Reviews For Innocence Found
Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 12:56
Chapter: Chapter 19

A Severus fan and a fan of Friends, amazing. Funny how even in cyberspace, on a Harry Potter fan site, like finds like.
The party should be interesting from Severus' point of view.

Author's Response: Yay! We have things in common.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 12:47
Chapter: Chapter 18

Answers soon? Do you promise?
I would have to say he isn't as ticked off as I would be. But then again somethings don't translate to print as well as seeing or feeling it.
That wasn't a critique of your writing skills, just an observation. You are doing a great job with the story.

Author's Response: Answers coming soon! Severus is caught somewhere between extreme anger and confusion and exhaustion. Sometimes he's just too overwhelmed to be angry.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 12:42
Chapter: Chapter 17

Not knowing I had made a vow that could kill me would certainly tick me off just a bit. Honestly, what did they think they were going to gain by not telling him?

Author's Response: They thought they were protecting him. They didn't want to deal with it and thought he had enough on his plate. Stupid decision.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 16

Nasty shock on the horizon. Can't wait to find out how he deals with Narcissa.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough. : )

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 12:14
Chapter: Chapter 15

Letters, letters, letters. Stop with the letters already.
Nice foray into explaining how he escaped death after the return of Voldemort. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I can't stop with the letters. They're like flashing neon signs.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 12:06
Chapter: Chapter 14

Who is watching her?

Author's Response: You'll see...

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 9:52
Chapter: Chapter 13

Narcissa, the tramp, I really dislike that woman. But anyway, the trials and tribulations of love and marriage are many. Sometimes you hide things, and sometimes you come clean. I can only hope these two will come clean.
I am off to write some more of my own chapter, be back to read more of yours in a bit.

Author's Response: Narcissa is pretty horrible. They eventually come clean and it's not pretty.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 9:37
Chapter: Chapter 12

Very short chappy. But overall was a good one. Can't wait to find out who and what. Hermione does like to write long essays doesn't she?

Author's Response: Indeed she does. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/28/07 9:33
Chapter: Chapter 11

He seems so playful. That is just weird. Good but weird.
As anyone with personal experience of the subject can say, If you want to make a man mad and make him leave, just tell him there is someone else. Whether it is true or not, he will get angry and stalk off. Good job.

Author's Response: Especially someone like Severus who is jealous and insecure as hell. Thanks!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 22:32
Chapter: Chapter 10

For some reason I didn't think the flashbacks were that far back. I was thinking they were somewhere in the fifth year, not the fourth. Oh well.
The first scene in this chapter was disturbing. I know things like that happen in Voldemorts world, but I don't like to think about it.

Author's Response: Yeah, I figured Severus has seen plenty of things he'd rather forget.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 9

Fluffy, but did he really have to drop her on her butt? I think he would be a little more suave than that, even without his memory.

Author's Response: Yeah, but then what would be the comic value in that?

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 22:15
Chapter: Chapter 8

Severus has definitely lost his memory. I don't think he could be that playful normally. Very funny though.

Author's Response: He definitely wouldn't let very many people see his playful side, but I don't think it would be out of character for him to be playful with the woman he loves.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 7

Very funny, and just the thing a infatuated person would do to get noticed. It sounded just like Severus to leave her that way too. Good job.


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 6

I only dislike one thing about this story. The chapters are too short. I get to the bottom of the screen too fast when the chapters are this short.
Maybe Poppy can help him fix his memories. And maybe Camilla can help him fix the rest of him.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know a lot of the chapters are short. But I updated fast, so I figured it made up for it.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 21:55
Chapter: Chapter 5

Oh dear, I guess some things are coming back to him.

Author's Response: Indeed.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 21:50
Chapter: Chapter 4

Short chapter, but informative.
Rosmerta's cousin? Okay, but how does she know so much about his past?
Did he *gasp* open up and talk about himself? Oh will wonders never cease?

Author's Response: Yep, he finally found someone he could trust. Of course, she doesn't know everything but she knows enough.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 3

I wonder how he will apparate, if he can't remember where to apparate to.
Good chapter, but some things need to be explained, and some things need to be shown to Severus before he can do much. Unless it is just assumed that Dumbledore told and showed him the things he needs to do.
I guess the next chapter will tell me.

Author's Response: Dumbledore did tell him a lot and a lot of his magical abilities are still there.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 21:35
Chapter: Chapter 2

Of course he isnít a good man. But that doesnít stop me from thinking he isnít redeemable.
It didnít stop her marrying him either. I just hope her passing out was because she knows he canít go without his memories. Not because she didnít know he had it.
I wrote about two thousand words of my chapter, and then raced back to see how this one plays out. I canít wait to see if he goes.


Author's Response: Snape is definitely not a good man, but he does have redeeming qualities.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/27/07 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Remember Peeves, "Loony Loopy Lupin." I wonder what his reaction will be (if he is in this story) if he finds out Snape has no memory.
So far so good.
I placed it on my favorites, so I can come back to it. I have my own chapter to write right now.
I wil be back for more laughs, and reviewing.

Author's Response: I'm glad you found my story and thanks for reviewing! : )

Reviewer: HorseLover87
Date: 05/18/07 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 31

great story... i love the twists and turns.... post more chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! : D

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