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Name: HorseLover87 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/07 13:44 · For: Chapter 32
that was soooo good. it seems like severus wants her but is pissed at the whole situation. he's a very proud person. i really love your story and i can't wait for you to post more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, he totally wants her but his stupid pride gets in the way. Thanks for reading! : )

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 06/01/07 20:34 · For: Chapter 32
woah. what a powerful scene. amaizing!

Author's Response: Thank you! : )

Name: Her My Own EE (Signed) · Date: 06/01/07 16:20 · For: Chapter 32
Oh you mean mean author! I really wanted Camilla & Severus to go home together. Yes, because of the sexy part. :) But then it all went to hell. :( Will they ever be able to fix it?

Author's Response: I know. I'm efil. Don't worry; it's not over yet! : D

Name: HerEviLMajesty (Signed) · Date: 06/01/07 0:54 · For: Chapter 32
Wow, he's not one to be crossed, is he? Heehee..I feel terrible for Camilla, but I love Sevvie's anger. I wish Severus would've knocked Jon out though. I understand Jon is being protective of Camilla, but maybe I'm just biased towards Severus. Yes, my review is really random :D

Spectacular chapter. Definitely worth waiting for :) Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, I love angry/bastard Severus. He's just so sexy to me. I'm glad you liked this chappy!

Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 05/31/07 16:42 · For: Chapter 32
Absolutely Phenominal as usual hun. Keep up your fantastic work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! : )

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 05/30/07 19:38 · For: Chapter 32
I loved it... "does he make you moan?" ... that was bad....[in a good way]

Author's Response: Hee hee. He's such a bastard sometimes. But I love him anyway. Thanks! : )

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/30/07 13:43 · For: Chapter 32
Nasty and mean doesn't seem to cover it. Severus just can't seem to reconcile in his mind that she really does love him.
Lashing out in anger never solves anything. But so many people do it anyway. As I said, I hope things come right for them in the end.
Very good chapter, and I hope the next update comes soon.

Author's Response: Yes, he's convinced himself that she doesn't love him. After all, why should she? In his mind, he was never good enough for her anyway. It's easier for him to believe she's betrayed him. Then he can feel sorry for himself and be all bitter and angry, which is what he's used to. Thanks again for the review!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 23:53 · For: Chapter 31
I was reviewing as I was reading, so I didnít know you were responding that quickly. I wrote that silly poem as a joke in response to your poem asking for reviews. I wasnít complaining, I was just having a little fun.
As I mentioned, I was neglecting my own work, so I needed to be creative for a minute. Didnít come out worth a darn though. But it served its purpose. When I finished what you have posted I went back to work on mine, I am about six thousand words into chapter four. When I started reading your story, I stopped working on mine, because, there are certain similarities. Such as Severus Snape is a good guy!
Anyway, I left you a review on An Unexpected Gift last night, which I donít know if you have seen, I thought it was hilarious.
When this updates, I will return to read and I promise to review, review, and review.

Author's Response: Hey, no problem! I just didn't want you to think I was ignoring all your lovely reviews. I'm a review whore, so I love them all. I'll go take a look at your other review. Thank you so much!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 21:31 · For: Chapter 31
No flaming. Just wondering, Have you lost your damn mind?
Just tell me things come right in the end.
I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

Author's Response: It's not me! It's my evil and mentally unstable muse! I can't say anything about the ending but there's a lot more story to come. The next chappy's in the queue! Thanks for reading and reviewing! : D

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 21:25 · For: Chapter 30
You are mean, but I can honestly say things like that do happen. Completely innocent things get blown way the hell out of proportion and what can I say? Stuff happens.

Author's Response: Yeah, Severus jumped to conclusions. He saw what he wanted to see.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 21:17 · For: Chapter 29
I don't know how you are going to play this out, but I have the idea that they will reconcile. Maybe they can work it out.

Author's Response: Maybe...

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 21:08 · For: Chapter 28
Oh dear. I seem to say that a lot in my reviews to you. Anyway, I am glad Camilla has a friend, and that her mother was thwarted. Don't you just hate parents like that?

Author's Response: Yeah Camilla's mother is something else. And luckily, Jon enjoys sticking it to Catherine as much as Camilla does. : )

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 20:50 · For: Chapter 27
Marriage angst, ainít it fun?
You left a poem at the end of last chapter, asking for reviews. I have one for you asking for responses.
You say you want reviews
From us to you
But what do you do
You are smiling
While we are waiting
Oh donít leave us hanging
Leave us a response from you
Yes I know it is as corny as the one you left for us.

Author's Response: You're reviewing too fast! I can't keep up! Not that I'm complaining. I've responded to most of your reviews. Thank you!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 20:50 · For: Chapter 26
Why does Dumbledore stick his nose into everyones business? And the house elves. Why does everyone want to kick them?
I told you he would regret booting her out. Too bad.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 20:32 · For: Chapter 26
Why does Dumbledore stick his nose into everyones business? And the house elves. Why does everyone want to kick them?
I told you he would regret booting her out. Too bad.

Author's Response: Dumbledore is like the town busybody. He's always there when you don't want him to be. And house-elves are annoying. LOL. And of course he regrets it. He lost the best thing he ever had.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 20:24 · For: Chapter 25
I liked her, and I thought they were good together. But some betrayals are too much to overcome. He could probably get over her actions at some point. But what he has done is so much worse. No woman in her right mind would return to a man that took that much delight in telling her about sleeping with another woman. Too bad, he had it good.

Author's Response: I agree that his actions were way worse than hers. He felt betrayed and wanted to hurt her the way she hurt him. But being Severus, he took it to the extreme.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 20:15 · For: Chapter 24
I thought the letters were from Severus' mom, from what you have written here, I would have to say that I am right.

Author's Response: No comment.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 19:35 · For: Chapter 23
I love that you use parts of the HBP that were alluded to, but not written. the scene outside the hospital ward where Hagrid tells Harry and Hermione about hearing them in the forest. Still doing a great job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for all the reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate your constructive feedback. I know a lot of these chapters are really short. This is my first chaptered fanfic so at first, I had no clue how short I was making the chapters. The later ones are longer. Anyway, I'm glad you found my story and yes you will get answers soon! : D

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 19:25 · For: Chapter 22
I keep neglecting my own story to come back here and read more of yours. I have only written about five thousand words since I started reading this. I either need to finish this one quick, or finish my chapter quick.
I think I will keep reading for now. Are the letters Camilla keeps getting, from Severus' mother?

Author's Response: Sorry to distract you from writing! But I'm glad you're liking it. : )

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 13:12 · For: Chapter 21
Okay, I have that out of my system.
I wish someone, hopefully J.K. will do it, but I wish she would just die and go away!

Author's Response: You're not alone in that dream.

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