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Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 06/29/07 17:07 · For: Chapter 37
Figures it would be Bella. That *$@#&. You have done another fantastic job, and I hope they find a way to rescue each other. Her from Bella and him from anyone who see him coming and tries to either kill or capture him.
The only critique I have is Bella is a whole lot nastier than you are writing her. She wouldíve used the Cruciatus Curse a few times before resorting to the Imperious. She and Voldemort would make a wonderful couple, as they both enjoy torture so much. Too bad sheís already married to Rodolphus. Of course them being who they are they would just kill him to get him out of the way.
I really hope you get all of your chapters up that you need to before the queue shuts down. I am enjoying the story and the new chapters as they come and am looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make her evil and nasty, but I guess she could have been worse. Her intention was to find Severus. She takes pleasure in the Cruciatus, but at that point she was kind of on a mission. Thanks for the critique. : D

Name: Love_Sirius55 (Signed) · Date: 06/29/07 14:16 · For: Chapter 37
No! Don't go Severus!! Oh but you have to save her, think of something, please! ( Write MORE!!!!!!)

Author's Response: Thanks! More soon. : D

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 06/28/07 19:50 · For: Chapter 36
Now, who would want to Stun Camilla?

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've been swamped. I still love this story. :D

Author's Response: Who indeed. I'm glad you're back! :D

Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 06/26/07 15:54 · For: Chapter 36
I think I may actually cry.... not because i'm sad... not because Cam was attacked... but because you have official made me want to check my email a million times a day until the next chapter is up... Fantastic as usual hun!!!!

Author's Response: Well, thank you sweetie! I will have more for you soon. : D

Name: MinnKota (Signed) · Date: 06/26/07 9:33 · For: Chapter 36
Can't wait to see who's got her!! I'm hoping for a daring rescue... ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! More on the way. : )

Name: real_life (Signed) · Date: 06/26/07 8:21 · For: Chapter 36
Next chapter, please!

Author's Response: I'll have more for you soon. : D

Name: charlie black (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 23:37 · For: Chapter 36


Author's Response: LOL. I'm on it!

Name: CowGirlHPFan (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 22:55 · For: Chapter 36
AHEM!! Hello again,I know I already reviewed,but i was thinking about your story and some songs came to mind,(Gretchen Wilson:When I think about cheatin' ,Keith Urban:Tonight I wanna cry,and Daughtry:It's not over.)OKAY,so the first two songs are country,(TODAYS COUNTRY,As I'm ALWAYS telling everyone!! I like country music,hense the penname,Kind of.) and the last is rock,I'm not into rock though,this is pretty much the only one I like.Anyways when I was thinking about your story,I thought about all the pain each of them(Camilla and Serverus) went through seperated and these songs sort of came to me. I hope you listen to them,they made me think about they're different point of veiws during there relationship(or lack of one at times). Thanks for reading my review,if you have, :) *~*CowGirlHPFan*~* P.S. 275th?

Author's Response: Okay, thanks. I love Daughtry. I'll have to check out the other ones.

Name: CowGirlHPFan (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 20:09 · For: Chapter 36
WOW!!! You have somehow managed to get me to tolorate,no LIKE this story.This is no small feat, and should not be taken lightly,i'm a hard person to persuade,(in Harry Potter at least).There for Congratulations' are in store,CONGRATS.Though i hate the ,um,more passionite way they(you know who i'm talking about) act,(the Really adult things)I suppose it is nessesary.Like I said few SS/ENYONE stories have I read,and even fewer have I liked.Now that i'm don't critizing I can talk about the story(Which is in my favorites).I thought your story was great!!!! I loved everything about it (Um,most of it?) And hope you UPDATE! Also if Narcissa,Bella,and Wormtail Died,I would be extremely Happy!! Camilla should be united with snape too,AND they both live! PLEASE?Sorry about the HUGE review,(I didn't write you eny other ones),and like most people i'm extremely angery/sad about Jesse Davis's body being found dead. Lastly PLEASE UPDATE!!!! If you eeven read this REALLY long letter I'd like to say thanks for posting it so we could read it and I hope you keep your promise(Word?) and finish by July21!!!! your dedicated reviewer, *~*CowGirlHPFan*~*

Author's Response: Well, I'm really glad you like it. I'm really trying to update as fast as I can to beat the July 21 deadline. Thanks for the review! : D

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 17:12 · For: Chapter 36
Just hurry with the next post! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon! : D

Name: HorseLover87 (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 14:32 · For: Chapter 36
that was a great cliffie at the end and i can't wait for more. i'm gonna guess that snape stunned her and wants to talk with her, or it was bellatrix (that ho) trying to bait snape.

Author's Response: Thank you! Can't say anything yet, but thanks for the review. : D

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 9:25 · For: Chapter 36
As much as I enjoy this story and the look into the different side of Severus, and his marriage, I really like Jon. I am glad you gave him someone to make him happy. Camilla feeling like she had been replaced was really good; she wants him to still be there for her when she needs him.
Almost a year since she saw him? Yeah thatís love all right. No one would wait that long just out of stubbornness.
Rosmerta still having the guiltís that long after was a nice touch. I think anyone that is inherently good would have to feel guilty for quite a while when something they do, whether or not they know they do it or not, has caused that much pain and suffering. Camilla trying to talk her around and bringing her chocolates is really sweet.
Please tell me your cliffie means that Severus is there and will explain things to her. I can only hope and wait for the next update, because I know you arenít going to tell me. Oh well something to think about and stew over until the next one. I just thought about that and think maybe itís Narcissa wanting the curse lifted, sheís had it for a year now. I would rather hope itís Severus.
Great chapter and if you couldnít tell from the previous bit, I loved it. Very well done and emotional.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Jon. He's a good guy. I know a lot of people don't like him because he seems to get in the way of Camilla and Snape, but Jon's awesome. If he were real, I'd so date him. LOL. Yes, it's been a year now. But we don't know where Snape is or what he's doing or if he's even alive still. I'm glad you liked the bit about Rosmerta. I couldn't imagine waking up and finding out someone had been controlling you and making you do horrible things. That's not something you get over easily. You're right; I can't tell you anything, but you're close. : D

Name: Trickie Woo (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 4:16 · For: Chapter 36
Well at least it was a jet of red and not green, so it couldn't have been an AK. I figure it must be Pttigrew or Bella, they want to use her as bait to trap Severus.

I hope you kill them off, they are nothing but evil terrorists and, like all terrorists, they don't deserve to live. All the faithful Death Eaters are terrorists so they deserve to die too. 'He Who I Find Most Tiresome' is their Bin Laden. He should be killed in some way that he would feel defiled and humiliated him, that would be the most painful death he could suffer. To do that for Bin Laden the best way would be to smother him in pork products or have an enraged sow sit on him and crush him to death. For 'HW' I'd import a Muggle to do the honors, namely, Ash from Army of Darkness. He could use his chainsaw, or his gun, or his Olds. Whichever one he used it would be a Muggle killing him with something from Muggle technology, a humiliating. Once all the Horcruxes are destroyed that would work because 'HW' would have nothing left to use to come back to, what he calls 'life'.

My husband has had Fox News on all day and when the police announced that they had found Jesse Davis's body it triggered blood lust in me. I'm trying to channel it to those I feel most deserve to have blood lust used against them.

Author's Response: That's a very good guess on who came for Camilla. I saw that on the news, too. It's so sad.

Name: Love_Sirius55 (Signed) · Date: 06/21/07 9:10 · For: Chapter 35
Oh Camilla, Jon loves you so, and frankly I like him better than Snape, but, if you must, you must. Post the next chapter soon please. : )

Author's Response: Jon is probably better for her, but the heart wants what it wants. Thanks for the review! : D

Name: Love_Sirius55 (Signed) · Date: 06/20/07 22:01 · For: Chapter 25
Yes, Go to Hell Snape. ( and unless you make up for it in future chapters, burn.) * Bursts into tears and runs from the room*

Author's Response: Aw. D: Poor Camilla and poor you. *pets*

Name: Love_Sirius55 (Signed) · Date: 06/20/07 21:10 · For: Chapter 17
Oh no he didn't
*Yes he did*
NO! He didn't do it, I just imagined it.
* No you didn't* Shut up Brain! Severus didn't just curse, at Dumbledore.
*Whatever you say......but he did...*

Author's Response: Oh yes he did, girlfriend! I'm sorry, but Dumbledore deserved it. :D

Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 06/20/07 8:59 · For: Chapter 35
You are going to kill poor Cam before this is over... Absolutely phenominal as usual.... I can't wait to see what Bellatrix is up too.... that wench.

Author's Response: LOL. Thanks!

Name: Trickie Woo (Signed) · Date: 06/20/07 2:00 · For: Chapter 35
I'm puzzled about whats going on. The flashback with Bellatrix and Pettigrew. I can't figure out how that fits in, I'll be waiting for the next chapter so I can figure out things a little better.

I do have a question though, why didn't she just use a drying charm on her clothes after she took her shower? It would have made her feel a lot less awkward.

Author's Response: Well, the flashback with Bella and Wormtail will become clear later on. And yes, she could have used a drying charm, but then she wouldn't have been able to walk around in his robe. *wink*

Name: HorseLover87 (Signed) · Date: 06/18/07 16:42 · For: Chapter 35
that was great! jon is great for camilla, but i kind of had the feeling that she wouldn't go to him. And Bellatrix is delightfully nasty. She is just like she is in the books.

Author's Response: I love Jon. I know a lot of people don't like him, but I just want to give him a big hug. And I love Bellatrix too. She's so efil and fun. Thank you!!!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 06/18/07 13:47 · For: Chapter 35
Bella is definitely up to no good, but when has she ever done anything good? Peter in animagus form would still be noticable with the silver hand, paw, whatever you would call it, so why does Bella think he wouldn't be noticed?
Camilla found something to help her keep faith in Severus, that was really good. And I like that you didn't have her remove the curse from Narcissa. She needs a little pain and a blow to her vanity for all she has put others through.
I hate that you are torturing poor Jon though. He seems like a nice guy, and Camilla should either leave him alone or forget Severus. I think she will continue to love Severus, so that means she will probably continue to torture Jon until she doesn't need him for anything else.
This chapter was a good one and I hope the next one will show where he is hiding, and bring them back to where they belong. Not that I want the story to be over, but the suspense is killing me here.

Author's Response: Camilla definitely doesn't mean to torture Jon. She needs him and she doesn't really realize that he's in love with her just yet.

Author's Response: Camilla definitely doesn't mean to torture Jon. She needs him and she doesn't really realize that he's in love with her just yet.

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