Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/25/06 19:21
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
Not as good as some of your other poems, but I still liked it. My main criticism is that it doesn't flow very well. Maybe it was your intent to have it a bit jerky-- none of us are eloquent when we are in the depths of misery. Is that what you were going for?
Keep writing. I like your work.
Pax.
Author's Response: Yes, the poem is sort of jerky, but that was what I was going for. I think her thought processes would not have been organized and eloquent in this time of distress, so this is how the poem can out.
thanks for the review!
Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/12/06 15:23
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
Nice job! I've never been all that good at poetry...
TOMROHT
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: T o n k s
Date: 05/21/06 14:41
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
I mean..*cough cough*
Very nice. *cough*
Author's Response: Thanks. You might want to go to the doctor and get that cold checked out.
Reviewer: T o n k s
Date: 05/21/06 14:38
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
Errr....intresting. *gives thumbs up and flashes a grin*
Author's Response: Errr... thanks! *flashes winning smile*
Reviewer: Courtney Black
Date: 05/17/06 19:38
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
Aw! That's soooo sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: HStarRunner23
Date: 05/17/06 16:14
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
That's really sad and touching. Nicely done and I loved it! Good job and keep putting up poems and stories! Nice job! ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback.
Reviewer: hpgirlbizarre
Date: 05/17/06 14:16
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
how adorable u rok! that is lyk s000000o cute!
Author's Response: Thanx for the great review!
Reviewer: AstroFire
Date: 05/17/06 10:09
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
Oops. Sorry for leaving the code open. closing now.
Author's Response: ok.
Reviewer: AstroFire
Date: 05/17/06 10:08
Chapter: The Unmendable Broken Heart
Short and yet very deep! I liked it very much, more because It has normal vocabulary and it is easy to read. My part would be: "The pain will never end. The tears will always come.">i> Very good job :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
