keep it up. please update.. update.. update..

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the encouragement. It has been nearly two years, but I am back for more. Hope you still around to keep reading. Thanks

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 07/14/08 7:57
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Ministry Mayhem

wow i love this!
i actually really do
this is how i imagine it would have been if it hadnt been for the camping occurence!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Obviously, it is how I imagine it. I am pleased you like it and I hope you will stay with the story... and keep reviewing. THANKS, SO MUCH!

Reviewer: irishdaddy0204
Date: 07/09/08 8:08
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Ministry Mayhem

I am so glad you hav not abandoned this story. You truly have a talent and I for one am thankful you are willing to share it. So Harry is the grandson of Luna's Great Aunt huh? Very clever and Yaxley getting shot in the ministry atrium is poetic justice.... Keep up the writing, we are kkeping the faith.

Author's Response: I am happy to still see you here. I was watching for a review from you! Thanks for sticking it out. rnI am sort of looking at it this way... I am writing this for fun, and I'll never make anything from it, nor would I want too, so I should have some fun with it, and Philomena has always felt like a Lovegood... with some very Lovegood (if somewhat more down-to-earth) qualities, so I thought creating this relationship would be a fun, and interesting twist. After all, the Lovegoods are a pure blood family, even if they are painfully eccentric. And as they are technically not blood relations it should create no conflict with canon. And, now that JKR's book seven is history... I thought I would start using some of those characters where it is appropriate. What did you think of Sean Fleming?rnrnThanks for the read and the review.

Reviewer: Jander Fili
Date: 07/07/08 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Ministry Mayhem

Yay! I love this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review and support.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 07/06/08 16:38
Chapter: Prologue - Wrath of the Dark Lord

Wow, that was a strong chapter. You do not want to disappoint Voldemort. Apparantly, he takes no pity on a young teenager...Poor Draco...
And The Dark LOrd puts an x on his face, so he's scarred for life.
A sad and heartbreaking chapter, Voldemort is a mean cruel bastard and deserves to die.

Author's Response: Yes... the man (and I use the word "man" lightly) is not just heartless, but according to JKR, quite literally soulless... (or, at least nearly soulless) Hmm... we should ask Nick if being nearly soulless, is anything like being nearly headless... Anyway, I really wanted to get at what sort of a cruel guy Tom Riddle really is, what he is capable of. He was really sort of glossed over in the books. We were told he was terrible, but never really shown anything very bad. So, I wanted to start off with a bit of characterization to show just what Harry is going to have to deal with.rn
rnI hope you are enjoying the story, and I hope I will see more reviews from you concerning further chapters. rn
rnThank you so much for reading, and more so for leaving a review.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/06/08 9:48
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Ministry Mayhem

Wow, another great chapter. I loved the end with the Muggle shooting the last Death Eater, Cool.

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked that. I am not exactly sure how much of a role our Mr. Fleming is going to play in future chapters, but you can be sure y ou will see more of him here and there.
rnHave you figured out who he is?rn
rnThanks for the read, and the reviews.rn

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/06/08 9:12
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Oh wow. I like the idea of the knob. I've often wondered about Harrys Grandparents as JKR never mentioned them other than in the Mirror of Erised.

Author's Response: Yes... it has been one of my goals in conceiving this fan-fic, that I would try to explore areas left untouched by JKR herself.rnrnIt means of course that I am creating a good deal of my own separate "fanon" for this story, but I guess that is what makes it all fun.rnrntank you so much for you kind words, and I do hope you continue to read.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/05/08 19:46
Chapter: Chapter 2 - A Little Advice

This is bloody brillant ! I must add you to my favorites, so I can read your take on Book 7. Imagine a pocket sized Dumbledore, Perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and thanks so much for the review! I hope you continue to read the story and I truly hope you enjoy it and continue to review.rn
rnThanks again... SO MUCH.

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 05/09/08 18:19
Chapter: Prologue - Wrath of the Dark Lord

outsandingly sick. *scratches head and tilts it to side* yet totally appropriate.
all-in-all great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you! I do hope you keep reading, and reviewing.rn

Reviewer: lilstrywrtr
Date: 04/26/08 13:07
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

so far... it is very good.... please update soon!! and i would just like to say that i love your other story.. i recommend it to everyone!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I am very pleased that you are enjoying my story.

Reviewer: HP addict
Date: 04/22/08 8:35
Chapter: Prologue - Wrath of the Dark Lord

Hay Jeo! I have read many fics but yours is really outstanding. The part on Draco and Snape is really insteresting as there is no such thing in Jo's writting. It is really a great alternative to DH and I do hope you will keep on writting because I will keep on reading!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. I have been trying desperately to get back to writing this story, but it seems every time I knock out a few more words something in my life goes haywire. I am however working on the next chapter and have no plans of abandoning the work. Please be patient. Reviews are a great encouragement.rnrnThank you so much !!!!

Reviewer: Jander Fili
Date: 04/01/08 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Take heart, brave gryffindor - you will still have many fans when you submit the next chapter! Please do not lose hope! I love your stories!

Author's Response: Thank You!rn

Reviewer: griffen_house
Date: 03/20/08 19:04
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

your right it was a long wait, butit was well worth it. i loved the chapter by the way and i do hope you will continue

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It has been a very long haul lately... Life has dished out some odd and seemingly constant blows. However, I do intend to continue this story... I sincerely hope that there will be readers left when I am able to finish the writing more regularly... Which I hope will be soon. Thank you again... I am still here.rn

Reviewer: expelliarmus_123
Date: 01/27/08 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Is this story over?

Author's Response: No it is not... Life is just not been kind recently to the author. Please have patience. I will be getting back to it.

Reviewer: Jander Fili
Date: 01/13/08 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

Jeograph - what a wonderful alternative to DH, please keep up the fantastic writing!

Author's Response: I realize that I have been horribly slow lately. But rest assured I am still here and I intend to keep going. Wonderful comments like yours are always very encouraging, and i do thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Thank you again!!!!!

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