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Name: ReSheila (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 14:41 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
That was AMAZING : ) Harry + Ginny stuff is my fav! I can't wait for the next chapter, you always have the most creative idea's and i know i can expect something exciting and different from your story ! Keep up the GREAT work !

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this one and that you're excited for the next.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 8:15 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Well this chapter was definitely worth waiting for. As all of your chapters are.
I really enjoyed the discussion at the table. Ginny knows how to yank those chains doesnít she? Knowing she is already married to the man of her dreams makes it a lot easier to say that is what she wants to do with her life.
The talk on the mirrors was touching and I liked that Harry is realizing he canít keep everyone safe. At some point, he is going to have to let go enough for them to make up their own minds about fighting.
They are going to watch Quidditch? That does seem like a good way to decompress. Hah, I love that she is wearing Harryís robes, and the commentator keeps calling her Potter. That was a great way to have the game. That was a dirty trick with ruining her robes, but you handled it very well and didnít let her get too upset.
A little snogging in the broom cupboard is good for the marriage. Even a secret marriage.
I loved this chapter and I really canít wait to see what happens next. I see the next chapter is already in the queue, so I donít think I will have to wait long. Great job, and see you there.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The story seemed to be running low on fluff, so I decided to work a little more in before the big battle that's coming up. I'm really glad you enjoyed all the little things in this chapter, like the dinner table conversation, the talk on the mirrors, the Quidditch robes.... It was a lot of fun to write, so it's very nice to know it's fun to read as well.

Name: Tagidi Riva (Signed) · Date: 09/29/07 20:10 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Ahhhh, fluff, just what I needed. I always allow for artistic license if it betters the story and in this case it really did. Gave me a nice jolt of the warm fuzzies. Thanks

Author's Response: Hi, Rivah! I know what you mean about artistic license, but sometimes it's hard to know if you're taking it a bit too far. It's gratifying to know that my reviewers tend to agree with my decision (because I REALLY wanted to use the uniform thing). Thanks for taking the time to review, and I'm glad I was able to give you your Fuzzy Fix. :-)

Name: DracoLuva4684 (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 17:01 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
That was hot!
more please????
PS--The uniform bit was brillient!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much. Next chapter's already in the queue, so it will be up as soon as the Mods approve it. Yay!

Name: liveonluna (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 12:52 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
YAY! I loved the whole uniform dilema. And how Ginny was called Potter. Clever. I can't wait for the next chapter.. this is one of my favorite stories! So please, please update soon..=D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you'll be happy to know that the next chapter is on its way as soon as the Mods approve it. :-)

Name: AnaMolly (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 10:09 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Yay!! Another update! I liked this chapter very, very much because it had just enough fluff. I adored the Quidditch match, I thought you did a wonderful job, and having them call her Potter all through the game was a wonderful touch. It was a blast reading about them discussing Pierre and Harry telling Ron and Hermione that there is nothing between him and Ginny, that must be extremely hard for both. Needless to say the broom closet scene was my favorite! Gahh! I canít wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the bit o' fluff before the action at the end. Next chapter is in the queue, so watch for it!

Name: Ginny Guerra (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 22:45 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
There's no particular mention about the names, but there was some sort of hint in OotP, when they said something about fixing Oliver's old uniform for Ron. What sounds a tad funny is the fact of each player having only one. I know games are quite far apart, but...

Anyhow, the invented rule served its purpose, so there's no problem at all!

Finally, after weeks and weeks of waiting! A great chapter, as usual. I could have used a tad more fluff, but I thank you for small favours.

Word police here: "The noise of his Apparition cause several students..." shouldn't it say caused?

I hope you can update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, Ginny! I just fixed that typo; no matter how many times I read over it, at least one seems to sneak into every chapter. Oh, well. I'm glad you liked the invented Quidditch rule and the purpose it served. Fluff is fun! Not much fluff next chapter, though. And speaking of the next chapter, it's in the queue right now! And the second draft of the last chapter is done as well. Not long to go with this story...

Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 20:12 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Awww. Loved the fluff! This chapter was great!! I liked a bit of a break from Voldie (though I suppose he's always in the background) for some sweetness. Ginny and Harry are so cute, and I feel so sorry for them having to hide their relationship all the time. But I loved Ginny being called Potter! This chapter was great, but I'm looking forward to the battle all the same! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter, so it's nice to know that other people like it too. And don't worry; Voldykins is coming up next!

Name: phoenixflyerF22 (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 18:24 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Oh i loved that chapter so much!!! i was smiling the whole time!! It just made me so happy!! : ) I love the way the commentator kept calling Ginny - Potter! ! ! and Ginny's answer of how she is going to marry a rich attractive man! : ) and i loved Ron's comments! Oh such great work! Im really looking forward to reading more!!!!!!!!! only 2 more chapters left : ( I can't wait to see more of Jarius! : )

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the fun little things in this chapter. Sadly, there won't be much more of Jarius (although I'll see if I can't get him a bit more page time when I revise). Anyhow, thanks very much for reading and enjoying it!

Name: Ms_Wolfsbane (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 17:18 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Nuw, you're fantastic. I loved this chapter. Tons of fluff without it being overly happy writing, where everything always goes right.

I love the part where Ginny and Harry are being interrogated by Molly, Ron, and Hermy. Poor Harry's so awkward.

You are definitely the king of writing in character.

Is Jarius going to be in the next chapter? You're probably going to have him do some soul searching (not horcruxes), or bring up his constant depression, right?

So sad. The story's wrapping up, isn't it?

Keep on keepin' on.

Nuwanda's army forever!


Author's Response: Thanks, Wolfie! I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much. Jarius will be mentioned again, but he won't play too large a role in the rest of the story. He hasn't disappeared completely, though. We're winding up to the climax, and from there it will just be a matter of wrapping everything up. Just two more chapters to go.

Name: hopeless sap (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 16:47 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Oh that was wonderful! I just loved the part where Molly asked what Ginny's post-Hogwarts plans were and she said she was going to marry young--to a rich wizard, nonetheless! I was rolling on the floor at Ron's comment of Harry's girl having to do the proposing! And, of course, I loved the Ginny "Potter" bit and the broom closet. I can't wait for the next 2 chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I figured we needed a nice, fluffy chapter before the final battle that lies ahead.

Name: popcornie (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 14:55 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
Good one!
altho i think harry and ginny should drop this hidden relationship thing right away.. fairly senseless now..

anyway! looking forward some action :D

may I ask how many chapters do you plan to write?

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the secrets are starting to unravel, but if there's any chance that it will make Ginny safer, Harry's not going to give it up. There are only two chapters left now, so hold on to your hat!

Name: Siva2478 (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 14:52 · For: Chapter 35: The Calm Before the Storm
aaah... I love the H/G love!!! and I loved seeing them call her Potter. That was my favorite. I love that Molly is keeping her eye on the Dursley's. Damn Durselys... I can't wait till it's all out in the open and we call her Potter all the time. I would love to see something like one of the twins yelling "Potter!!" and Ginny turning around and yelling back "What, Weasley?" heh... anyway I was looking at the "other site" and saw that someone stole your story... grrrr... send em my way, Nuw, and I'll take care of em for ya...

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, Siva! I'm glad you enjoyed the Quidditch commentator calling Ginny 'Potter'. I've wanted to work that in for a while now, but hadn't had the chance. Your idea about Ginny and the twins is a good one (funny, too), but I don't think it'll work in this story. Maybe in some future story....

Anyway, I'm really glad you liked the chapter. The issue with this story being plagiarized on SIYE was resolved very quickly and cleanly. Thanks for your concern.

Name: Belgareth (Signed) · Date: 09/20/07 9:09 · For: Chapter 32: An Unexpected Plea
Its funny that Luna thinks polyjuice poition is a myth when she believes in Nargles

Author's Response: That's the idea. ;-)

Name: Belgareth (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 12:42 · For: Chapter 21: Pierre
I just looked at the chapter contents and are you thinking about bring Dumbledore back

Author's Response: Ah, but that would be telling. ;-) Read on, dear reader, to find out.

Name: Belgareth (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 11:24 · For: Chapter 16: The Start of Term
Jarius is goona have fun with the slytherins

Author's Response: Plenty of fun. Although the story's focus shifts away from him, so we won't see his class much.

Name: Belgareth (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 16:27 · For: Chapter 10: The Wedding
I think the Eternity Ceremony is really nice. I bet Harry and Ginny will do it in the end.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the idea.

Name: Belgareth (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 15:29 · For: Chapter 5: Magical Myths
All I got to say is can't you cut Harry some slack?? :(

Author's Response: Sorry! But don't worry; he gets better. ;-)

Name: Belgareth (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 14:46 · For: Chapter 2: Questions
I think squibs can use floo powder. So does Harry and Ginerva (Ginny) get back together soon or what?

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. This story is in the H/G category, so yeah, they'll get back together. Read on to find out when (and don't worry; Harry doesn't act like a total git for too terribly long).

Name: katielovesharry (Signed) · Date: 09/17/07 18:58 · For: Chapter 34: Houseguests
hurry up with the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: It's in the queue (finally). I'm really sorry about the long waits lately; real life is catching up with me.

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