MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!
Reviews For Innocence Found

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 03/29/07 12:12 · For: Chapter 26
More fleshed out. The scene in Hasdrid's cabin, as well as Snape-Dumby. I know that neither was confronting their emotions, but it seemed like you were portraying the reactions rather than opening up whythey felt that way. Idon't know if that makes sense or not...

Author's Response: Well, Snape is not one to open up about his emotions, especially when he is hurt. So he wouldn't be likely to pour his heart out to Dumbledore. I tried to show rather than tell his emotions by the state of his rooms and him sending her all of her clothes and things--basically cutting her out of his life. As far as Camilla goes, at that point she didn't want to talk about it. In the next few chapters, I go into more of what each one is feeling and why. Thanks for your thoughts. : )

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 03/29/07 12:08 · For: Chapter 27
Interesting. And I'm looking forward to seeing Camilla's mother.

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 03/29/07 12:07 · For: Chapter 27
Interesting. And I'm looking forward to seeing Camilla's mother.

Author's Response: Yes, Camilla's mother is something else.

Name: bittersweety (Signed) · Date: 03/28/07 20:45 · For: Chapter 27
one word: amazing!
please, oh please, post more! i'm hooked on this story, seriosly- it is that good.
congratulations =D

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it!

Name: echopuppyluv (Anonymous) · Date: 03/28/07 16:53 · For: Chapter 27

Author's Response: More soon. : )

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 03/27/07 19:04 · For: Chapter 27
Her parents were realistic

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 03/21/07 14:34 · For: Chapter 26
This whole story has been amazing so far, I have loved it so! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!! Hope you post soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it! : )

Name: sarasmiles (Signed) · Date: 03/21/07 11:31 · For: Chapter 26
Again, this story is so fantastic, but you torment us by making us wait for more! The sign of an excellent author. I am so glad you decided to share your talent with the rest of us. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I'll update soon. : )

Name: teddy240b (Signed) · Date: 03/21/07 10:44 · For: Chapter 26
Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 03/20/07 17:42 · For: Chapter 26
I love this story! I think it is very true to charactere that Snape cannot forgive Camilla.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Will Snape be able to forgive Camilla? I'm not telling...

Name: AnneLea (Signed) · Date: 03/20/07 13:42 · For: Chapter 26
Ah but to give a review
Though you already have a hundred forty-eight!
So many for your eyes to veiw
And with an already overfilled plate!

Looks like my poetry's on par with yours. Love your storyline, though. It doesn't take very long to find in the mind exactly where you're at in paralelling the books, and you make it blend together so well!

Author's Response: Lovely poem. Ah, but one can never have too many reviews. Especially not for a review whore like me I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reviewing and for the poem. : P

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 03/20/07 10:42 · For: Chapter 26
I suppose that I'm greedy enough to say that it would be nice to see this chapter...in more depth.

Otherwise, loved it, as usual!

Author's Response: What do you mean by "in more depth?" Is there a part that you don't feel was fleshed out enough? Or it just wasn't long enough? I'm curious. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it! ; )

Name: Trickie Woo (Signed) · Date: 03/19/07 23:39 · For: Chapter 26
Now I see that she actually used no logic at all when she asked Eileen to make that potion, she just closed her mind to what she didn't want to hear or acknowledge.
I wonder what would have happened if Dumbledore had died of the curse (or whatever it was) that blackened his hand before that night. Would Severus be absolved of the vow? Would Draco be absolved of his task because the supposed victim was already dead?

Author's Response: You're right. Camilla was extremely distraught and irrational when she gave him the potion. She was desperate and had to try something to try to save him. Those are interesting thoughts. I'm guessing if Dumbledore had died of natural causes, Snape would have no longer been bound by the vow. There's an idea for an AU fic! Thanks for the review! : )

Name: Trickie Woo (Signed) · Date: 03/19/07 23:21 · For: Chapter 25
I'm glad to finally get to the gist of things and have explanations for what's going on and why. I can accept everything except for her logic for giving him the amnesia potion. From everything we know about 'He Who I Find Most Tiresome' it wouldn't matter if he couldn't remember the vow and what he had to do if Draco failed, Severus would have to step in and kill Dumbledore. If he didn't do it because he had no memory of the unbroken vow he would still die, either automatically because he broke the vow or if 'HW' AK'ed him. He would literally be a dead man walking.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I know it was a long time coming, but yes, you finally got some answers. And I think you will see in the next chapter about why she gave him the potion.

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 03/19/07 22:49 · For: Chapter 26
Great progression of the story, it is very beliievable. now if only snape will listen to reason.

Author's Response: Thank you! Snape's stubborn and has been betrayed. It won't be easy for him to forgive her, if he ever does...

Name: MorganRay (Signed) · Date: 03/17/07 19:07 · For: Chapter 4
The best part of this chapter for me was the first section where Camilla first goes to the kitchen and cannot sleep. After the past three chapters, this one is interesting because it focuses almost solely on Camilla. You've taken your time with developing her, which is good because it's left the reader (me!) in suspense. Here, you show us her former job and how she met Snape. This story could have gone horribly wrong because, frankly, IC Snape is just not the marrying type. However, you've crafted Camilla as someone strong, smart, and sassy, and if anyone can handle being married to Snape, I think she could.

Also, I liked how this chapter focused more on the character's thoughts for each other than on the action of the plot. Both of them seem equally nerveous to be around each other, but you've shown they each have an attraction for each other. Why DID Camilla marry Snape? I'm sure that'll get answered, but I find myself asking that question more and more as the story continues because you've had Snape ask that question to himself. Very good! I'm really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughtful and detailed review! I know that Snape married hard to wrap the brain around. But you're right, Camilla is a strong woman and is patient enough to put up with all his snark and stubbornness. There will be more flashbacks in which I show how their romance developed and how they ended up married. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I look forward to hearing more. : )

Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 03/17/07 13:45 · For: Chapter 25
Hey hun. I just wasted my entire morning/afternoon reading your story. (I even skipped lunch). It is PHENOMINAL!!! I can't wait until the next chapter is up. I hope it's soon. Good luck with everything!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have the next chapter in the queue! : )

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 1:06 · For: Chapter 25
That was really sad. It takes alot to move me to tears and you just did that. great story and great writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear it moved you like that.

Name: darklordjunior (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 6:59 · For: Chapter 25
that was great, really sad but great. when the next chapter coming? your story is absolutely awesome so far and i love it

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I should have the next chapter up soon. Thank you for the review!

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 03/02/07 13:22 · For: Chapter 25
I can see why it was so difficult, and now both of your main characters have painted themselves into corners that it will be difficult to get out of. I look forward to the remainder of your story. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, it was difficult to write, yet fun at the same time. Now things really get interesting for these two. As if they weren't already. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! : )

You must login (register) to review.