Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 02/13/14 18:07
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Potter Curse

great chapter, man i love this story i'd forgotten how good it is,i can't wait for the next one i hope soon

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I had a whole lot of trouble with this chapter, getting it ready for site acceptance. The next chapter is written and will be submitted as soon as It passes my new Beta. I am so glad you enjoy my story. I hope you will continue to read and review. Happy reading

Reviewer: nurse1991
Date: 09/14/13 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

I wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a movie but I imagine there would be a big hassle with Potter purists.

Author's Response: To see this as a movie would be way beyond my wildest dreams. I would be completely over the moon just to hear it read as an audiobook story. Anyway, thank you for the encouraging words.

Reviewer: nurse1991
Date: 09/14/13 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Most Noble and Honorable House of Potter

I wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a movie but I imagine there would be a big hassle with Potter purists.

Author's Response: See response. previous post

Reviewer: nurse1991
Date: 09/14/13 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Lock-Box

Very nice twist with the grandparent portion.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hold on though because that knot is going to be drawn even tighter. Hope you will be around to read it and comment. Thanks again, and Happy Reading!

Reviewer: nurse1991
Date: 09/14/13 0:57
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Diagon Dalliance

Love it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: nurse1991
Date: 09/14/13 0:56
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Diagon Dalliance

Love it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: nurse1991
Date: 09/14/13 0:15
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Life and Learning at Privet Drive

I really like the way you have explained the legilmens in your story and I love how the relationship between Harry and Petunia has changed.

Author's Response: Thank you. I have had a bit of a problem with the concept of legilimens as used in the books. It seemed a bit limited to me. If you are strong enough to keep someone out of your mind, that may be good. but it would never fool anyone. If however you could let someone think they had entered your mind, but secretly be in control of the process and show them what you want, that would be much more powerful. Thank you for reading, I do hope you will continue. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: nurse1991
Date: 09/13/13 23:09
Chapter: Chapter 2 - A Little Advice

You have sort of solved one of the problems I had with the Deathly Hallows as in why didn't Harry talk to Dumbledore in the portrait at Hogwarts at one time or another. Thanks.

Author's Response: I wondered about that myself, and came to the conclusion that a portrait would simply not be able to give any more information. It always seemed to me that a portrait would only have a basic knowledge of the person it represents, and would not say, have knowledge of any secrets etc. For this reason I created the Chocolate Frog card base, as an enchanted object. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: shotty
Date: 08/08/13 21:00
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Mayhem, Mourning and Memories

I can't wait to be able to read about the memories. And I love the Manor and how you have developed the characters so far. Really love it so far, Can't wait for you to post more!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support. More should be posted shortly. Happy reading!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 05/12/13 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Shaman's Way

Jeo,
I will confess that the Draco portion of this story has not been my favorite. That Draco has changed and is willing to change more is very encouraging. I always thought that Draco was strictly a parrot of his father without choice. It's good that he has had this chance. I now wish that Narcissa had been able to live to see the change. I look forward to the further transformation of Draco. The Riddle portion continues to turn my stomach. I kept thinking that the note Severus received was a set up by the dork lord. So Sev really had no choice but to turn them in. If they weren't a set up, that will be one more burden on his heart. Someday Severus will triumph.
Write More,
FoM

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! I am glad you are beginning to come around on the Draco transformation portion of the story. He still has a way to go, but he at least is now in a place were he can really start making changes in his life. Snape remains complex. I have been purposely scuttling the fence with him. Right now he is trapped in an impossible situation. He really had no choice but to do what he did. Either he has really gone over to Voldy's side, or he is so deep under cover that he has to carefully protect his position and that means doing some very difficult things. Such as occurred in this chapter. I hear your plea for his eventual acting for the right. More is underway and I hope to get it posted a bit quicker this time! Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 04/09/13 23:27
Chapter: Chapter 17b - The Party - Part 2

Jeo,
All I can say is Oh my Goodness! A very special birthday for Harry. I did wonder why Arthur and Molly didn't give Harry Fabians watch? The watch they did give him sounded spectacular, but very expensive. I guess I wondered too, why there wasn't an heirloom watch for Harry? His Grands certainly left him everything else. But after listening to Molly's tale it makes sense that they were the ones to give it to him. I was also waiting for when Harry makes Jarvy his servant Elf again, But the happy occasion had to be disturbed, such a shame. I do hope everyone comes back, Now I will wait for the next, which looks to be about Draco. Your story just keeps growing better and better.
FoM

Author's Response: If there was an heirloom watch for Harry it was with James and may or may not still be located at the cottage in Godricks hollow. As to why they gave him a brand new one, well... it seems they recently came in to quite a lot of money so spending money on an expensive watch was no problem. As for Jarvy, he was recaptured by Harry right at the very end of the Heart-stone scene, but it could have been easy to miss. As the brightness of the stone fades, Harry is seen standing up from kneeling next to Jarvy and the Elf is glowing golden, just as seen when Harry captured Dobby and Winky. And sorry for disturbing the happy occasion, but you didn't think it could slide by without any interruption did you? As always, thank you so very much for reading and especially for commenting.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 04/07/13 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 17a - The Party - Part 1

Jeo,
Another mystery of both the Manor and Riddle. Though I can see him killing the Dragon for his powerful heartstring, the rest not so much. Nowhere in the books did it ever allude to Riddle having any interest in women. In fact I got the distinct impression that he hated them. As much as Bella adores him, he feels nothing. I suspect the ingestion of snake venom and the splitting of his soul has made him less than human. I also have to add that reading that part made me ill. The happenings at the Manor though, showed wondrous magic. I suspect ancient magic. I am intrigued at why Hermione was accepted? She must have ties to one on the list, but who? The Evans family, Lily must descend from a Wizarding family that somehow was turned Squib. I look forward to the next. I have mixed feelings about Harry unfreeing Jarvy. Though Jarvy will be just as happy. In fact he must have a clue as his secret keeper status was removed from him. Perhaps he knew that he had to be freed temporarily. Most house elves hate the thought of being free. I'll be waiting.
FoM

Author's Response: Yes, things are getting more and more complex. Enjoyably so, I hope. The scene with Voldy is meant to be a bit sickening. As it is all about his desire to have total command of everything around him, including people. I realize that JKR never alluded to Voldemort having any interest in women, and I suspect that was largely due to her intended audience. I believe I am aiming at a slightly older reader and so I want to show just how rotten our villain really is. I understand if it is a bit much for some, and I promise it is not something you are likely to a lot of as the story continues. but it was a good opportunity to show just how vile he really is. Jarvy was well aware of his status as a free Elf, and he was not particularly happy about it He is much happier now, knowing that his place as the head Elf is more secure. You can be sure that it will be revealed just how Hermione is related. I cannot for a second imagine Hermione failing pursue that particular mystery, can you? I hope you will enjoy the conclusion of the chapter... I just posted it. As always, thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 04/07/13 16:53
Chapter: Chapter 17a - The Party - Part 1

i absolutely love this story and this chapter is one of the best yet i love all the blood magic and secret keeper stuff, i can't wait for the second half

Author's Response:
I just posted it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 03/03/13 21:45
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Happy Birthday Harry

Jeo,
I'm glad you posted this chapter. I love your take on Harry's coming of age, at least so far. I look forward to the next part. Harry is so noble and so right in going slow. I am wondering why there hasn't been any hint of Riddle and his thugs. I'm sure he's not going to be silent much longer.Don't make us wait too long.
FoM

Author's Response: Oh... you are going to love the second half of Harry's Birthday! (bites tongue) Sorry I'm not telling. It is making the rounds with my Beta's hopefully it will be up in a week or so.
Happy reading!

Reviewer: shotty
Date: 01/28/13 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

Love the story so far! Can't wait for you to post more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know of your interest! I am working on additional chapters, but I have been having problems with Beta readers lately. I am looking for a new reader and hopefully will be posting again very soon. Thank you.

Reviewer: Charly42
Date: 01/13/13 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

This appears the only place where updates to this story happen, so I had to register here to say thank you for continuing your story, I had to read it from the start to refresh my memory of what of it. Good story I like it.
So thanks again for continuing it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story. I love it when readers comment, so thank you. I do update this story, and I am working on additional chapters. Usually I update here first, quite frankly, because Mugglenet has the highest submission standards, and I want each chapter to be as good as it should be. I also post on Harry Potter Fanfiction, and on Fanfiction.net. I was also updating on Ginny Potter, but I think I am going to abandon that posting because submissions seem to take forever there. Anyway, I am glad you found the story and I hope you enjoy it. Please keep up reviewing, and Happy reading.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 01/11/13 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

Good to see a fairly rapid update.

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long. I ran in to validation trouble this time and it actually took longer than it should have. Thanks for the read and the comments.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/09/12 14:47
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Hermione's Happy Place

I bookmarked this story the last time you updated. Saw the latest update and was forced to read it all from the beginning. I really look forward to seeing the rest, but I hope you can get iy up a bit quicker,

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and especially for commenting!
I am working on chapters ahead as quickly as I can, hopefully the next will be up soon, just have to get it past a Beta reader.
Thanks again! And Happy reading!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/09/12 11:45
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Hermione's Happy Place

Jeo,
Perfect! I love reading about the Manor. Your imagination has come up with some very special Magic. The Library sounds lovely. Even better, the newest Magical creature. I suppose you will have an unconventual way for Hermione order the books she'll need. So far we have only seen Jarvy. I expect we'll be seeing more House Elves, also free, but still loyal. Having the Wedding at the Manor is wonderful, but I can see some possible problems. Unless the guests will arrive at the Burrow and be led to the Manor. Please don't be too long with the next.
FoM

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!
This was a bit of a fluff chapter, but I love when I can interject more magic into this particularly magical world. I figure the creatures in the Library are some form of Pixie, but I am not concerned with giving them a specific name. We will see more of them as Hermione spends more time in the Library doing research. Once we get to Harry's Birthday we will see a lot more of the Manor, at least until school begins. (Chapter after next!) We will also begin a more concerted effort toward the Horcrux search. More House-Elves... Hmm? You are right about security and the wedding. Right now the only way to get the Manor is with the Portis Omnibus so yes, guests will have to arrive at The Burrow, that way no one will actually know where they are and the Fedilius Charm can be preserved.
Next chapter should be up soon, just getting past a Beta reader.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 11/30/12 6:10
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Welcome to the Jungle

Jeo,
I am so glad you finally posted. I do hope the next is on its way to be read. I am sorry that Narcissa passed. It will free Draco to be the man he wants to be, not is lead to be. He needs lets go of his hate for Harry, it will transform him. One little mistake I noticed. You wrote the word waste to indicate the middle area of Draco's body, it's actually spelled waist. The other is a word for trash. Keep writing!!!
FoM

Author's Response: Very glad to see that someone I recognize is still here!
The next chapter just has to get past some beta reading, though I am thinking about a couple of quick changes before I post, but don't worry it is on its way. Yeah, I was sorry to let Narcissa go too, but it just had to be done, as you correctly observed it is necessary for Draco's development.
I will find that misspelling and make the correction, thanks!
And I am glad to be back. It has been a couple of hard struggle years, unfortunately my published book has not really amounted to anything so while I am still working on another novel, I just really wanted to get back to this story. It never seems to leave me. I do hope you continue to enjoy it.

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