Reviewer: Sucker4nethingHP
Date: 08/06/07 0:51
Chapter: The Dark Mark

i thought you had stopped updating after chapter 5 and had, in annoyance, removed you from my favorites. but now you're back! yippee!

Author's Response: You're speaking of my year long hiatus. Sorry about that. I intend to pursue this to finish now :) thanks for the review

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/05/07 23:39
Chapter: Loredana

Aww, I thought Draco was falling in love again... and that it was mutual. I guess that's where the vodka comes in.

Author's Response: tee hee, this relationship has been a riot for me to write. I hope you enjoy the way it continues.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/05/07 23:04
Chapter: Neville

butt that is regardless ---- In each chapter, there are little mistakes that I catch. I think in the last one, Floo was spelled with 1 as the L: F1oo. I just thought I would point that out. The story is getting interesting too.

Author's Response: wow, thanks. I'll have to check back on that. That is a very silly error for me to have made *smacks self*

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/05/07 22:30
Chapter: Prologue

so so might be hooked


Author's Response: thanks for the feedback :) I was wondering what impression the intro left, so thank you very much.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/05/07 22:10
Chapter: Draco

Haha! I didn't expect that!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/05/07 21:59
Chapter: Prologue

Good, very good. Nice way for Draco to change sides, for his love for someone else. Good start.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the beginning

Reviewer: Ginny_Luvs_Malfoy
Date: 08/05/07 20:12
Chapter: Prologue

hooked

Reviewer: xxdarkangelxx
Date: 08/05/07 11:01
Chapter: The Dark Mark

is the dark lord coming back?/.. whens the next chap?

Author's Response: Teehee. I'll try and get the next chapter up before too long.

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 08/05/07 2:31
Chapter: The Dark Mark

I love how you depict Draco, it's so realistic...and angsty. I like angst. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying Draco's angstiness. :)

Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 07/19/07 1:58
Chapter: Prologue

I'm hooked! Excellent prologue, I can't wait to find out the answers to the questions brought up when reading this- like who is this Tania? Very interesting but not confusing. Using sectumsempra which Draco learned from Harry was very good- only small criticism is in this sentence: "A long line appeared across Luciusí chest..." The word line doesn't seem descriptive enough. You do mention blood coming out of it later but at first it doesn't seem clear if it's a cut or perhaps something drawn on his chest etc.

Anyway, it's great and I'm off to find out what happens!

Author's Response: Hmm, thanks for the mention about the line. When I get a chance I'll take another look at that and see if I can improve that part. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story so far, and hope you continue to read. Thanks for the reiview! -Merlynne

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 18:11
Chapter: Loredana

Interesting

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 17:55
Chapter: Lucius

Spooky

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 17:35
Chapter: Neville

Interesting

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 17:24
Chapter: Viorel

I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 17:18
Chapter: Goyle

It's great!

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 17:11
Chapter: Meleia

This is great!

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 17:00
Chapter: Pansy

I'm completely hooked!

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 16:49
Chapter: Draco

I love it. Such rich characters!

Reviewer: emma_harrisford
Date: 07/18/07 16:40
Chapter: Prologue

Completely hooked. You're a very gifted writer. Extremely well written. Your words sing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review *blushes*

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 07/12/07 13:19
Chapter: Witches

You continue to do a great job!!!

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