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Name: KneazleWeazl (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 19:53 · For: Pansy
Aw, Pansy died. I still don't like her.

Name: KneazleWeazl (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 19:46 · For: Draco
EW! I didn't think even Pansy would go that low.

Author's Response: Hahaha. Well, she couldn't get Draco, so one of his mates would have to do. Thanks for the review. :)

Name: KneazleWeazl (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 19:39 · For: Prologue
Nice. Very dark.

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 19:21 · For: Pansy
Oh poor Pansy. It makes me sad, even when the bad people die. And she died in child birth, not even doing anything wrong. Meleia isn't very nice attacking a pregnant woman.

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 17:58 · For: Draco
Haha, that's a bit of a slap in the face, even for Draco. I like how you don't put in exactly how the last battle went down, keeps it from making your story AU.

Author's Response: That was my goal, even though events STILL don't exactly line up, I hope it's enough from turning people off reading just because I unfortunately started this before DH. Thanks for the review!!

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 16:25 · For: Prologue
Oh, so hooked. Plus I'm a huge Draco fan, I always knew he was alright, deep down. I'm so glad Jo didn't kill him off. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters!

Author's Response: I was also thrilled when he wasn't killed off. It made my story less AU. I'm glad you're hooked. I hope you enjoy the rest, and thanks for reviewing!

Name: La_Rubinita (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 16:14 · For: Family
Wow, you just got me all kinds of excited... What is Meleia doing with Draco? Not that I didn't secretly hope for it, but I'm confused! It would be mean for her to play with Draco like that. And you just can't kill Blaise. I like your Blaise. Please hurry and update you plot-twisty extraordinaire :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're excited! I certainly was when I wrote this. I hope you'll enjoy the next series of twists. Thanks for the review!

Name: I_solemnly_swear (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 14:30 · For: Family
I'm a little confused now. But I think I know what's going on. This is getting interesting, I hope you continue to post frequently! =D

Author's Response: I plan on posting frequently :D I hope the next chapter un-confuses you. Thanks for the review!

Name: undrtkr (Signed) · Date: 09/02/07 10:17 · For: The Black Letter
excellent.cant wait to see where this goes
keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Name: GryffKat (Signed) · Date: 08/30/07 23:21 · For: The Black Letter
I like the story. I find Dracoís redemption satisfying. You have made his switch to the other side interesting because while he is able to have meaningful relationships with some Order members, (coming to respect Neville and regretting never telling him along with his drinking buddy, Zacharias Smith) he still admits to some old grudges. This makes your characterization of a post-Hogwarts War Draco one that has realistic dimension. You use good imagery and your dialogue is strong. I like a long story, and I came to read this one as the summary was intriguing and it had some length. Certainly the Meleia storyline and the coming war storyline will keep me tuned in (just who is Anderson anyway?). One bit of constructive criticism, if I may? You have some typos, tense errors, and grammatical errors that donít seem like character jargon. Maybe a closer proof read is in order? I am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your fabulous review. I'm sure I have some typos. I'll see if I can go over and nitpick a bit better. I'm really glad you enjoyed Draco's character. I really wanted to portray, realistically, a "good" Draco--but still an in character Draco. Thanks again for taking the time to give such a great review -Merlynne

Name: bstybyz (Signed) · Date: 08/27/07 15:58 · For: The Black Letter
was wondering why i cant get to the next ch. cuz this is one of my favz and i'd lik to read the next ch. thanks reply at bstybyz3@yahoo.com thanks:):):)

Author's Response: The next chapter hasn't been validated yet :P Once the mods OK it, you'll be able to read it no problem.

Name: I_solemnly_swear (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:07 · For: The Black Letter
Cause it's one, two, three strikes your out! She is having too many run-ins with vampires lately. At least she got away. It would be horrible if she was actually bitten. Is there a potion of vampires like Wolfsbane is for werewolves?

Author's Response: I'm thinking similar, but obviously not the same because the species have little in common. But we'll find out...or we may never have to find out. Wait and see. :) Thanks for the review.

Name: Sucker4nethingHP (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 3:01 · For: The Black Letter
yay. now i want more.
i think she should be vampirized :D

Name: La_Rubinita (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 1:37 · For: The Black Letter
Hmm...interesting. As always, I loved Draco's part. I think it's too bad that Narcissa died, though. I like her. What's going on with Meleia?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you continue to read :D Hopefully the next few chapters satisfy your questions about Meleia. :P

Name: Voldemort45 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 14:05 · For: Prologue

Author's Response: How so?

Name: Voldemort45 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 14:01 · For: Prologue

Name: Jameswys (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 22:38 · For: The Dark Mark
Wow, that was very intresting. Anderson is trying to fight a large scale war. I didn't realize he was going to go that open. It was well written as always.

Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The next chapter should be up any day now.

Name: I_solemnly_swear (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 12:26 · For: Witches
The worst part of it all was Dracoís acknowledgement that the green-eyed witch really had him. --- Aww, that's so sad! Draco needs to have someone to love and have that person return it! Hopefully this all works out.

Name: Ryligh Christine (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 2:51 · For: The Dark Mark
This is amazing but i hope that it doesn't just stop here! ahh that would be painful!

Author's Response: Oh, I've got chapters a plenty stashed and still unwritten. There'll be more to come before too long. Thanks for the review.

Name: charlie black (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 1:08 · For: Prologue
Hooked. Definately hooked.

Author's Response: I'm very glad. Thanks for the review

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