Why are the chapters so short? I want to read this, and wished the chapters were longer! But, I like where this is headed!
Hmmmmmmm...... I want to know more!
I love Severus! :) and I love how you wrote him!
Yay! This is a review- I like it and I'm going to continue reading!
Goodness! Still confused, but You have me hooked! Still reading...
I'm just as baffled as Severus! But I'm going to keep reading! Yay!!!!
best story ever :)
I loved this soooo much! I have been reading it on my phone only took me like 7hours to read.(i took breaks because of school) your so creative! I love the mungos scene when you bring harry and ginny into your story. Very thought provoking on what he was going to do!!! I look foward to future writings from you!
You are a great author and I greatly look forward to any other stories you publish on here.
This is a beautiful ending... I was sobbing the entire way through the epilogue.
Also, the song fit perfectly. It was destiny.
This story is a job well done. : )
The diction in this chapter is meticulous, and the story becomes extremely riveting...
This chapter was very moving.
I love it!!!!!!! I can't wait to find out who the blonde is!!!
I love your story. It's incredible, original, and creative. However, this is all I can read at the moment. I need to get some work on my fan fic :/
AH! Stupid, idiot Dark Lord! He can be such a pain in the arse sometimes!
This is AWESOME!!!!
This is a great beginning! I love it so far! I hope Severus gets his memory back!
I like the general plot of the story, its just that there's a lot of OOC dialogue from severus. For instance I highly doubt that severus would use the work fuck so excessively. He is dark, and demeaning, but he sounds almost too "American" and not as British as he should. Other than that its a great story. Just a little off on the dialogue.
Still good I am enjoying it. :)