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Name: Aderyn Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:37 · For: Chapter 43
No dear, you are the best!


Name: Aderyn Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:37 · For: Chapter 43
No dear, you are the best!


Name: Aderyn Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:37 · For: Chapter 43
No dear, you are the best!


Name: Aderyn Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:36 · For: Chapter 43
No dear, you are the best!


Name: Aderyn Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:36 · For: Chapter 43
No dear, you are the best!


Name: Aderyn Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:32 · For: Chapter 35
My dear,
this is really great!



Name: Aderyn Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 8:41 · For: Chapter 37
Dear Accio_ Brain:

This is one of the greatest stories that I had read

Keep going!!!

Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 08/16/07 16:34 · For: Chapter 44
I think this was one of your best chapters yet. :)

Thanks, as always!

Author's Response: That's great to hear! Thank you!

Name: Sabine (Signed) · Date: 08/16/07 12:01 · For: Chapter 44
That was like a rollercoaster ride. I'll keep my fingers crossed that he is going to make it.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, there's still hope.

Name: I_solemnly_swear (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 16:47 · For: Chapter 44
Yes! Harry knows how to save him! What about just shoving a Bezor or however you spell it, down his throat? It should work, right? But if the magic was too Dark it wouldn't... but it did help Ron that time... ok, anyway, he has to live!

Author's Response: Well seeing as Snape created the potion, he would have made it so a bezoar wouldn't have been effective. Thanks for reading!

Name: oddmentandtweak (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 10:47 · For: Chapter 44
I hope you continue this soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more soon.

Name: kayla452 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 10:00 · For: Chapter 44
I love this story please update SOON!

Author's Response: I will. Thank you!

Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 6:07 · For: Chapter 44
Oh huni... you made me cry and it's 7 o'clock in the morning... That was absolutely fantastic... I just hope that Harry will pull something out of his sleeve.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: kingdombasses (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 22:43 · For: Chapter 44
at one point, i sort of had all the wind knocked out of me while i was reading- and that only happens the first time through something like that. i'm not going to say how great that was, or how i enjoy your writing (though it was, and i do)- i'll say more- that was amazing!

the only thing I thing I have against that is this: I think you should elaborate more on Camilla's feelings- when she cries, it doesn't feel extremely different from what she's been doing throughout the whole story (no offense)- not that that's bad- but I think there should have been more emphasis on her feelings, rather than her physical reactions. If you've lost loved ones before (and I'm sorry if you have), then you should know what I'm talking about.

Other than that SMALL thing- i can only add- if Sev doesn't make it, I will (how did you put it earlier in the story?)... *come at you with a pitchfork*. well.. no- but i'll be very very sad. So please (PLEASE)- "embrace that most ancient and noble of *Disney* traditions"- a happy ending.

thx so much for this story! I love it! keep it coming, please please please!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I see your point about Camilla's feelings. I kind of thought the same thing when I reread it. So I appreciate the constructive feedback. Pitchforks! Not again! I'll have more soon. : )

Name: CowGirlHPFan (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 20:49 · For: Chapter 44
OMG,OMG,OMG!!!!! THAT SCARED ME SO BAD!!! When I thought he DIED I literally ALMOST CRIED!!!! (I don't cry during storys,so that means A LOT that I almost did),Please,Please,please UPDATE again soon!!! Waiting with baited breath, *~*Sarah*~*

Author's Response: Aw, sorry to scare you! But I guess I achieved the desired effect. I will update soon. : )

Name: tonks and lupin (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 20:42 · For: Chapter 44
oh man this is soooo intense i love it please keep the chapters comming!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 19:06 · For: Chapter 44
Whatever Harry is going to do, he needs to do it soon. I really don’t think Severus will make it much longer. That potion has to have an antidote. I refuse to believe it doesn’t.
Didn’t Severus say he invented that potion? If so, wouldn’t the ‘recipe’ be in the Half Blood Prince’s copy of Advanced Potion Making? Then it should stand to reason, the antidote is in there as well.
I hope Harry is going to the Room of Requirement to retrieve his book.
I am probably wrong about this, but it does make a nice theory doesn’t it? Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter, and I hope Camilla wakes up to her husband still alive. And I hope Jon can hold off the other Aurors for a little bit longer.
Update again quickly, PLEASE!!!! I need to know what is going to happen.

Author's Response: Thank you! You're right in that what Harry's going to do has to do with the potion. I will update soon. : )

Name: MinnKota (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 19:01 · For: Chapter 44
I'm really enjoying your story...although you are truly diabolical with these cliffies. ;) Post again soon...please!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Diabolical...heh heh heh. I like that.

Name: MinnKota (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 8:24 · For: Chapter 43
Love where this is going...screw canon!

Author's Response: Amen! Thanks for reading! : )

Name: I_solemnly_swear (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 22:47 · For: Chapter 43
Oh, that's so sad! I feel so bad for Camilla! Severus is the bravest man I know and now this is happening to him! Now Hermione's gone and Ron is too? Poor Harry! Continue posting and I'll continue reading. Lovely story, honestly. Severus needed to be loved.

Author's Response: Thank you! Poor Camilla's been through a lot, hasn't she? I didn't say the brother was Ron. Ginny's got a lot of brothers. I agree that Severus definitely needed some love in his life. That's why I wrote it! : )

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