Reviews For Dani California
Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 12/16/06 22:34
Chapter: The Life of Dani California

Hmm...is this beta'd? There are quite a few small errors. Also, you really like to write songfics, don't you? :p

I thought the "purple megaphone" imagery created humor where it didn't necessarily fit. You may want to read that over and see if it's appropriate; I'm not quite sure.

**Second Review For DADA Complete Assignments

Kumy

Reviewer: lily_evans34
Date: 07/06/06 14:43
Chapter: The Life of Dani California

I was SSSSOOOOO upset at that music video, also! *Is loyal VH1 watcher* Anyway, I think you accurately portrayed Dani in this fic! Nice job!

Reviewer: Lily Black
Date: 05/29/06 23:52
Chapter: The Life of Dani California

Very very good. Love the song. Love the story. Quite inventive, must have taken you forever to think of how to relate this song to Hp. Good job!

Author's Response: Actually, it didn't. I always had a feeling about who Dani Califnornia was. I always knew she was a badass vying for adventure, and she gets it at a terrible price and that is her best friends life. Two things promted me to write this fic. One was a person on the forums who wanted to see this type of fic. The other stemmed from my disappointment for the music video for Dani California. Now, I am not dissing the RHCP, but I thought that the music video was going to choronicle the life of a woman and her life of adventure. I guess I was wrong. And thank you very much for reviewing. I really appreciated it.

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