Reviews For Innocence Found
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/15/12 1:05
Chapter: Chapter 6

Why are the chapters so short? I want to read this, and wished the chapters were longer! But, I like where this is headed!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/15/12 1:01
Chapter: Chapter 5

Hmmmmmmm...... I want to know more!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/15/12 0:57
Chapter: Chapter 4

I love Severus! :) and I love how you wrote him!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/15/12 0:53
Chapter: Chapter 3

Yay! This is a review- I like it and I'm going to continue reading!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/15/12 0:44
Chapter: Chapter 2

Goodness! Still confused, but You have me hooked! Still reading...

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/15/12 0:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm just as baffled as Severus! But I'm going to keep reading! Yay!!!!

Reviewer: punch
Date: 06/19/11 14:34
Chapter: Epilogue

best story ever :)

Reviewer: iloveyou4ever
Date: 04/01/11 19:52
Chapter: Epilogue

I loved this soooo much! I have been reading it on my phone only took me like 7hours to read.(i took breaks because of school) your so creative! I love the mungos scene when you bring harry and ginny into your story. Very thought provoking on what he was going to do!!! I look foward to future writings from you!

Reviewer: Mrs Cedric Diggory
Date: 02/04/11 15:03
Chapter: Epilogue

You are a great author and I greatly look forward to any other stories you publish on here.

Reviewer: Mickeyjuly
Date: 01/13/11 18:05
Chapter: Epilogue

This is a beautiful ending... I was sobbing the entire way through the epilogue.

Also, the song fit perfectly. It was destiny.

This story is a job well done. : )

Reviewer: Emerald Fox
Date: 07/28/10 23:24
Chapter: Chapter 43

The diction in this chapter is meticulous, and the story becomes extremely riveting...

Reviewer: Emerald Fox
Date: 07/28/10 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 42

This chapter was very moving.

Reviewer: lydiacsnape
Date: 03/23/10 21:46
Chapter: Chapter 12

I love it!!!!!!! I can't wait to find out who the blonde is!!!

Reviewer: lydiacsnape
Date: 03/22/10 11:36
Chapter: Chapter 10

I love your story. It's incredible, original, and creative. However, this is all I can read at the moment. I need to get some work on my fan fic :/

Reviewer: lydiacsnape
Date: 03/22/10 11:30
Chapter: Chapter 9

AH! Stupid, idiot Dark Lord! He can be such a pain in the arse sometimes!

Reviewer: lydiacsnape
Date: 03/22/10 11:09
Chapter: Chapter 5

This is AWESOME!!!!

Reviewer: lydiacsnape
Date: 03/22/10 10:55
Chapter: Chapter 2

This is a great beginning! I love it so far! I hope Severus gets his memory back!

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 03/04/09 12:40
Chapter: Chapter 26

I like the general plot of the story, its just that there's a lot of OOC dialogue from severus. For instance I highly doubt that severus would use the work fuck so excessively. He is dark, and demeaning, but he sounds almost too "American" and not as British as he should. Other than that its a great story. Just a little off on the dialogue.

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 03/01/09 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 5

Its excellent

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 03/01/09 13:45
Chapter: Chapter 3

Still good I am enjoying it. :)

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