Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/02/07 13:11
Chapter: Him, Him, and Her

Wow... Ron get off with nothing? He was completely stupid! Now he has the yellow canaries of doom, again.

Author's Response: HA HA HA! Yes, that would be good. But yeah, got off with nothing... then again, they always seem to get away with everything in canon. ;)

Reviewer: darkpen
Date: 01/02/07 12:29
Chapter: True Colors

Ohhh More more more! I started reading this and I wasn't too sure how I'd like a Hermione/Snape story but you've turned it into so much more! I love how they find eachother more than just physically attracted to eachother. I mean when it comes to Snape you almost have to find something more. Hah. I think its great how they keep eachother guessing. Keep up with the story I can't wait to find out where you take it from here!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love when I can get the non-SS/HG fans to read too. Sorry that the update took so long!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/01/07 22:04
Chapter: A Victim's Rights

I KNEW IT WAS SNAPE! Who didn't? Hermione is pissed. I guess he never heard about her canaries of doom.

Author's Response: LOL! Yep, definitely Snape. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/01/07 21:47
Chapter: The Owl Cometh

I know this was only a small random part of this entire chapter but it was my favorite;

"Hermione liked lists; they were an organized way for her to go through her thoughts."

Is Ron, Harry, and Hermione's "bugger" all about the same thing? I wonder.

Author's Response: *snerk* Of course. (And you know that at this point.)

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/01/07 21:14
Chapter: Truth and Consequences

Minnie and Dumby. Molly and her impulses. Harry and Ginny with their nice cups of tea. That was priceless. But we all know, Snape is not going to leave her alone.

Author's Response: LOL! I just really set the stage with a lot going on, didn't I? ;)

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/01/07 20:54
Chapter: To Tell the Truth

"It was her face and her eyes that truly gave away her age. She wasn’t old, by any means; however, her face, and especially her eyes, showed the world that she was not naďve. They were the eyes of one who had stood before Lord Voldemort and survived."

I loved that paragraph. I also loved when Hermione was describing how she felt about Mrs. Weasley, it was perfect. Snape was having way too much fun with her need to tll the truth.

Author's Response: :) Oh, thank you so much. I love hearing what people like.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/01/07 19:21
Chapter: The Truth Hurts

What was that supposed to mean?!

"Not unless you want me to," he murmured silkily in her ear"

What the heck? Isn't he like fourty or fifty? Ew. Okay sorry. I know if you can't handle it don't read it. I still can't believe Ron did that. Then Mrs. Weasley took advantage of her. It wasn't malicious, but still it was uncalled for.

Author's Response: HA HA! Yep... in his mid-late forties by this point in my timeline... but *swoon*, it's Snape! ;)

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/01/07 19:06
Chapter: A Slip of the Tongue


Author's Response: LOL! Yes, indeed, Ron is. Thanks!

Reviewer: jcrowell
Date: 12/10/06 12:22
Chapter: True Colors

excellent story! desperately hoping you will write the next chapter soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! It took a bit, but the next chapter is finally up. :D

Reviewer: ahzybanoo
Date: 11/26/06 22:36
Chapter: True Colors

oh please do hurry. i want to know th eplan!

Author's Response: I'm sorry it took so long!!! Thank yoU!

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 18:25
Chapter: True Colors


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 17:52
Chapter: Him, Him, and Her

good one

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 17:44
Chapter: A Victim's Rights

This was a good chapter, but I (opinion only) think that you show Minerva's temper a little different than the books...she dosen't normally get angry so quick and her tounge isn't so sharp...just a thought!

Author's Response: ;) Constructive criticism is always welcome. Minerva has her reasons for being the way that she is, which are explained more in chapter 9. She lost a lot and is hurt. So, no, not exactly like the book, but I'm taking it to the next level saying that the circumstances have caused her to change and harden. Thank you!

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 17:26
Chapter: The Owl Cometh

Good chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 17:07
Chapter: Truth and Consequences

Good one.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 16:45
Chapter: To Tell the Truth

Excellent!!! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Glad you liked this! :D

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 16:14
Chapter: The Truth Hurts

so far so good.....keep up the good work

Author's Response: :D Thank yoU!

Reviewer: hpjunkie09
Date: 11/25/06 15:54
Chapter: True Colors


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: bgscoobydoo
Date: 11/25/06 13:37
Chapter: A Slip of the Tongue

OOH, nice...I really like the Hermonie and Snape love stories...this looks like a really good read!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

Reviewer: snapelover17
Date: 11/24/06 15:48
Chapter: True Colors

please update soon. this is a good story and i want to read more.

Author's Response: SOrry about the wait, but I'm so glad you like the story. Thank you!

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